Arch Hunter

Thanks so much, this is exactly what I was trying to achieve. I think I'll be developing this style further on...

I had tons of minor crushes but obviously I've never done anything about them. That is, until I moved to a new school when I was 16 and I met Tomek. For a few months, I wouldn't even pay attention to him. Just another dude. Then just one day, he entered the class and I was like, dayumm! He was beautiful. Or maybe not... you could say he was average but I saw something in his eyes that convinced me I wanted to be friends with him. A week later, there was a party and I insisted to spend every minute of it next to him. The party was over at midnight but we stayed and talked until like 4 am. We talked about life but he mostly complained about growing apart from his former best friend. We became best friends shortly after. Inseparable. We made music together, we hitchhiked, we drank. We liked the same music, the same jokes and we became so close as to hold each other's hands when talking about our feelings. But... yup, you guessed it, he was 100% straight. I was deeply, DEEPLY in love. He told me he loved me too but just as a friend. So frustrating. When I came out to him he made it very cleat that we can't be anything more than friends. I had several bromance episodes with him and it took me years to get over him completely. Thankfully, now we're just friends and he knew my every boyfriend lol. So yeah, I was lucky to fall in love with actual gay people later in my life but this one was the most intense... I've been planning to turn it into a story for years but now I know it won't happen. It was too real.

Thanks so much. It's interesting that you picked that line. I'm not trying to be overly poetic but I really like words, I guess! Thank you for reading.

At first I was like "I just hope they don't play Yellow Submarine, please please please!" Then when they started playing "She Loves You" I was like "Yeah, yeah!" but then they went "in the town..." and I was like "oh gawd". But I couldn't expect them to play "Dear Prudence", "Eleanor Rigby" or "She's So Heavy" at a game, right? At least they chose the right finale! And I'm glad you didn't make this father character a saint, taking care of his dog and living off a humble paycheck, always caring about his son and tormented by evil Karen (although it could seem it was going this way until now minus the dog). And the chapter ended with "You never wank alone" which was very fitting and pretty uplifting, too.

Then it's probably good you stopped reading when you did, haha. But I did warn about dark humor in the story notes. Thank you for sharing your thoughts anyway!

Thanks so much for checking my stories! And damn, you read fast. And you were only 50% right in chapter 5, but you got the meaningful part right! And actually Torry does have powers, except, just like most things in life, they turn out not to be magic at all.

Thanks, I'm very proud of it. But unfortunately the entire dynamics and conflict results from the characters' age difference, so not much would be left of the story if I changed the theme. Now that I think of it, something I could do is to make all sex scenes happen off-screen. I'll doublecheck the GA policies and I'll consider posting it here as well. Edit: unfortunately, not gonna happen. GA doesn't allow adult-youth content even if there is no sex in it at all. So this one has to stay on Nifty. But I promise I'll be back with something new soon!

I meant that I'm not planning it but it's possible if I come up with a good idea. Currently, I want to finish my other story, "Lukas, my best mistake" - I'm only posting it on Nifty because of the adult/youth theme.

Yeah, Kevin's mother is a control freak and she explodes when something's going on behind her back. So the boys have to tread lightly from now on. Haha right, she's a typical mother-in-law. I don't envy Dex. And once the boys move in together some day (and I'm sure they will), I bet she's gonna visit them every other day to make sure they have food and their rooms are clear. And I know I didn't explore what it is about Kevin that gives people a "gay vibe" bu it's because he has no idea himself and it was his story after all. Maybe he should simply ask someone instead of getting so defensive every time. Yeah, Kevin is so lucky to have such an understanding and close dad but even his open-mindedness was tested when the boy told him the story. I bet he will struggle with it for a while. But once dad comes to terms with everything, then who knows, he might even write a story about it. Deep inside he knows it can be the next big thing on Netflix! Thanks so much again... It was super fun interacting with you all. I'm not very good at revisiting my old stories but I've only been writing for a year so maybe it just takes some time for them to ripe. So... book 2? who knows.

I'll spare you the fine details of the conversation with my mom. On the good side, we're still going fishing. On the bad side, holy crap, was it a long day. Mom was pissed. More at dad than at me, supposedly because he knew and she didn't. But she's not stupid and she had grown suspicious of my sudden close friendship with Dex. In between scolding me and dad for hiding it from her, she would turn to Dex and smile saying things like, "don't worry sweetie, it's not your fault," or "it's okay

There's this cute little video game Camp Buddy and one of its main characters is a boy called Hunter. And his dad's name is Archer. So by merging them we get someone hunting with bow and arrows. I thought it was pretty cool.

Assholes get what they deserve. The brave, hard-working boy gets a boy of his dreams. I needed something satisfying as this after a tough day. a thin gossamer strand connected the tumescent head to skin below his navel And I liked how eloquent Ezra could get during sexy times!

Thank YOU! Yeah, I was on the fence whether to stop or continue. The story is mostly wrapped up, so you can consider it an alternate ending of sorts. Personally, I'm feeling Kevin is so proud of being with Dex that he just can't shut up about it, even if it can cause them trouble in the long run. At least he's considerate enough not to out Dexter without his permission. About that last part... guess we'll learn soon enough.

Now, where do I start? It's been a few days and I can already tell that the last weekend changed my life forever. Sarah did not kill herself, let me get that out of the way. Nor did anyone I told you about in this story. Despite what she and I have been through (or maybe because of it), we've been making attempts to start talking again. We've learnt way too much about each other to just reset our relationship but we started building the bond upon the conspiracy we were sharing. I sho

Guess what... I might be scratching everything I wrote after the phone call with Torry in this chapter and carry on with the story for a little more. I had two more people point to me that the ending seemed a little rushed and I can't disagree. It's not a promise... It will only happen if I come up with something very good (I already started writing) but that's just a little heads up.

Thank you for reading! When I was marking this story as a comedy, I had second thoughts about whether anyone will actually laugh at this except for me. And thanks for joining Team Dex, you're in a great company, haha. Oh, and you have to admit the bi theme was heavily biased towards gay in this story. It's kind of hard to write about girls since I hardly ever think about them.

About that... It's not progressing at all xD I will probably write a few more stories and explore other themes before going back ti BF. But it's cute you remember it, thanks!

Thanks again for being there for me with every chapter! A good question. As I tried to show in this story, Torry didn't have it all under control as you might've thought. If Kevin didn't see the message, he would probably go on with Sarah for a while just to be even more disappointed once he discovers the truth later... Or maybe Torry would put a stop to this if Kev realised his feelings for Dex anyway. Thanks so much... I really appreciate every comment!! Haha, then you would probably be more satisfied with the original ending that I scratched. I deliberately left some ends open for interpretation. But I like to pretend to be a reader in the comment section, so if you feel anything in particular hasn't been addressed, let me know! Anyway, thanks so much for keeping up with my story... But! If you mean what I think you mean... well then I guess I agree that Sarah is the big loser of this story. It's pretty much addressed by Kevin in his phone call with Torry. There's no happy ending for everyone. Kevin and Dex are lucky but the rest still fall victim to Torry's manipulations... who knows how they're gonna cope.

I follow Sarah with my eyes as she's driving away in the taxi I called for her. Not exactly how I imagined my evening. It's completely dark now and I'm standing in the middle of the street, trying to wrap my head around it all. The yellowish, dim light coming from street lamps is at least somewhat cosy. This is a peaceful neighbourhood and apart from the car engine and a dog barking in the distance, it's almost completely silent. Despite all that, I never hear any footsteps approaching and

Thanks! I hope it all makes sense so far. I was afraid I'm overdoing it with the twists, ha! Thank you all for caring for young Dexter. He might be the last innocent soul standing in this show and he does deserve to be happy one way or another. And to think Dexter wasn't even there in my first draft of this story.... I agree, the rest can go to hell! But for real, Dex ❤️ Yp, Sarah doesn't have it easy these days. But that's what you get when you mess with forces you don't understand. To be honest, I think Sarah will need a proper break from relationships this time after what's happened. But we'll see, she's as young and horny as anyone else in this story. Interesting what you say about Torry. I thought he kind of redeemed himself when he said to James that he's actually doing it all for his young brother. His methods are terrible, though. Now that I think of it, most of what Torry's said in this story are lies. I'm not sure if we will ever truly know him. But I hear what you're saying about an ignominious (I didn't know that word) ending, maybe even taking notes. Thanks so much! I'm happy you appreciated it. I really was afraid I made it too confusing. More coming soon!

This comment below chapter two... good guess! I have no idea how you did it. I dropped some very subtle hints but they didn't come up until chapter 3 or 4. Chapter 4 comment. Very close, haha 🙌

Saturday comes and I go to the movies with Sarah. The movie sucks but I don't mind. We sit in the farthest row and we make out for the most of it. There are maybe a dozen more people in the cinema and most of them do what we do anyway. At one point, Sarah touches my dick through my jeans. I touch her boobs through her shirt. Then we make out again. She's coming to my place to have sex with me. I can't believe it. Earlier, my dad bought me a year's supply of condoms and gave me a quick t

Thanks, thanks so much! but this "as Sarah fades into the background." - this is just cruel, haha! Thank you for all your comments... it really means a lot to see someone else is relating to the story.

Precisely! Now, we wait. Soon all will be revealed! Yeah, as I said. I think Torry is selfish but not cruel. And I'm happy to know I managed to give some dept to the characters. This story is deliberately vague and fast-paced but it's still about real people. I'm dying to tell you whether your guess is right or wrong but I can't! I will only say that if you read carefully, it is probably possible (but not easy) to get the right answer through the process of elimination.