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    Chapter 18

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    Chapter 2

    Too much sex??? Read the New York Times; plenty of kidnapping, riots, etc. but WAY too much “reality”! 😂😂😂
  3. I am reading CAP in order for the first time! So, I agree 100%! Imagine if you were reading Romeo and Juliet for the first time and someone commented “Isn’t it a pity they both die at the end?”
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    Home at Last

    The loss of Roger affects me deeply! Of all the CAP characters, he was my perfect “type” AND, like JP and Brad, I work to make people in my life happy as I would for someone damaged yet redeemable like Roger!
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    Chapter 36

    I’ll bet that a letter or something from Billy will be found absolving Brad of responsibility and possibly containing an apology!
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    Chapter 25

    Mark you bad boy! Do you need a spanking!🤔
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    Chapter 12

    MAJOR SPOILER to a first time reader! Is there any way that you guys can worn us neophytes not to read your commentaries if they are this revealing???
  8. Somebody HELP; I am reading (and LOVING) Gap Year but it is obviously a continuation! I would really like to go back to the “beginning”! Can I know the progression? Where do I start and are there follow-ups before Gap Year starts? The cast of characters is vast and interrelationships are hard to discern!
  9. I have tried to reach the author on several "literary" sites with no results. This is one of my top 3 favorite stories and I am crazy about the main characters. I have been waiting for SOMETHING for over a year and suspect that wait is in vain. PITY!
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    Chapter 7

    I am very sorry but thet "Nookie Green" joke was HILARIOUS!
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    Chapter 5

    I'm not quite sure how I "found" this story but I am loving it. The development is riveting but in a fully believable and natural way. The ease the author has with somewhat technical issues (like legal) shows great research. The joy that Matt and Mike are finding in each other is evolutionary and so satisfying. I cannot wait for more and "Don" has a dedicated fan!
  12. I agree 100%. I STILL think of this story from time to time. I live in VA and we have a family place in S. Florida. I drive down there several times a year (I have a dog I refuse to put into the cargo hold of a plane). "Down South" in FLorida there are two relatively new Buc-ee's (note Cory as a devotee thereof). Well, the first time I stumbled across one outside Daytona Beach I HAD to stop (as a sort of pilgramage in honor of that sweet Cory that makes my mouth water). I now even have a Buc-ee's key fob like the one Cory describes. I really wish the author would continue. I have constructed MANY story lines in my own head but it would be SO satisfying for Dayne Mora to finish it!
  13. Efrain and Cory, Wild Card, Wolf Like Me... Dearest Dayne...I cannot stop thinking of Efrain and Cory, Preston and Indie! I wanted to add yet another perspective: In this day of the pandemic, many of us (I am "immunocompromised" as a cancer survivor) have to keep personal physical contact(s) to an absolute minimum. As for me, lucky to be able to work from home (Zoom, Skype, etc.) my only escapes are walks on the beach (alone) with my dog (Silver Lab), and trips to the gas station and grocery store. I have not even hugged my dear sister in months! Sure, Pornhub and the like are OK for sexual "release" but, as one of a legion of romance addicts, Efrain and Cory offers a wonderful mental foray into emotional, spiritual and vicarious sexual satisfaction that videos of guys fucking or blowing each other into oblivion just cannot match. The "circles" surrounding the four main characters; the Garza and Card clans, Preston and "the twins", Indie and his mom all add such depth to the exquisite sexuality of "the four" that, if I was still a smoker, would prompt a cigarette after each installment! I have written some erotic fiction exclusively for friends who know of my penchant so the conclusion of my search that led me (finally) to the above last (most recent?) chapters was sigh inducing! Nevertheless, the desire for more is soul gnawing. ANY chance of more, PLEASE? If for no other reason than to make the "distancing" of these days more tolerable. BTW, I must add my admiration for detail many might not appreciate but I do because of (as a Virginian) my exposure to Blacksburg, Patuxent, etc. (loved the inclusion of reference to the Navy Exchange in the search for cheaper La Cruset and Satcel's Pizza, the best in Blacksburg and Efrain's culinary expertise). PLEASE respond?!
  14. OK...it looks like it's been almost a year...need suggestions? Amateur writer here (erotic stories for friends); SO MANY possibilities but you, my friend, are amazing...PLEASE, MORE!!
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    Girl Bait

    THAT WAS GREAT!!!
  16. SOMEBODY...Please tell me there is more after "Wild Card 8" AND MORE! I just started the series in late January and read every installment laughing, crying and chubbing up with each addition. The site I was reading on stopped abruptly with "Alpha Challenge" and it took me HOURS to find "Wild Card 7 & 8" but, it's like literatus interruptus...NO RELEASE! Dayne, you have a new and DEDICATED fan. Tell me what else of yours to read! Tell me where you live and I will come clean your apartment/house and cook you dinner (I can cook as well as Efrain).
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