Arch Hunter

I was lying on my bed with my laptop, well, on top of my lap. It was past 11 am and I was thankful to my family for letting me stay in bed for so long. I would rather expect them to wake me up at 8 or so and force me to help them prepare for our moving. They’ve been on it for a good while now, judging by the noises and occasional hollering. Me, I didn’t have a lot of stuff to my name. Apart from the bed and the desk, my room had a wardrobe, an electronic drum set, an acoustic guitar,

I had no idea where was this story going and I like the way it develops. Can't wait for chapter 3

"You've been great! Go home and take a shower. We are Black Fox." Cayden, our frontman, spoke his trademark line just like he did after every gig. We gathered at the front of the stage to bow to the audience. I threw my drumsticks at the cheering crowd and some lucky bastards got themselves a souvenir. I need to stop doing it; the good ones are bloody expensive. And it would cost me even more if I hit some poor bloke in the eye. There weren't more than 200 people at the small venue in Birmi

Owen's teen life changes a great deal after the overnight success of his music band, Black Fox. But in some ways, his love life specifically, it doesn't seem to move an inch. A surprise encounter at one of their gigs pushes him to take matters in his own hands. Hands are extremely important body parts for every drummer boy, right?

I never said I consider my English poor I have loved this language forever and I try to listen, read, speak and write it whenever I can. I just have no prior experience writing stories and I'm still learning to make it sound natural and native-like, even if it may never happen, haha. Thanks a lot for complimenting! I plan to start posting my new story around next weekend. I know, I know, it ended too soon. I got really attached to these characters as well and I'm happy to read you found their dialogues realistic. I never planned on that, but I will consider revisiting them in another series, if I come up with a good idea for it. It won't happen soon but it's possible. For now I want to focus on other stories and explore different themes and ideas. I'm so excited about writing right now!

Thanks so much! Makes me want to write a follow up to this story... maybe one day. I hope you like the next two chapters too!

There are episodes in life that are all fun and games, when the time flies unnoticeably. When you visit your grandparents in the countryside and have all the time in the world to play, read, cloud watch, draw and dream. At other times, days can be a struggle. It’s hard to wake up in the morning to face the upcoming day and your only desire is to somehow make it to the weekend. And when the Saturday morning arrives, you’re too tired to do anything substantial, worried by what’s about to come.

Thanks for commenting guys. I know things probably happened a little more quickly than they should but I really didn't want to drag my first story and was afraid it would get repetitive. It's better to leave the audience hungry for more rather than bored to death I know there's middleground but well... I hope it's not a huge spoiler that this was not the last chapter. i might have been wrong about the polish threesome but I'm definitely not disappointed lol Never say never! Next chapter please player... I'm a little disappointed that the sex did not escalate a little slower though I'm still very interested in maybe reading MORE. The story stands if you want to end it here, but please continue writing on this forum. You have something rare in how you write that I find really compelling. Maybe we think or feel in a similar way but the way you capture the character thought process and emotions really hits me. Thanks so much. As long as I'm getting such amazing feedback, I will continue writing forever. Writing this first story really taught me a lot. More coming soon!

The next morning after breakfast, we found ourselves on the road again. The weather was fine the entire stay so far but let me tell you, that day was scorching hot! The bus didn’t have any air conditioning and even though all the windows were open, the apathy was taking its toll on everyone inside. What’s worse, I was experiencing a food coma after eating scrambled eggs with sausage and was dozing off on Dennis’s shoulder. The moving bus felt like a giant cradle and I was having weird dreams, mi

I was pretty sure I'd have 2x more time and energy to write. While it was more or less true with time.. not so much with energy. You have to live life and gather experiences to come up with ideas.

I took more time than usual in the bathroom this morning. I made sure I reached every part of my mouth with the toothbrush. I examined my face in the mirror, looking at myself in a whole new light. I saw a boy who apparently was wanted and cared for. For the first time in my short life, I felt that I cared for myself. I examined my chest and my arms. While rather slim and petite, I wasn’t frail. I hated group sports but I loved biking and swimming. I was good at dodgeball, too. Well, partially a

Thanks for commeting guys... You know... A kiss is a big thing. Let's allow to build it up. As for David, I'm not giving any spoilers but it seems like the right moment to tell you what happened to the real-life David only a few months after these events. There was a new kid - Andrew - joining our class right after the summer break. And he was everything David ever wanted to be - handsome, smart!, brave and confident. He was a little bit of a bully but he wasn't an asshole. He just knew how to wrap everyone around his finger. Just a few days after he joined, there was a confrontation when David tried to maintain his position as the class alpha. And I swear. Andrew was sweeping the corridor with his body, holding David by his legs. I never felt so much sattisfaction. To make it even better, Andrew liked me because be both liked the same video games (we talked a lot about Baldur's Gate and Icewind Dale if you're interested). From then on, David became Andrew's lapdog and ass-licker. You won't find it in this story but it's just so you know what really happened Arch

The next morning wasn’t very nice. I was laying in my bed awake, staring at the ceiling, reluctant to get up, feeling nervous and confused. Nervous about facing the upcoming day and the dangers it presented. Confused by the thoughts and dreams that haunted me the entire night. When the lights went down, stripping me of any visual stimuli, my mind went racing. I saw Dennis naked. He was so hot. I started thinking about him and replayed the vision of his body in my mind over and over. I was ro

Hi Talo thanks for writing this awesome comment. The story is already complete and I assure you next chapters are better written and definitely more refreshing, haha. It's really important for me to write relatable stories with believable characters and I always pour some of my mind (and all of my heart) into them. So I promise it will never turn into a generic love story although some sappy moments might be ahead The story takes place when the protagonist only discovers his feelings and is hardly aware what it means to be gay. So the story may have a rather narrowed perspective, limited to what happens in Damien's teen head. But there might be more about post-communist Poland reality in my future stories. Generally, the first chapter is 95% true events, dramatised. Future chapters are mostly fiction. Thanks again for commenting!

I was crying. I wasn’t even trying to hold it back. Normally I would but this time, it was the only thing that I hoped could save me from the inevitable. The summer camp of ‘98 was just one week ahead and I was doing everything in my power not to go. As soon as it was announced, I just told my parents I'm not going and I was sure they would just accept it. That's not a big deal anyway, right? I thought it was up to me how I wanted to spend my summer vacation and the whole camp idea was near

Damien is a young, teen boy afraid of social interactions and struggling to accept his sexual orientation. Little does he know that he's about to face both his fears during the upcoming school camp...