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  1. Dan South

    Promises to Keep

    Dan South commented on W_L's story chapter in Promises to Keep

    I was so pleased to find you added Robert Frost at the end as that poem was on my mind. Frost and Joni Mitchell. Theres so much innocence and beauty before the loss. The the loss of the unspoiled natural environment, the loss of life, the loss of love.
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    What TF happened at the monastery? Oh dear. Dent the size of a Pringle’s can? LMAO!
  3. Dan South
    Auditing the OLCP. Huh. Aside from the setup for a future Alvey family story I wonder why Vincent is there. The moment with Kap’s dad made my eyes wet but there’s gotta be more. Mace is just there to run in the woods? I’ll borrow a line: That’ll take some getting used to…
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    Obligatory follow up on Cyrus and Yakob. Fantastic sparring match. Vincent and mother-in-bond get us a step closer to the showdown and his fourth gift emerging… Justin and Dirk? Damn. The absolute sexist thing I’ve read and it didn’t involve the protagonist. Mace either! Hot. Hot hot. Hot.
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    While I’m totally excited to have caught up to the current storyline I’m just as not excited to have caught up. I’ll just wait over here wondering and worrying about what happens next. Its a fantastic read from the start. Obviously I couldn’t put it down 😂 and it’s an enormous pleasure interacting with you, Aaron Stone, and the amazing folks who comment! Now…tell me more…
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    “This guy’s a coyote? His smile is definitely wily…” Yeah, you did write that and it was a total LOL moment for me.
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    “Nothing can take him away.” Ugh.
  8. Dan South
    I always cry at weddings and this one was no exception. Well done. Beautiful.
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    So there might be a TILF after all! Cannot let the coyote with the wily smile slide by without a comment. I see what you did there…
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    Creek fries were an easy web search and I’m definitely making them. Has this Mac and Cheese recipe slipped past me in the comments? It’s become it’s own character here. Have the peanut whiskey and I’ll have to hunt down some blackberry shine… An artful progression of emotions in this chapter sorting through family in its many forms.
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    Grumpy has to visit the woods in Kentucky! Or will he have a reason to shift at work? Gotta meet his bear.
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    I’m hesitant to say this is the best chapter yet since, per usual, I have no clue what’s coming up next. For me this is the hottest sex scene to date. The conversation with Vincent was practically a Public Service Announcement and the consent between Justin and Dirk was sexy AF! One of the great advantages of binge reading is observing your growth as a writer, Aaron. Amazing. Ice cream is on me! Three scoops…
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    What? Dirk is destined again?? And with Ingle??? I can’t even. Mr. Stone you just wiped the rest of the meth head chapter from my mind with this twist. Mercy.
  14. Dan South
    So the jackass is from Maricopa. How fitting! Go get him Caleb!
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    The game was a blast! Pure genius sending Kaplan in to make it a battle of the heart for Cyrus. Hope it’s time for Tasha’s father to get his ass beat down.
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    Love the addition of the vampiress! Caleb’s estranged FIL better watch his step…
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    You GO Kaplan!
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    The difference between Central time and Eastern time mentioned. Mace and Vincent always load the dishwasher before they leave the kitchen. It’s all of these small details that have me captivated.
  19. Dan South
    Aliz gave me goosebumps but Tierney had me frozen with laughter. Another great chapter!
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    Oh I found out! Cackle away. Mean man mean to bear. Bad.
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    Nope! No no no. This can’t happen to Dirk! Fingers crossed for him. Him and Ingle! Holy sh*t.
  22. Dan South
    I’m just going to assume the mole lived in momma’s basement way, way into adulthood. I doubt it’s a new character. Stacy? Hmm
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    A lycan wedding? Can’t wait to see what that looks like!
  24. Dan South
    “and a compensating desk.” LOL
  25. Dan South
    Thank gods for Mace’s level head! I’m both excited and apprehensive to be starting Book Three. Cannot even begin to imagine what’s in store…
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