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So glad there are already three chapters out! Looking forward to this story !!!

Hi Ronyx im so glad you are open to that:). I think the biggest issue is in the oceans- but I’m not aure- where they get swallowed for looking like jelly fish or at least that’s what I’ve read great story! Love the characters and the sensitivity and the issues

Wow- very exciting! I too had wondered about shay finding Mira, and then decided it must have been the aquami going from him into Mira that brought in Mira the essence of the ancient midrith (sp?) K..what’s his name. And the aquami from planet into shays body, bringing D.... I’m bad with names . I hadn’t thought they had specifically chosen shay.... although seeing seeing that Miri and his sister were identical makes me think either the physical forms are affected by the aquami and the essence of the midrith they absorbed, or maybe they did somehow end up in the right place at the right time , also being human nearly identical twins (being male and female )who happened to be the perfect vessels for the the midrith essences I probably should read again what Stellar wrote about it all!

It was so,good - despite knowing it was going to leave us in the lurch. (unfinished)) Such amazing writing - and compelling personalities/characters/stories -i hope it will eventually all work out somehow. - based on the other stories I feel it might I was wondering how it would be to write about a character who was abducted/stolen and abused for years I couldn’t imagine it, but That was very convincingly written - I was hoping to see him come more out of his pain before it ended. And maybe either find his snake or finish the trial

Wow

Amazing story!!! I had to put sleep and work on hold too! I see that you haven’t been finishing stories and I hope you are okay. And thanks so so much for contributing these - absolutely amazing. Heartbreaking in places

So interesting! Look forward to coming developments

Amazing story - I stayed up late finishing it and love the characters. I don’t know what to say without giving away anything - but very enjoyable story. I loved Cal also:). Such different characters but all so engaging highly recommended!!

This was great I’m new to this website. How do I like and leave a review?.. i wish it it went on and on!!! So glad they got back together - I want to see Jake bounce back to a healthy self

This was an amazing story. I just read it twice - such an amazing relationship and a wonderful character. I feel like I could take some lessons from him about learning to stay calm! I love how he ends up in the bedroom every time he’s overwhelmed His parents seems so callous - so nice to see him get what he needs from his big guy So heartwarming thanks so much for writing !

Bravo! That was amazing. Heartwarming and sexy andgritty. I love the characters - such a pull between them- could Noon have really pulled away? I like how he asserted his position