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I second this.

I don't know if Loren needed to be validated but I'm sure it helps. It seems like the whole ordeal has been pretty stressful and knowing you're making a difference helps to mentally stay in the fight.

Foreshadowing something big I hope 🤞

Love this

I was very happy to read this. Knowing how terrible Loren's bio sperm/ovum is-- the last thing I want is for Jay's relationship with his parents to be strained. It was a breath of fresh air to see that his mom is 1- buying better gifts lol and 2- has come around to how things should be, genuinely. Jay and Loren's hard work is paying off.

When you come in this late there really isn't much I can add to the other commenters. I think the girls are going to have amazing holidays as they are surrounded by the best people. Loren going home to Mike and Julia was an emotionally packed trip. I LOVED the ski trip. Jay being jealous that his 1 year old daughters are better than him had me laughing. All the hot cocoa. Everything about the Super Bowl from Derek and Taylor playing each other, to Geoff confirming that Loren is fighting a good fight, to Jay wanting to pull his hair out with 7 minutes left in the game, and of course the confetti war. It was simply a wonderful read.

I don't have time to read the comments or comment much until later. It was all I could do to read the chapter. Worth it. Absolutely worth it. To be continued...

This is what I got too. Loren will be a force of reckoning. With two chapters left, I hope we what he's able to stir up! If I were a part of this heinous child trafficking ring, I'd be quivering in fear about now. Imagine being the guy who took the 10K and realizing 20+ years later it was Loren Patrick you bought and lost...or if you're a football fan, Jay Petermeyer's husband. Fuuuuuuuck.

As hard as this chapter was to read you did a really great job with it. If anything, I feel pumped to do something about it. Where can I buy the clothes to support the cause? Loe's passion for this will be explosive. With his and Jay's platform and following, I have a feeling every person involved will be brought to justice. I want to see the person in charge taken down! How many kids will be saved because of this. I'm glad Loren was spared and maybe the true purpose is for this reason right here, so he can help save lives. My heart did clench for Lars. I can't imagine reconciling the parents he knew with who they actually were. It's reverse Stockholm syndrome or something. But the Halloween. Too cute. I can just imagine the girls dressed in park gear, one with a red bandana around her neck. Maybe some cute hats. Real footage of Loe trying to get the remote from Jay LOL

Why did I peak at the comments before reading? My stomach is churning

This cut deep.

I worry about this. Except, now that Loren is a dad I think he's going to find more inner strength than he did before. He will need to be strong for his girls. There is something about being a parent that makes you a better and stronger person. The girls have already revealed a part of Loren and they're not even 1!

I must admit I was a fan of Kim Possible and I'm already a fan of Rob Possible. I barely know the guy but I'm hoping to know more! yummy.

Why do I think Carson gets almost everything he wants?

Loren of all people should know you can't hide anything when you're life revolves around social media. Jay spying them made me smile, Loren being shocked that he didn't get away with it made me laugh. I would have liked to see Loren traveling alone with twins. Another thing he likely stressed about yet killed it. Things are going so well for them, it's no wonder you're about to shake the foundation. Go easy on them.

Wow. This was truly a wonderful chapter and more than once I felt choked up as this part of their life unfolded. Most everything has been covered in the comments since I was working and didn't have time to read the story until now. I anxiously wait for the next installment and am already dreading it's end. I know we're lucky to get this little bit of extra. I will savor every piece I get.

I love these guys and was not done with them. Thank you for giving us a little more. It's only the first chapter but it doesn't disappoint. Thank you! Happy Monday!

This chapter did not disappoint and was worth the wait. The IVF journey is a familiar one and a hard one. I've been there and description is accurate. I got a little teary when the first one wasn't successful and overjoyed remembering the first time we heard our little's heartbeat. 100%

The rollercoaster begins with his stupid parents. I couldn't believe they are suing him. Part of me is not surprise. I think having twins will be therapeutic for Loren. I'm sure there will be some serious panicking and second guessing, but he's going to love both so much it will prove how great of a dad he is.

Don't let the length deter you from this amazing story. You'll be hooked IMMEDIETLY and unable to pause until you've taken in every last word. In true Gnomie fashion, she's twisted an every day trope into a masterful story you don't expect. I think it's her claim to fame. Just read this story and fall in love with Jensen and Nolan. You won't regret it.

Best notification is finding out a new story posted. Thought it was more from Jay and Loren but this might be better! Binged. Couldn't stop. Laughed my damn ass off more than once. I don't now how you do it but you are GENIUS! I couldn't read past that for several minutes. My neighbor has a Chinese Crested and those poor things are UGLY. Poor guy just wanted to party with Jensen lol.

I also was highly offended that Aidan was 10. Excuse me?!

One of the best stories on the site hands down. The premise sounds cliché. Loren is a forever-single kind of guy that sleeps his way around. Jay is the All-American football with wholesome family values. Jay reels Loren in and tames him. HEA. Except no. There is so much more to this story. The author truly brings these characters to life, each flawed in their own way and each strong in their own way. When you have opposite lives, it takes a minute to figure out how they fit. Jay says it best when he said: Don't hesitate on this story, it's a must read. Not just the story, but the comments, too. They add their own level to the story. A true testament to the author herself.

ATTENTION READERS: We need 13 more people to recommend this story and MrsGnomie will write a 25k word super Epilogue. All you have to do is go to the Jay’s Loelife story page. There is a blue badge button to the left of where you can “like” the story. Click it, check the boxes that apply, and submit. Okay, now that I read the chapter it's apparent we need those 13 recommendations more than ever. As @chris191070 suggested, lets get @Mrsgnomieto 100. This story deserves it. I'm so happy and so sad to see this story come to a close (for now). How satisfying. I will admit, my heart sunk when Loren's parents showed up to the wedding. Despite Loren's genuine emotional reaction, his parents really hold no power over him. It was nice to see Jay and all his friends handling the situation. The group is always close but the wedding really brought them together. And how cute is the little Grease themed wedding. And the kids even dressed up!! The honeymoon. Cousin Camp. @Mrsgnomie Thank you, thank you, thank you. This was hands down the best adventure I've been on in a while. I must say, you're one hell of a tour guide. You took us on a ride. I do hope to see more from them. We NEED to see them as dads. It's essential like air and water.

Well, you'd never guess that I'm a successful accountant in one of the biggest firms around.