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  1. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 11

    Moms will sometimes make up excuses for their offspring and proceed to believe them to stay sane! Mike thinks himself dull and not special in any way, so to him it's just a matter of time. Maybe they're preparing for 2028 summer olympics in wresting? Any excuse is good. I'm only familiar with classical wrestling (even trained it for a bit in my early teens), WWE is an interesting concept for sure haha! But the allegations you mentioned make it less funny now I guess. Everything is fine with me, thank you! I wish I had time and focus to write more, but that is life. We're so back! I don't think the boys can stay undercover for too long. Some talks will need to take place, unless everyone just pretends to be blind (and deaf). Thanks so much, more is coming soon That's a good question and will be answered soon! A few mysteries left to be uncovered... it won't be long now. Thank you for reading! Pregnancy is one thing, but knowing that a room upstairs just turned into a house of pleasures could be unsettling to some parents, haha. They can either come to terms with it, or get that separate room ready for Mike asap. Let's see which will it be. I hope Maggie is merciful enough to NOT make a scene at the dinner table. The twins would mock Liam and Mike forever. The summer has really been hot in here, I think it accidentally transfers to my writing. Glad to send you anything needed if you cover the shipping costs! Next thing we know she may buy them wrestling suits and sign them up to a team! Taking notes frantically You're excused, this was such a tear jerker of a chapter, I don't want to contribute to deforestation so consider crying into something reusable! And we now need to hear about these memories, in prose or poetry, your choice!
  2. An elbow nudge at my side jolts me awake. Great. I dozed off during class. Again. Luckily, this time it was CJ who noticed, not the teacher. Now I see why Liam insisted that CJ sit next to me. I spot Liam across the room. Even from here, the first thing I notice are the marks of my fingernails under his t-shirt sleeves. I hope nobody asks any questions. Liam could probably come up with a convincing story, and I’m safe outside the suspect zone, but it still makes me flush. Liam’s eyes a
  3. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 17

    Hell yes! Poland is so underrepresented here, it's time to change it! There will be a new chapter for sure, obiecuję :))
  4. I'm only mildly excited about the pool party. The past few days have been a little crazy and I was hoping for a lazy afternoon, plus maybe to spend some alone time with Liam. The guys seem okay so far, but it will be a long time before I let my guard down and risk being myself with them. Liam calls his parents and they agree after he promises all homework will be done beforehand, we won't make too much noise and we'll be done at a reasonable hour. I can't believe Liam still has the nerve t
  5. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 9

    Almost there, folks sorry it took so long! It's coming mid next week for sure. Enjoy the Sunday!
  6. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 9

  7. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 9

    What just happened here??
  8. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 9

    Then allow me not to join in with my speculations. We already have enough of those. Thanks everyone for giving me very cruel ideas! Next chapter. Unless I change my mind.
  9. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 9

    I might not be as talented as Mike is, but our process is similar 🤭
  10. I stir, and for the first time since I was very little, I wake up being held by someone. There’s always this minute or two when I’m disoriented, coming back to my senses, and it takes me a while to remember what’s going on. I feel cozy, but my right arm is numb, so I stir some more to free myself. Liam mumbles something in complaint, but I think he’s still asleep. I check my phone. It’s a few minutes past seven. I groan and sit up. The bed is a mess, and my skin is covered with faint, crust
  11. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 3

    I'm feeling much better, thank you. Getting back to my routine takes a little time but I'm getting there! All good, just life getting in the way as always. And on't worry, soon you'll have enough of the twins if all goes according to plan ^^ I did, thanks so much, appreciate it. It was only a mild cold but it still had me take a break from staring at screens for too long. It leaves us with only one option - @John Henry is psychic!
  12. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 3

    Oh, I didn't know you guys get notified about updates, it was supposed to be a sneaky edit... there's a mention of a pool next to the house. It used to be inflatable, now it's a regular, medium-sized pool. That's it I've been on a vacation and then a bit sick, but there should be a new chapter very soon.
  13. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 7

    I spot a few cute Nigels 👀
  14. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 8

    1. Michael 2. Maggie 3. Liam 4. Patrick 5. Brody 6. Mike. Six people on board if my maths is correct So many chapters but it's been only a few days for Mike and the gang. The next day is Sunday, so hopefully this will give the boys more time to enjoy themselves. 3k-6k words chapters are the sweet spot for me and that's what I'll aim for. It's probably the combination of all of the above. I neglected the twins a little bit, maybe I should make some of their friends come over next time. No worries, I'll keep them coming!
  15. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 8

    There is absolutely zero evidence for Liam doing anything naughty in the shower. Maybe he just wanted to get extra clean?? They'll dry out in no time : ) I'm just a simple man, I apologize 😋 ALLEGEDLY! Short chapters like this will be an exception and not a rule. This part just didn't really fit into chapter 7 or 9. Also, I didn't want to keep the boys blue-balled for too long. It's been, what? Over 24 hours! There was a little bit of drama early on, but I agree - other than that I'm with Mike - Liam's folks seem pretty chill. Teenagers these days... they'll find a way to rebel against anything.
  16. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 7

    I just got up to speed with the comments. You guys never disappoint with your ideas, theories and insights. I love sitting down on a Sunday afternoon like this one and reading through them. A real highlight of my day, haha! I'm very thankful, and I wish I had more social energy to interact with everyone and other stories here... I'll try to do better! Keeping readers excited about a story is hard, but from my experience, keeping myself interested can be even harder! That's why I (almost) never do third person omniscient narration. I really admire writers who can do it well. Maybe it's a question of discipline. But yeah, I'm not going to change. At least we can all look forward to major reveals together :)) And thank you for the names suggestions. Since I don't live in an English-speaking country, I can never tell if a less common name sounds "right", old-fashioned, goofy, or just out of place. What I usually do, is that I google popular names at the time when a character was born. Fun fact, not a single person in the UK was given the name Nigel... since 2020! I can relate, because as popular as my real first name was in Poland in the late '80s, it's become pretty rare in the '20s. Inevitably, some names get labeled as "old people names" 😫. I really hate it. Anyway, thanks again for your contribution, I'm going to have to do a lottery, so stay tuned for the results to be revealed in future chapters
  17. I just lie there with my eyes open, listening to Liam showering. It's been a while. I wonder what he's up to. Is he getting ready for me? Or just taking his time? He's really taking forever. I glance at my phone and reply with a smiling emoji to Olivia, who randomly texted me just before Maggie and Michael came back home, shortly before midnight. They found us downstairs, watching a movie. Brody had already fallen asleep, leaning against Patrick's shoulder with his mouth slightly open. He didn’t
  18. I did not see this coming. So, so sad. I discovered his writing fairly recently thanks to @weinerdog, and I remember sinking in for hours and hours. Not many authors can match his immersive and emotional narration paired with captivating storytelling. I will miss his presence and grieve over his unfinished stories. End of an era.
  19. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 7

    Not literally, relax!
  20. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 7

    That's my secret. I let my characters surprise me. My guess may be an educated one but it's still a guess, and time afrer time it turns out to be wrong. And I love it! And it looks like he's starting to enjoy itm, even if he senses it's supposed to be Liam's job.. I'll try to give the twins someone to play with in the next chapter. And I do love Carol. Damn, you guys are making it a hard choice!
  21. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 7

    Thanks for noticing. My guess is that Liam just came up with this deal hmself to let Mike do things at his own pace. Not that his hints were very subtle, but hey, he tried. The twins are kind of self sufficient... and a bit annoying too. Their best friend was Liam, not so long ago. They totally should find a replacement. Or maybe...
  22. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 7

    Deep inside, Mike was torn that he couldn't be alone with Liam. But Maggie counted on him... True that! Mike doesn't want to appear disrespectful, and as much as he'd like to feel at home, his home is where his heart is, if you know what I mean. Fingers crossed things go just like you say they will :3
  23. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 7

    Abigail is already kind of taken but I do like it! Mike was taken too and then Liam's dad just snatched it for himself. Foster... I see what you did there. Liam York, Maggie York, Brody, Patrick, and Michael York. A strong contender.
  24. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 7

    Maybe stop working so much, eh?? Thanks so much, as always. I must be a very talented writer because half of the time I don't know what I'm doing. Like, any chapter I expect you guys to be like "whoa, that sucks. what happened?" Impostor syndrome much. Mike maybe likes to be subdued but he doesn't like to be controlled. If it makes sense. And he has a great sense of responsibility, even if it's just developing. This could be a little frustrating for Liam, who seems to be way more careless... let's see what happens next.
  25. Arch Hunter

    Chapter 7

    I do sense a pattern! though if I was to pick a side, if you know what I mean, I'd have to change Liam's name to Damon. I do like Tina! When it's finally going to happen... 🌋
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