Arch Hunter

Damn, I misread it at first 😇 Zack seems like he's fine using Andrew as a tool and while it's the point, the jealousy would kill me. I know the feeling of being left out too well 😭At least Andrew is making progress in other areas.

We woke up naked and snuggling. If not for Owen's cast, I would probably just climb him and sleep on top of him all night. A few more weeks and the damn thing will be gone. It was limiting us in many ways - not only in sex - but I had a feeling it was making Owen unhappy. He used to fill his days with things that involved using both hands and now he hardly knew what to do with his time. We were spending plenty playing board games or going for walks but it wasn't the same. At least I could

You should totally get paid by McDonald's for attracting a whole new kind if crowd with this chapter 🥵🍔

You know me, guys - everything's gonna turn out just fine for everybody 😇 No need to worry! I appreciate your comments.

We should’ve probably just gotten some fast food with Chris because Mum made a cauliflower cream with toast and it only frustrated my empty stomach. I knew we’d be having a barbeque in a few hours, but that’s right, it was still a few hours away and I was hungry now! I grabbed an apple to cheat my brain for a little longer and went to my room to pack the presents. I would be only giving Owen the Bluetooth speakers in public… the toys will have to wait until later. I wrapped them all in separate

😶😶😶😶😶 Ryan ❤️ I hope y'all are patient xD

Fuck them all, I thought to myself as I lay on my bed and stared at the ceiling. And to think I'd expected my brother's reaction would be better. He ended up pissing me off even more than Dad did. I was angry at Dad because he didn't ask me a single question. The only thing he had to offer was his homophobic rant with no regard for me. But maybe it's a good thing he didn't ask questions because if they were as sensitive as Chris's… fuck them all! I dialled Owen's number. "Hey, babe."

Thanks, let's hope you won't be disappointed Yeah... Alex is taking over this season. Interesting conclusions, we'll have to wait and find out! Welcome, good to see you ^^ Dad and Chris - masters of subtlety for sure.

Loved that. I really couldn't see a way for Zack to explain himself but he did. It's pretty clear that he's done all he could in the situation. Sure, he could've acted all noble and take a punch for his friend but Andrew sort of brought it onto himself.

Pull yourself together, you’ll be fine. You always are. The last few moments before walking on stage were always the worst. This time wasn’t different. The tightness in my stomach started forming an hour before the show and the time slowed down to make sure I experienced every second of this smouldering torture to the fullest. My palms were wet from the cold sweat and my mind raced, unable to focus on anything other than my heartbeat and phantom pinpricks that seemed to randomly puncture m

After troubling days, Owen and Alex finally find some peace to cherish their fresh relationship. But as it is in stories like this, peace is not about to last long.

Somehow I have a feeling that for Andrew things are going to go worse before they get better. 😶

Congratulations on your first story. Waiting to see how it unfolds!

Totally going in my next story. 🥵

Yeeah... While I can't tell you what happens next, I'm generally pretty reluctant of using tags that might actually be pretty major plot spoilers. I'm not saying that they would be but yeah But maybe it's just me. I'm a type of person who avoids watching movie trailers to make sure I have completely zero expectations as to what's coming ahead. While mother or sister would surely be way worse, Owen isn't a type of dude running around with his dick out in front of his older brother. I hope he gets more comfortable around Wayne as the story progresses, wink. Interesting story about the window cleaner. I won't deny, there's a part of me that would want that to happen when I was 15 Ah yes, that's one of the language inconsistencies... I tried to be careful but still more than one slipped. I think I'll leave them be and give careful readers like you a little egg-hunt Thanks for spotting!

Good idea. I'm currently working on book 2 and I might edit this part before I start posting it. Thanks for reading!

My dad's 60 this year and he's favorite pastime is ascending freaking mountains on his bicycle. Makes me think whenever I complain there's no elevator in a building... anyway, welcome

there may or may not be something going on... is anyone here? I wanted to make a quick poll. IF season two ever happens, what would you like to read about the most? Vote! 👍 - the paranormal stuff, Ryan, etc. ❤️ - Alex x Owen relationship progress 😆 - the band 😲 - just add more sex, finally! 😢 - explore other characters, move on to something completely new! Don't worry, I have the season 2 outline already in my mind but your opinion can make me add or cut a paragraph here or there to add more depth where you really want it. Feel free to write your comments if you have more to say. It's been a year since I started writing this story and your feedback could help me get back on track

Interesting. Aleks's motivation remains a mystery although I have a pretty good guess as to what it might be. It's also funny that Maks can't figure out his motivation either... perhaps he isn't ready yet to admit it.

The worst thing is I still feel like it all could go south in so many, many ways. Please don't do it to us, you've tortured us long enough 😂 ps. disappointed about no pizza day this chapter.

A nice groundwork technique that I mercilessly exploited recently is red herring - dropping subtle clues leading perceptive readers to "figure out" a wrong solution. Nothing lulls the audience as giving them a sense that they've seen through your lousy plot. Once they get it, it can be hard for them to unfix themselves. Even if they do and they start suspecting that you're misleading them, they will keep guessing all the way until your great reveal which I think is also great if handled well. Also, I noticed that the audience's alertness depends on... well, the audience. In my second story, I planted quite a few hints leading to the plot twist that I now consider pretty obvious. Unsurprisingly, they were quickly spotted here on GA. On Nifty, however... I had only one reader email me with the right "answer" before the reveal. I don't mean that Nifty readers are dull but they likely expect different type of experience with less complex plot and more predictable outcomes. By the way, it could be fun to join one of the hardcore book clubs and watch them strip your work to pieces before the first chapter is over and leave you in the mud, crying, lol.

Thanks for all your comments, I really appreciate them. I'm no expert either and I really hope I didn't tackle this issue improperly. My way of thinking is that there's probably some sort of "disorder" behind every kink but some are more accepted than others. The real question is - is it always worth it to sacrifice your sexual satisfaction, even for the one you love? Are you sure the frustration won't grow on you and make you do things you're going to regret? To that, I have no answers

A week passed and sadly we haven’t seen each other much. On weekdays, I was busy with work and he spent the weekend away with his family. We stayed in touch, though and we texted each other whenever there was a sports event on TV that we both wanted to watch. I’m sitting on the bus, expecting him to arrive and he does. There’s a new bruise around his right eye and it has me worried even though the boy is beaming. “Me and this other guy both jumped for the ball and we bumped,” he expla

Thanks for all the comments. It's sweet that you're cheering for Rob and Artem so much. I'm cheering for them, too. But if you read the story notes or my earlier stories... well, make your own conclusions. Or don't, and just wait for the next chapter. It's coming soon This is always a safe thing to do... but maybe Rob and Artem will come out on top even if any problems arise. IF they arise 🤔 It's good to hear you were happy with the sex scene... I must admit that when I get to writing sex scenes these days, I find myself thinking "ugh, this thing again". As long as I can put the characters in interesting pre-sex situations, it's all fine, but I may be forced to remove sex from my stories one day, haha. Artem is a popular Ukrainian male name that comes from a Greek goddess of the hunt and the moon, Artemis. Ares is a Greek god of war and courage. Does it have any deeper meaning? Who knows? 🤭 That's weird... but you're right, it does sounds strange. There could be many reasons why Artem wouldn't want to discuss his family life with Rob.. let's hope it's nothing serious.

Thanks so much! Unfortunately, I don't have good news - I don't have anything yet but I feel like I'm getting ripe to go back to this story. I think there's a very good chance it will happen this year. I know it's not very helpful but I also know I owe you all some answers. I treated these 9 chapters as a first "season" and I will only resume it when season 2 is complete. On the good side, I'm already full of ideas and when I finish working on my current big thing, I will likely go back to Black Fox