Arch Hunter

We get to play tennis two times the following week on the local tennis court. When I told him I liked tennis, I was exaggerating a bit as I hoped to find something in common between me and him. Luckily, I’m not that bad but he is better. He seems to have unlimited energy despite it being relatively late hours. I’m not horrible, though and we are both having fun. Probably I would do even better than I did if I was able to pay full attention to the game. Bus Boy - I mean, Artem - looks pretty damn

Thanks for reading, your comments made my day! And yeah... there's something exciting about maintaining eye contact with strangers, hah. Family Guy - Eye Contact During Guitar Solo - YouTube

Bus Boy looking fucking sexy today. I can't help but stare. To think I was cursing this day at the college, a few weeks back. I had to stay after classes to convince the professor that in fact, I did not deserve to get an F for my paper I spent the entire weekend working on. She’s a bitch and disliked me from Day One. I knew that was all she wanted - to see me on my knees begging and make a fool of myself in front of her. And that’s what she got. I knew I had the facts on my side and the pa

Two teens meet... what more is there to say? Let's see if they belong together.

Yeah... I don't know any either. This here is like the real world but with the "wildness" parameter significantly increased. Or maybe it's not and, in 10 years, Kevin will look back at his relationship with his dad when he was a teenager and think: "wtf we were doing". Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Yeah, Ryan could be straight or not but he definitely takes an opportunity when he sees it. He's also exceptionally horny even for his age.

You are not wrong, sir!

Yeah... maybe it also gives some insight into dynamics between Owen and his parents... but looking back, it's far from being my favorite part of the story. It's just a little "interview" happening inside Owen's head and it's easy to get confused I guess.

Cool story. I had only been mildly hooked up until this chapter and the mention of the pizza day. I love me some pizza! And I hate Adam for bullying Sam over it. One should be free to express himself without being judged. Can't wait for the pizza day lunch chapter, it's gonna be so intense! I also liked the dynamics between Brody x Zack.

Interesting points. Very relatable! I wrote my last story in a single .doc file without any divisions. I was experiencing a creative burst and before I knew, the story was done in less than a week. And as I looked back at it, I was surprised to see that the chapters were already there. Some were a little longer, some a bit shorter, but there was no doubt - the "smaller arcs" were there! Sometimes I got to chose whether to make a paragraph the last paragraph of a chapter or the first paragraph of the next chapter (hence choosing between having or not a cliffhanger). Over complicating the plot should surely be avoided but if you do... and you don't want to rewrite the whole thing, I would "ask" the characters - what would you really do? How would you react? And let them do things their way. There may be no fireworks, the story may be cut short. You may need to find an alternative happy ending. But at least you won't betray your characters or make your story unbelievable.

Good points. Angst 1, Sappy 0. Actually, I considered smoothing out a story once because I had readers complaining they felt insecure reading it. Like: "It was so lovely at the start, why are you throwing problems into it?". And damn, I ended up smoothing it out a tiny little bit to make it more "heartwarming" I guess, for which I almost hate myself. There are many more ways to make a story satisfying than through instant gratification. It might not earn you immediate attention and invoke less remote orgasms, but may help you grow a dedicated audience that really believes in what you have to say. Once, I wrote an email to an author saying that I'm sad and heartbroken after reading his story (damn, it hit hard). And he took it as a sign that I didn't like it when it was exactly the opposite. As you said, people may feel sad, scared, even frustrated but in the end they will remember those stories the most. And who knows, if they read until the end, they may live long enough to see some kind of a happy ending

Thanks so much, this is exactly what I was trying to achieve. I think I'll be developing this style further on...

I had tons of minor crushes but obviously I've never done anything about them. That is, until I moved to a new school when I was 16 and I met Tomek. For a few months, I wouldn't even pay attention to him. Just another dude. Then just one day, he entered the class and I was like, dayumm! He was beautiful. Or maybe not... you could say he was average but I saw something in his eyes that convinced me I wanted to be friends with him. A week later, there was a party and I insisted to spend every minute of it next to him. The party was over at midnight but we stayed and talked until like 4 am. We talked about life but he mostly complained about growing apart from his former best friend. We became best friends shortly after. Inseparable. We made music together, we hitchhiked, we drank. We liked the same music, the same jokes and we became so close as to hold each other's hands when talking about our feelings. But... yup, you guessed it, he was 100% straight. I was deeply, DEEPLY in love. He told me he loved me too but just as a friend. So frustrating. When I came out to him he made it very cleat that we can't be anything more than friends. I had several bromance episodes with him and it took me years to get over him completely. Thankfully, now we're just friends and he knew my every boyfriend lol. So yeah, I was lucky to fall in love with actual gay people later in my life but this one was the most intense... I've been planning to turn it into a story for years but now I know it won't happen. It was too real.

Thanks so much. It's interesting that you picked that line. I'm not trying to be overly poetic but I really like words, I guess! Thank you for reading.

At first I was like "I just hope they don't play Yellow Submarine, please please please!" Then when they started playing "She Loves You" I was like "Yeah, yeah!" but then they went "in the town..." and I was like "oh gawd". But I couldn't expect them to play "Dear Prudence", "Eleanor Rigby" or "She's So Heavy" at a game, right? At least they chose the right finale! And I'm glad you didn't make this father character a saint, taking care of his dog and living off a humble paycheck, always caring about his son and tormented by evil Karen (although it could seem it was going this way until now minus the dog). And the chapter ended with "You never wank alone" which was very fitting and pretty uplifting, too.

Then it's probably good you stopped reading when you did, haha. But I did warn about dark humor in the story notes. Thank you for sharing your thoughts anyway!

Thanks so much for checking my stories! And damn, you read fast. And you were only 50% right in chapter 5, but you got the meaningful part right! And actually Torry does have powers, except, just like most things in life, they turn out not to be magic at all.

Thanks, I'm very proud of it. But unfortunately the entire dynamics and conflict results from the characters' age difference, so not much would be left of the story if I changed the theme. Now that I think of it, something I could do is to make all sex scenes happen off-screen. I'll doublecheck the GA policies and I'll consider posting it here as well. Edit: unfortunately, not gonna happen. GA doesn't allow adult-youth content even if there is no sex in it at all. So this one has to stay on Nifty. But I promise I'll be back with something new soon!

I meant that I'm not planning it but it's possible if I come up with a good idea. Currently, I want to finish my other story, "Lukas, my best mistake" - I'm only posting it on Nifty because of the adult/youth theme.

Yeah, Kevin's mother is a control freak and she explodes when something's going on behind her back. So the boys have to tread lightly from now on. Haha right, she's a typical mother-in-law. I don't envy Dex. And once the boys move in together some day (and I'm sure they will), I bet she's gonna visit them every other day to make sure they have food and their rooms are clear. And I know I didn't explore what it is about Kevin that gives people a "gay vibe" bu it's because he has no idea himself and it was his story after all. Maybe he should simply ask someone instead of getting so defensive every time. Yeah, Kevin is so lucky to have such an understanding and close dad but even his open-mindedness was tested when the boy told him the story. I bet he will struggle with it for a while. But once dad comes to terms with everything, then who knows, he might even write a story about it. Deep inside he knows it can be the next big thing on Netflix! Thanks so much again... It was super fun interacting with you all. I'm not very good at revisiting my old stories but I've only been writing for a year so maybe it just takes some time for them to ripe. So... book 2? who knows.

I'll spare you the fine details of the conversation with my mom. On the good side, we're still going fishing. On the bad side, holy crap, was it a long day. Mom was pissed. More at dad than at me, supposedly because he knew and she didn't. But she's not stupid and she had grown suspicious of my sudden close friendship with Dex. In between scolding me and dad for hiding it from her, she would turn to Dex and smile saying things like, "don't worry sweetie, it's not your fault," or "it's okay

There's this cute little video game Camp Buddy and one of its main characters is a boy called Hunter. And his dad's name is Archer. So by merging them we get someone hunting with bow and arrows. I thought it was pretty cool.

Assholes get what they deserve. The brave, hard-working boy gets a boy of his dreams. I needed something satisfying as this after a tough day. a thin gossamer strand connected the tumescent head to skin below his navel And I liked how eloquent Ezra could get during sexy times!