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    It's been some time but I just wanted to send you my thoughts and hugs. I'm sorry for your loss. I love the painting you posted that she did, your mom was a lovely artist.
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    Work hard, party harder
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    This breaks my heart. I love your blogs Matt!
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    *hugs* I'm looking forwards to the story James.
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    "There is an old story about how you boil a frog. If you put him in water, he'll stay in it. Then you turn the heat up and he won't jump out. That's how abusive relationships work. They are a seduction. Everything looks fine and then things take subtle turns. You start excusing things, making excuses and blaming yourself. Before long, you are living in hell and wondering what happened." Truth .___.
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    Notes

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Notes

    Hello Stephen! Thanks for the review : ) I'm glad you liked the story! It's been so long since I've written, I really appreciate the feedback.
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    Thank you for sharing this with us James. You are a strong, beautiful, kind soul and I say that from the bottom of my heart. You'll get through this and you'll always have friends who genuinely care about you : )
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    Awww James *A*
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    The Riddle of Me

    Fishwings commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in The Riddle of Me

    This is beautiful. I think it captures the complexity of what it means to be a person and dispels the judgments that often come attached to the labels of "quietness" or "gentleness" very well.
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    WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ LOL
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    Bookmarking this forever James : ) This is great, great advice.
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    Chapter 1

    Fishwings commented on JamesSavik's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This is some tough material here. I thought this piece was well-written, genuine, and moving, and I'm happy that the character pulled through in the end. Thank you for sharing this with us James
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    Five

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Five

    you're breathtaking *A*
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    Six

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Six

    nouuu thank YOU for reading :3
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    Twenty Six

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Twenty Six

    oh my gerd did I write that LOL
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    Two

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Two

    Thank you! (omg i'm just getting to reply all of these now lol wtfbbq)
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    Seventeen

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Seventeen

    I think Rover just needs to not be so derp*
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    Seventeen

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Seventeen

    I think Rover just needs to not be so deep
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    Eighteen

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Eighteen

    Thanks for the feedback Miles! I agree, I think in retrospect the short sequences made the story sort of jagged in pacing, while not really informing the reader
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    Hey Miles! Wow I can't believe people are still reading this LOL. I wrote this an embarrassingly long time ago. I agree with all of your critiques actually. There's definitely a lot of pacing problems with this story and there are definitely a lot of plot holes. And yes I agree, the antagonist wasn't the most complex and humanized. Thanks for taking the time to read through it, and I definitely appreciate the feedback : ) Thanks for being courteous and honest. I'm also glad that there were still redeeming qualities in the story besides the flaws!
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    Twenty Eight

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Twenty Eight

    Thanks mb3! (WOW I CANT BELIEVE THIS IS STILL BEING READ LOL)
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    If you mean you've written half the story in first person and want to change it to third person halfway through through the eyes of the same protagonist........ then I'd say no. I've never seen it done and I'd imagine it would be very difficult to do so. I have read a few stories where the author switches between first + third person between two different characters (renowned Pendragon series). To me it's pretty awkward but, well, it worked, and I read the entire series xD.
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    Three

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Three

    I'm glad you thought the character development was good Miles : )
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    Four

    Fishwings commented on Fishwings's story chapter in Four

    Thank you!
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    Thank you for all the comments that you've left on Six Seconds : ) I loved reading what you thought of each chapter. I was definitely trying to convey a sort of hope that transpires time and space through the theory of multiverses. Thanks again for reading Miles.
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