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  1. John Henry

    Chapter 50

  2. John Henry

    Chapter 50

  3. “All rise,” the Clerk called out once again. Diego was nervous. According to Billy, Clarke didn't have any more witnesses, so it meant that Calvin had to be called. Calvin was one of the most annoying people Diego had ever met, because he refused to answer questions, especially any that would make him look bad. Judge Arthur entered and told everyone to sit. He then asked Mr. Clarke to call his next witness. “I'd like to call the Petitioner, Calvin Johnson, to the stand.” Calv
  4. John Henry

    Chapter 49

  5. John Henry

    Chapter 49

    Some very interesting theories (I particularly liked Steve's profile. 😂) I can't comment too much because a lot of this would be spoilers, except Diego does like bears and daddies. 😁
  6. John Henry

    Chapter 49

    There's only one way to find out!
  7. John Henry

    Chapter 49

    I think I largely do that, but it's the stuff I do know that's the boring stuff.
  8. John Henry

    Chapter 49

    I would love to pawn them off to someone who actually likes writing all that boring shit. I'd love nothing more than to pretend like I don't know what a leading question is, what constitutes a hostile witness and how to handle them, etc. It would make all this so much faster to get through, but I'm dedicated to being as accurate to my limited knowledge as I can.
  9. John Henry

    Chapter 49

    Clinical Depression isn't enough to lose custody in the US. Hell, it isn't enough to lose your gun rights. As for the "treatment," I can get behind that. Yes, I wanted a "Daddy" call back. There was just too much heaviness to the chapter still, so a nice (even cheap) laugh felt right.
  10. John Henry

    Chapter 49

    When I wrote that, I more assumed that Billy was just making a flippant insult, accusing the judge of having Freudian Issues; however, I like your assumption better, but I would see it more of Billy bitching and Trevor making an off-handed remark about small penises and over compensating, which Billy ran with. As for Caleb, I'm he'll have his own opportunity to crash with the dads.
  11. John Henry

    Chapter 49

    Agreed, a light chapter was required; John Grisham I am not. I think Bryan opening up is a natural part of his progression as a character, especially with Steve, and it felt right to do it in this chapter and in this way.
  12. John Henry

    Chapter 49

    Yes, dealing with Calvin is depressing. I don't think that was ever in doubt. Lol
  13. John Henry

    Chapter 49

    I felt short and sweet was needed. The courtroom scenes are draining on me, so these little breaks help. As for the suits, that'll be done in the background.
  14. Diego did his best to not slam things around as he made dinner. He loved his fiancé just as much as he loved his sons, so it was difficult for him to talk to Steve about the bullshit Billy pulled in court. Steve, Billy and Ry had been friends since they were about Caleb's age, and though they fell out of touch for several years, the three were really close since reconnecting. Billy's antics in court were becoming too much for Diego to handle. Steve sat in the living room only half paying at
  15. John Henry

    Chapter 8

  16. John Henry

    Chapter 8

    I think everyone is reading into Liam's comment way too much. To me, Liam was just confirming he's gay and using Mike's statement to make his point. Even if Liam is heteroflexible, bisexual, pansexual, etc., it doesn't really matter. What matters is that Liam and Mike are together. I get the fear that Liam won't be out to everyone, but there isn't any proof of it. In fact, Mike's comment about sending Olivia the emoji suggests that they were talking about Liam, which confirms that she knows Liam was into Mike (as if we hadn't already figured it out.)
  17. John Henry

    Chapter 48

    David always seems to know what I want to say/express. Lol
  18. John Henry

    Chapter 48

  19. John Henry

    Chapter 8

    This was a great surprise to wake up to after a rough nights sleep. Again, I love how Liam is with Mike. He's being sweet and caring, even when Mike is panicking or getting things wrong. As for his behavior towards his parents, though, it is typical teenage behavior, but it makes me wounder what else is going on. He went from being best friends with the twins to disliking them. Their reactions when he joined them for video games last chapter also seemed odd, like they were hesitantly shocked that he was even there; of course, I could've been reading into more than what was there, but it seemed like they weren't sure what his motives were at the time, though they did end up seeming happy later on. I can't wait to read the next chapter (of course), and I'm good with short chapters, as well, but will never complain about the longer ones. This is too good of a story to fuss over chapter length; besides, it isn't about the length of the chapter, it's about the girth of the content. Girth over length, gentlemen, girth over length.
  20. John Henry

    Chapter 48

  21. John Henry

    Chapter 48

  22. John Henry

    Chapter 48

  23. John Henry

    Chapter 48

    Seems like you're trying to trick me into saying what Calvin's motives are, and you almost got me. 🤣
  24. John Henry

    Chapter 48

    Maaaybe....😏
  25. John Henry

    Chapter 48

    When I wrote this, I was expecting to get a bunch of hate towards Ashley for lying, not for Billy doing his job. 😕
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