Well Kyle, as per usual, you went and exceeded my expectations. Honestly Dude, your 1 chapter was damn near as long as my longest total story, yet, when it ended, I was like FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK, it's done. Oh my god, the detail, the emotion, the action. Boy am I ever glad that you didn't make us read through Kandric shaming himself by having sex with that female, honestly didn't see that coming, just hope you don't intend to write about that, LOL, I'd still read it anyway. You do truly amaze me, your skill at writing is second to nearly none, and though I found many small mistakes in the editing, considering the sheer volume that you wrote, it was shockingly light, though I more than likely missed lots as well just because I was too interested in reading, the story line simply made me forget to edit like I've trained myself to do for my own work. There were only 2 areas that come to mind that I had to go back and re-read to try and figure out what you were trying to say, which considering all that you wrote, once again is amazing. I thought about how I would try and resolve them to see how I would make them clearer and more easily understood, and I'm not sure I could either, so, everyone else might just have to pause to think about them as well. I'm sure on my next read through, I'll catch a few more, but that's perfectly okay. It truly is no wonder it took so long for this chapter to come out, just the writing alone must have been time consuming, but then the editing on top of that had to have been damn near as long. So, when can we expect the next chapter. Tomorrow we all hope. I know, impossible, yet the wait, as always, will simply be too long, but you know I'll be there to read it happily when that glorious day comes. Thanks again Kyle.