Arch Hunter

Thank YOU! Yeah, I was on the fence whether to stop or continue. The story is mostly wrapped up, so you can consider it an alternate ending of sorts. Personally, I'm feeling Kevin is so proud of being with Dex that he just can't shut up about it, even if it can cause them trouble in the long run. At least he's considerate enough not to out Dexter without his permission. About that last part... guess we'll learn soon enough.

Now, where do I start? It's been a few days and I can already tell that the last weekend changed my life forever. Sarah did not kill herself, let me get that out of the way. Nor did anyone I told you about in this story. Despite what she and I have been through (or maybe because of it), we've been making attempts to start talking again. We've learnt way too much about each other to just reset our relationship but we started building the bond upon the conspiracy we were sharing. I sho

I can give this story nothing less than 5 stars because for what it is, it's almost perfect. It's uniquely slow-paced and lazy like a hot summer afternoon, but from the start there's a feeling like there's a storm brewing in the distance. It pacifies you with eloquent narration but somehow manages to keep you on the edge with everything that happens beneath the surface. And of course, there is Milo. It's hard for me to write more without going into spoilers. My only regret is that I didn't read it earlier!

Very well written, keeps getting better with every chapter. The narration and pacing are impeccable. The tension is surely there even if it's just started building up. There's something about the summer heat that affects the story mood.

Guess what... I might be scratching everything I wrote after the phone call with Torry in this chapter and carry on with the story for a little more. I had two more people point to me that the ending seemed a little rushed and I can't disagree. It's not a promise... It will only happen if I come up with something very good (I already started writing) but that's just a little heads up.

Thank you for reading! When I was marking this story as a comedy, I had second thoughts about whether anyone will actually laugh at this except for me. And thanks for joining Team Dex, you're in a great company, haha. Oh, and you have to admit the bi theme was heavily biased towards gay in this story. It's kind of hard to write about girls since I hardly ever think about them.

About that... It's not progressing at all xD I will probably write a few more stories and explore other themes before going back ti BF. But it's cute you remember it, thanks!

Thanks again for being there for me with every chapter! A good question. As I tried to show in this story, Torry didn't have it all under control as you might've thought. If Kevin didn't see the message, he would probably go on with Sarah for a while just to be even more disappointed once he discovers the truth later... Or maybe Torry would put a stop to this if Kev realised his feelings for Dex anyway. Thanks so much... I really appreciate every comment!! Haha, then you would probably be more satisfied with the original ending that I scratched. I deliberately left some ends open for interpretation. But I like to pretend to be a reader in the comment section, so if you feel anything in particular hasn't been addressed, let me know! Anyway, thanks so much for keeping up with my story... But! If you mean what I think you mean... well then I guess I agree that Sarah is the big loser of this story. It's pretty much addressed by Kevin in his phone call with Torry. There's no happy ending for everyone. Kevin and Dex are lucky but the rest still fall victim to Torry's manipulations... who knows how they're gonna cope.

I follow Sarah with my eyes as she's driving away in the taxi I called for her. Not exactly how I imagined my evening. It's completely dark now and I'm standing in the middle of the street, trying to wrap my head around it all. The yellowish, dim light coming from street lamps is at least somewhat cosy. This is a peaceful neighbourhood and apart from the car engine and a dog barking in the distance, it's almost completely silent. Despite all that, I never hear any footsteps approaching and

Thanks! I hope it all makes sense so far. I was afraid I'm overdoing it with the twists, ha! Thank you all for caring for young Dexter. He might be the last innocent soul standing in this show and he does deserve to be happy one way or another. And to think Dexter wasn't even there in my first draft of this story.... I agree, the rest can go to hell! But for real, Dex ❤️ Yp, Sarah doesn't have it easy these days. But that's what you get when you mess with forces you don't understand. To be honest, I think Sarah will need a proper break from relationships this time after what's happened. But we'll see, she's as young and horny as anyone else in this story. Interesting what you say about Torry. I thought he kind of redeemed himself when he said to James that he's actually doing it all for his young brother. His methods are terrible, though. Now that I think of it, most of what Torry's said in this story are lies. I'm not sure if we will ever truly know him. But I hear what you're saying about an ignominious (I didn't know that word) ending, maybe even taking notes. Thanks so much! I'm happy you appreciated it. I really was afraid I made it too confusing. More coming soon!

This comment below chapter two... good guess! I have no idea how you did it. I dropped some very subtle hints but they didn't come up until chapter 3 or 4. Chapter 4 comment. Very close, haha 🙌

Saturday comes and I go to the movies with Sarah. The movie sucks but I don't mind. We sit in the farthest row and we make out for the most of it. There are maybe a dozen more people in the cinema and most of them do what we do anyway. At one point, Sarah touches my dick through my jeans. I touch her boobs through her shirt. Then we make out again. She's coming to my place to have sex with me. I can't believe it. Earlier, my dad bought me a year's supply of condoms and gave me a quick t

Thanks, thanks so much! but this "as Sarah fades into the background." - this is just cruel, haha! Thank you for all your comments... it really means a lot to see someone else is relating to the story.

Precisely! Now, we wait. Soon all will be revealed! Yeah, as I said. I think Torry is selfish but not cruel. And I'm happy to know I managed to give some dept to the characters. This story is deliberately vague and fast-paced but it's still about real people. I'm dying to tell you whether your guess is right or wrong but I can't! I will only say that if you read carefully, it is probably possible (but not easy) to get the right answer through the process of elimination.

One of the most original stories on this site. A believable world, well-drawn characters and cute boys! The story quickly turns to have much more to it than it seems, so definitely give it a try!

Sarah has a new boyfriend. The news came roaring across the school. And it's the small, insecure dude who looks like a six grader. All less than a week after she broke up with the school sports superstar. I can't escape hearing rumours about us. She only did it to make James Mitt mad! She did it out of pity. He doesn't deserve it. What is he hoping to do with his 5-cm dicklet? I give them two weeks if he's lucky! And so on, and so on. Meanwhile, away fro

Kev will probably have a sleepless night thinking about it. He probably have but we may never know. Torry is clearly selfish but not cruel, so he might keep the video for personal use only. If he's recorded it in the first place, wink. Team Dex! 🙌 I bet that would be the audience's pick for sure, haha! Get that filthy girl out of the way and make some room for Dex!

Three days pass and it's all pretty much back to normal. The school, the classes, the tests. I chat with Sarah from time to time but we don't go beyond our earlier friendly talks. I throw a hint here and there to let her know I'm available if she changes her mind but she seems pretty consistent. It makes her even more attractive and I almost go crazy. *** It also gives me some time to figure out how to handle Torry. Torry, you son of a bitch. This time I will negotiate the terms of ou

No one is "good" or "perfect" or "noble" in this story. As in life, people run on their own urges and secret agendas... And good point about Dexter. The boy doesn't just stop playing Fortnite for anything. 👀 We'll all learn very soon.... And if Torry uses his magic to install his penis in Kevin's mouth, does it make him an Installation Wizard? (I'm not sorry for this joke).

When I enter the brothers’ room, it looks almost exactly as I left it a week ago. Torry sits on his bed and Dexter plays Fortnite. I'm as down as I can be. Defeated. Deflated. "Hi, Kevin!" Dexter yells. "Hi, Dexter," I mumble. "How are things, Kev?" Torry asks with a friendly voice. I give him a murderous gaze. For a while, I don't know what to say. "Is he going to be there for this?" I ask Torry about his young brother. "I'm not going anywhere," I hear Dexter say.

Interesting but there is one thing that it doesn't explain... Anyway, I can't say anything else, thanks for your comment! Only time will tell! I hate to say it but I made myself laugh out loud when I wrote this story. I'm happy that it resonates with you too. More coming soon.

I meet Torry in our usual spot by the river. We rode there separately and I had to wait for him a few minutes before he arrived. He lays his bike next to mine and sits by my side. "Hey, Torry." "Hey, Kev." "I'm sorry for ghosting you for so long, Torry," I say. He extends his hand and I shake it. "It's cool Kev, I know it's been a lot to take in,” Torry says. "Yeah, it has. But I should have been cooler about it. It's not like you tried to rape me or anyth

Thanks for reading, I like that you're enjoying the story. The best is yet to come. I like some of your theories, too Totally. I mean, this must have been just a weird dream, right?

In the morning, I'm feeling less bloodthirsty. I'm just sad and depressed. Wondering how I could be so delusional to think Sarah would fall for an underdeveloped tweeny boy when she could easily have a man. It is Sunday and the weather is awful. I'm sitting stark-naked across my bed when I hear a knock to my room. "Come in," I say. "You're alright son?" my dad asks as he peeks inside. "No, I'm not," I reply. I stare blankly at the opposite wall. Not even caring to c

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