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  1. wonderlakes
    I like Jay. He’s sweet but no nonsense at the same time. He has no problem laying out what he wants and where he stands. Loren is not quite there but I do think there’s genuine intention. It’s obvious Loren had to stew and watch Jay not chase him. That was hard for him. There’s definite physical motivation now. To kiss Jay, Loren will need to step up. I was surprised to see that he texted Jay in the end since he was adamant that Jay only call him. Or am I surprised that Loren couldn’t wait to talk to him? Nope. Great chapter. I feel like like a lot of progress was made. These two definitely have epic potential.
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    “I’m showing up in your Google searches?” I say, trying not to laugh at the most ridiculous lie ever. “So, you google directions to Anchorhead coffee and google shows you Ten Reasons Why Jay Petermeyer Should Be Your Husband? And then technology made you click the article and read it?” Loved this response and loved watching Loren back peddle
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    Superb chapter. Loren was starting to let his guard down and letting us get to know him. There’s undeniable chemistry here. I could feel that new attraction tension on that hike. It made me smile. But alas, for as confident as Loren was though the whole chapter, his insecurity creeped back in at the end. Being vaguely familiar with people on social media and knowing that Sven had him pull is boxers down until he was 1/4in shy of showing his dick…one can assume that Loren does not hold Jay’s morale values, something that really knocked Loren back a few steps. Now he really won’t want Jay to know what he does! It’s a good time for Jay to drag him kicking and screaming
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    Getting Physical

    wonderlakes commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Getting Physical

    “You know, you could’ve Googled my domain.” “I know.” Hey says it like a throwaway statement. He knows he could’ve learned everything he needs to know but he didn’t. Why the hell not? I’ve been straight up FBI’ing his ass since we met. Everyone up in arms about how Jay is not having sex while I'm over here like this dude isn’t even googling Loe?!!! That is some kind of willpower. Im on team Loe here. You couldn’t stop me from learning anything and everything. Maybe there really is a naivety about Jay. or some kind of stupidity lol Seriously tho I love this chapter. Great dynamics at work here. It’s becoming more clear how different these two are which will make for great entertainment
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    Where's Loren?

    wonderlakes commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Where's Loren?

    I’ve been thinking about this chapter all day. It would be crazy for Jay—a famous, hot athlete— to go nine months without getting laid. Crazy but not totally unimaginable. But what about the whole year before that. Has he not had any sex with anyone since he first saw Loe? Your description says Jay lives above reproach, which makes me think that, yes, he’s been a good boy the whole time. More annoyingly, your description makes me think Loe hasn’t been a good boy. is this a future conflict? I can see it being an issue. Im feeling anxious for the next chapter. I want everything to unfold right now.
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    Where's Loren?

    wonderlakes commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Where's Loren?

    Jay is definitely my kind of guy. 9 months? What a saint!! I wish someone was willing to wait that long for me to pull my head out of my arse. He seems like a genuinely good guy. I have a feeling Loren isn’t going to know what to do with all that attention. I guess we’ll find out!!
  7. wonderlakes
    Glad to know there’s 30 chapters. Bummed I can’t read it in one sitting. It’s available for order, by chance?
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    I’ve been thinking about this chapter all day and I’m so curious what their story is going to be. We have small tidbits from Boss Nanny but it doesn’t give away very much. I’ve gone back and re-read their scenes and I’m trying like hell to imagine how this will play out. Monday is not soon enough
  9. wonderlakes
    Okay! I’m here for this. Great first chapter. I love everything about it. There’s obvious attraction but serious hesitation from Loe. I actually can’t wait for the next chapter. Do you know when you will post?????
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    It's kind of crazy how different schools have different ebb and flows. I was from a small town and the popular crowd was mixed with all sorts of characters. Sk8ers, jocks, nerds, jocks who were nerds, band geek/ homecoming king. I'm glad that was my experience. I didn't come out until I was a senior but I wasn't as nervous as most were. Everyone took it pretty well. Looking back, I don't think anyone was shocked. I'm pretty sure I didn't hide it as well as I thought
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    Just started this story and now i'm playing catch up. I guess i can only react to so many things in one day? Anyway, it's clear these two are going to catch fire before they straighten things out between them. I love a good badboy turns softy woo hoo
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