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Justin4Fun

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  1. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 5

    Greg's beast, as part of Greg, realized that Josh was doing his duty, keeping Greg to his vow. He also knew, deep down, that Josh would never hurt him.
  2. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 10

    Time will tell...
  3. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 14

    DM me please
  4. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 14

    I need a bigger towel to wipe the smile off my face from your review!
  5. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 9

  6. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 11

    I have a bad habit of explaining things post hoc. Maybe it is my subconscious way of making you suffer through the whole story.
  7. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 9

    Don't you DARE STFU, rather, hurry up and catch up so your input can be incorporated. Your earlier observations bring to light my writing style. I don't plan out the whole story, do an outline, then fill in story, I just write. Granted, I have the original to guide me some, but we're SO FAR off the original it may as well not exist.
  8. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 7

    Drinking any type of blood seems gross to me, but of course, eating monkey brains seems gross to me yet it is a delicacy in some parts of the world. As to the reason deer blood works in place of human, no one questioned Edward when HE fed on deer... And I DO say they need SOME human blood from time to time... And as far as your last comment... no comment.
  9. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 6

    I didn't defeat you; defeat implies conflict. I converted you; you're now a changeling.
  10. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 1

    I've created an Aging Chart to help you understand my concept of vampire aging. This chart is a recent addition, and unfortunately there are a few places in the early books where I don't QUITE adhere to it, so I hope you'll excuse my mistakes.
  11. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 10

    I've created an Aging Chart to help you understand my concept of vampire aging. While some of my previous chapters might not have strictly adhered to this, this is roughly what I had in mind. As you can see, Charlie's first step may have been a bit later than it should, but we can get past that error! Well, I know I can...
  12. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 10

    Why do you assume it's Greg who will be King? Jacob has the odd eyes, and all the gang are Draculesti, so it could be anyone, even Charlie!
  13. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 10

    I wish!!!
  14. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 10

    They both have blue eyes, not a noble blue, just typical blue eyes. Sorry!!! NEXT!!!
  15. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 10

    He's only adopted 3. You can't count Charlie! It's not as bad as version one, but then again, I'm not done, am I? <EG>
  16. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 10

    “I hope this incident doesn’t ruin our day,” I said as I looked at the Baronets kneeling on the floor. “Please, stand. If any of you need to freshen up, I’m sure Andrew can assist with that. For now, I hope you’ll excuse me while I get myself cleaned up.” As I turned for the door, Andrew announced, “Ladies and gentlemen, if you follow me, I will show you to the east sitting room where you can await His Lordship’s return. Please let me know if any of you need assistance with removing blood f
  17. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 9

    I'll be happy to post longer AND more often when I make enough from my writing to quit my job. Until then...
  18. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 9

    I'm guessing you've mixed this chapter up with something else you're reading. I don't remember anywhere that talks about camping. (in tents) get it?
  19. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 9

    Scott called James and asked him to come help me prepare for the Baronets’ meeting. Billy brought me the file on each one and as we read their biographies, James gave me insight into their personalities. The first file I opened was that of Baronet Antonio Rizzo of Philadelphia. The photo showed a man who appeared to be in his late eighties with snow white hair, a large bulbous nose, and deep wrinkles on every part of his face. The eyes, however, showed a keen intellect and seemed to convey wisdo
  20. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 8

    Or the author reads a comment that points it out. I like your version though. Greg getting cornered by his own words sounds SO fun... unfortunately, if that happens, all he has to do is speak and the law is void... Ah, the magic of feudalism...
  21. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 8

    Second star to the right and straight on 'til morning? BDSM... Baronial Department of Sassy Memes?
  22. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 8

  23. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 8

    As our small motorcade pulled up in front of the Baronial office building in Pittsburgh’s strip district, I was once again amazed at how vampires remained unnoticed by human society. Here stood a six-story brick building that housed the OBR (Office of Baronial Records), the BRS (Baronial Revenue Service), the BDJ (Baronial Department of Justice), the BSS (Baronial Social Services), and the BHR (Baronial Human Resources), to name a few. Of course, there were no exterior signs indicating what the
  24. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 7

    Would you prefer I just call them Baronet 1, Baronet 2, Baronet 3, etc...?
  25. Justin4Fun

    Chapter 7

    Office of Baronial Records
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