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A good chapter. Yes. Why break in, handcuff the big guy, ignore the small one and go straight for the kid? Who was this guy and why did he do what he did, rhe way he did?
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That was beautiful 😍
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That was super sexy. Well written and easily visualized lol.
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I really enjoyed a change in narrator. The characters are becoming more and more real. I'm enjoying the story. Thank you.
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Meet the Family - Part 2
Doha commented on Late to the party's story chapter in Meet the Family - Part 2
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Meet the Family - Part 1
Doha commented on Late to the party's story chapter in Meet the Family - Part 1
Loving this. Alex and Nicolo are a great couple. Looking forward to seeing how the rest of the famiglia take to Alex. -
The plot thickens. Loaded guns, checking the house, reloading in the kitchen. I have taken to these boys already, the son, the mini-dad and the giant.
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A great start. I'm interested to see who this chap is that has a gun and a son and a bed partner. A super hook. 👌
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George is a magnificent protagonist. He is kind yet firm, gentle but ferocious when he needs to be. He remains my all time favorite on GA. I believe that Matheus is going to play an important role jn George's life. Fate put them in each other's way. Let's see. I'm sure that The Carholic tenants will be well compensated. George is an honorable man and will not allow his tenants to be mistreated. Let's see what his solution will be. Mark, thank you! Happy 4th of July.
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Chapter 22: Dangerous Druggies
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 22: Dangerous Druggies
Dirk and Justin are a super couple. I'm glad they found each other after being friends and partners first.- 20 comments
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Chapter 21: Conspiring Chairman
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 21: Conspiring Chairman
I am loving this story. I hope we will meet Kaplan's parents. Rhey have missed some monumental milestones in their son's life and development. Kaplan is a a thoroughly decent man and a wonderful mate for Cyrus. So more vampires in the mix. A pushy one too. Let's see how Cyrus takes Mr Tilliman. Harold has certainly annoyed a lot of powerful people. -
George needs to grow up a bit. There is a war going on. Both he and Carl are doing their bit, albeit in different ways. Perhaps the chat with the doctor has opened his eyes a little to the true nature of love choosing you, rather than the other way around. While he hates the idea, I think he is realizing that it is out of his hands. I do hope George finds his way to Carl, losing all the baggage he has accumulated along the way.
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Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
Doha commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 11 - One Day at a Time
Well thank you for this story James. It is wonderful reading about people who could be real, rather than the bigger than life characters we find in some fiction. I think Puppy will have the time he needs to figure his life and dreams out. Steven too, I hope. Also Hunter. I still have a soft spot for Hunter. We are all a little broken. Thank you again. -
Chapter 10 - It's Got to Stop
Doha commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 10 - It's Got to Stop
I'm glad that Steven and Puppy are going to have the space they need to be themselves together, but not TOGETHER. I think it is important that Puppy have a break from guys for a bit and get his life sorted. -
Chapter 10 - It's Got to Stop
Doha commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 10 - It's Got to Stop
Yes. In a few years time, they could certainly be together. They need to see a bit of the world first, particularly Steven. But in the fullness of time, they might be a great couple. -
The boyfriend and best friend being mates is not a bad idea. I hope Maddox can cope with that. I love the fact that Rusty can sing. The thug could turn into an opera star. Jonathan showed himself to be the true gentleman today. Well done to him.
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Delighted that D'gar is Weyrlingmaster. This will be good for the weyr.
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Well hooray!!! I hope they will be able to say the words that will go with the love they clearly feel for each other
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I am glad that Karl is going home. I wonder how he and George will get on and whether Arthur being there will effect Paul.
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George is finally being honest with himself. I hope he has the strength and character to approach Karl. Karl deserves someone who will love him. So does George, but he needs to clean up his game first. Fingers crossed.
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His maiden flight. Wonderful and he did so well. I'm proud of Karl.
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Paul's friend is dealing with the loss of Paul ti Emma. Karl, Juke and Jorgen are dealing with the loss, or potential loss, of family. And this is the nature of war - everyone loses. Perhaps Karl can be a reason for Paul's friend to live again.
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Karl will come to rerms with how broken Goerge is. Whether George wants to be any different or even whether he has the capacity for healing is unknown to us and unknown to Karl. Personally, I think Karl needs to move on from George. I hope he will find a loving, caring and stable man. It might be an older man like the Lieutenant General. Or someone his own age like Jorgen. He deserves to be loved and cared for.
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It is great to see our boys coming out of their shells and making friends. Also good to see J'rud again. Looking forward to kadin and Jevikel meeting D'gar properly. Thank you for writing and continuing to spread joy.
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Loving this. I hope Jonathan is able to do whatever it is he needs to do with his parents. He and Maddox as a great couple. I think Maddox' parents are going to be good for Jonathan.
