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  1. Danger isnt always evident especially when it comes in the form of so called innocent teenagers but things aren't always what they seem. This is the story of two young teens who have discovered that even if they have the powers to influence and affect others sometimes it isnt always a good idea to use them.
  2. “Get your fat ass back in that seat!” Nancy could hear the words as loud as day but looking around at the other children still sitting and working busily at their test papers she knew that the voice was only in her head. With a sheepish grin she looked up at Robert who was glancing at her with a satisfied smirk on his face. Smiling back at him she took the foot that she had been sitting on and placed it back on the floor. She had probably been sitting on it at a really strange angle because
  3. Mirage

    The Fey

    A young girl finds out that the dangers in the world are not always what they seem.
  4. Mirage

    Chapter 1

    Chapter One I always knew I was different than those around me. My family members are all big boned with well drawn features. None of them could be called ugly really, but they aren’t the model type either. My features are fine. I have a small lithe figure, which definitely comes in handy in certain circumstances. It’s amazing how fast I can move when I need to. My small four foot seven inch frame makes me stand out more than anyone else in my family. Sandra, my sister and th
  5. Mirage

    Prologue

    I ran. My heavy waist length auburn hair rolled behind me in the wind as my bare feet caught dirt and brambles. Once pristine bare feet were now marred by dirt and scratches. I had woven the dress I now wore from the finest material, delicate caterpillar silk. It was the only cloth that could brush my skin and not bring me harm. The end result was an exquisite fabric that pulled to the curve of my hip seductively, but kept my petite figure a hidden mystery. I felt the push o
  6. Justin Also wanted to wish you an Awesome birthday! Hope it really was the greatest!
  7. Thanks Jack for your nice comments. Have to say I am really having a ball writing this story. Yeah you never know what is going to happen next. I have had Chapter 2 in my head for a few weeks now can't wait to get it down on paper. Definately stay tuned there will be some fun surprises in store for the protagonist as well as her sister. I dont know who is more excited me or my characters Oh yeah all edited hehe for some reason when I used copy and paste lol some letters decided to take a walk.
  8. Okay guys I need to know what you think. Good bad ugly? Nah only kidding but please be honest https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewsto...0&chapter=2
  9. hmm could be all i can say is I have been home sick pretty much just sleeping the last few days so yeah I havent done anything anywhere. First time I have even been here in a while. Seroiusly I think half the people online are sick
  10. Okay it has been edited all the mys are gone sorry about that guys . Thanks James thanks Shannon
  11. Okay guys just a little taste of what is to come Check it out any comments appreciated and wanted https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=238
  12. LOL I hope it meets up to your expectations But i will sure do my damnest. I just printed out the lyrics to what you sent me. I know just how I'm starting it
  13. Me too this sounds like loads of fun
  14. What a topic but truthfully I had this descussion with a very good net/real life friend that lives in Australia while i live in The USA. I came very close one day to a near miss head on collision with another car and when he heard about it he was scared to death what could have happened and he would never have known. We decided that i would give him my family members cell phone #'s so if i ever dissapeared he could call one of them or text them and find out what happened to me and then he would contact the rest of our net friends. I have all my friends #'s in a book as well as my cell so if anything ever happened my family could contact my closest net friends. My family knows who they are at least by first name.
  15. Okay guys since Bird was so nice to announce my story I figure I might as well put up a thread here although i am still waiting for Jamie to send me the edited copy. Once he does i will replace it so if a little formatting needs to be fixed or a run on sentance here or there please don't mind it, it will be gone soon. Well this is the first story in my life I have ever let anyone read but me. It is a science fiction one. It seems all the stories in my head always are Anyhow this thread is for anything you might want to say about the story. please do not hesitate to give me imput good or bad. I always want to learn and are eager to see what you all think of it. Robin Powers of the Mind: https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewsto...88a45f058ed7411
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