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  1. LunaM.

    Chapter 5

    Seems about right. Afterall Caden is the forbidden love child of a himbo and Regina George (from the movie Mean Girls).
  2. LunaM.

    Chapter 4

    Yeah Caden grew up with a silver spoon in his mouth, so he doesn't even realizes how arrogant his behavior is. Glad to hear that you like the story so far 😊
  3. LunaM.

    Chapter 1

    Well money can't buy you happiness or friends because Caden’s won't notice he is gone till they reach the harbor. But don't worry it's just the pacific ocean, there are that many islands (just around 25000) 😆.
  4. LunaM.

    Chapter 1

    Those are very good questions, 🤐...
  5. Why? 😂
  6. Thank you 😊
  7. LunaM.

    Epilogue: Say Yes

    Thank you 😊
  8. LunaM.

    Epilogue: Say Yes

    Tbh I cried a little bit too when writing it 😅
  9. Yes it was him 😂.
  10. They were. There is actually only the epilogue left (should come out tomorrow).
  11. LunaM.

    Chapter 18- Daddy

    If Ed had punched her back he would be dead. I mean have you ever seen what an angry russian woman is capable of? It's terrifying.
  12. Yeah Alex's father can definitely burn in hell. He won't get a happy ending or redemption in any form. Alex listening skills are...... 👀🤐
  13. I'm glad you liked the mini comic. Yeah Alex definitely got a good birthday gift and next chapter will be the first date he deserves.... 😏 😈
  14. I'm glad the mini comic made you laugh 😊. Yeah Ed is at least trying for once to be more open.
  15. I'm always reading every comment here. And I agree at this point Ed seriously needs a kick in the ass.
  16. Chapter 13 and 14 are happening almost parallel to each other. And the reason why I didn't write more about what Wilhelm was telling is because I wanted to leave some stuff open for interpretation, with only some hints to what happened (like that Ed was back in his youth the kind of person that would do pranks like that with the garden gnomes).
  17. Yeah Wilhelm isn't as scary as he seems. He is actually like a brother to Ed.
  18. LunaM.

    Chapter 11- Shots

    Well that's quite the compliment 😅. Also I don't think you are ever too old to crush on a fictional character 😏.
  19. LunaM.

    Chapter 11- Shots

    It's not really his first time drunk but yeah he will definitely regret it 😈.
  20. LunaM.

    Chapter 11- Shots

    If you say "I told you so" one more time I'm gonna push you of a leader.
  21. LunaM.

    Chapter 11- Shots

    Thank you so much. I'm really glad you thought it was realistic and that you think the dialog was authentic. 😊
  22. 😅 well I only learned English 2-3 years ago so you probably can imagine how many tipos where in the original text. Without Michi's edit it would be a total mess.
  23. Oh it was definitely real 😏 How long?... A few years. So a yeah it's been a long time for Ed.
  24. Yes but....🤐
  25. 😏....🤫
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