Hardianarcher

@Seraph28 it certainly is 😂

@VBlew You picked up on everything! 🙌 With only three chapters left, there’s still so much to unravel—both in Zain’s world and in Redwaters. Every character is about to be tested in ways they never expected, and everything they thought they knew will be pushed to the edge. Buckle in… it’s about to get intense. 😈Thank you for your comment ! ✨

@Seraph28 Thank you for the comment! I promise it’s not me being mean—it’s just the way the story wants to unfold 😅 Cliffhangers are part of the deal, right? And honestly… you haven’t even seen the worst of it yet 😂 Buckle up!

Hadrian hated himself. Hated the words he’d forced out of his mouth—each one a blade meant for Zain but carving deeper into his own flesh. He told himself it was necessary, that ending it was the only way to keep Zain safe. But the lie was bitter. He was the one who wished the possession had never ended. He was the one who wanted to stay recklessly at Zain’s side, cost be damned. He had believed, with a faith that terrified him, that Antinous and Hadrian were right to consume each other in

@andy cannonThank you so much for your message! Can’t wait to have your feedbacks! You also have access to the corrected version: from chapter 1 to 14 for better pacing 🫶🏼

@VBlewThank you so much for you comment! 🫶🏼 it was a heavy chapter, but everything will soon come to a close ( final chapters very soon)

@Seraph28 It was…😢

Chapter 18 Hadrian’s throne was not merely marble and gold; it was an altar to power, the apex of the known world. Rome sprawled at his feet—dust of Hispania, mist of Britannia, sun-scorched Syria—each territory a verse in his living epic. Below the dais, the Great Hall pulsed with orchestrated chaos: courtiers, envoys, priests. Voices layered like incense smoke, ambition and worship woven into one. And yet, Hadrian’s attention was narrowed to a single, intimate ritual. A

@VBlew I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter!✨ As for the bracelet…let’s say that it will bring a fresh perspective to Hadrian and Zain’s relationship…

@andy cannon Thank you so much for your comment! If you enjoyed that part the next one won’t disappoint 😉🤞🏼

@Seraph28 🤞🏼😂🫶🏼

@Seraph28 Thank you! Yes, I’ll stick around to finish the story no matter how long it might take 😂 hope you enjoyed the new chapter 🫶🏼

Chapter 17 Memory did not return to Zain in pieces. It came like a flood, rushing fast and merciless, dragging him under. The suns. The laughter. The sting of a first heartbreak. Every detail was waiting for him, sharp as the day it was carved into his skin. He was sixteen again. A boy, not yet the man he had been forced to become. Standing in the courtyards of his mother’s kingdom, watching as the boys of a neighboring clan spilled through the gates. They filled the space like

@Seraph28Haha you caught me red-handed! I did go there 😈💔—Malik deserved better, I know. But his fate had to shake the board a little... and let’s just say, the storm ahead needed thunder to roll in first. As for Bashar... no comment, but I’m nodding very aggressively behind the screen 😂👏 I promise the next Chapter will make the heartbreak worth it. And who knows, in Redwaters... not even death is always the end. Thank you for reading—and for surviving an emotional whiplash during Easter! You’re a real one 🥚💥👑

@gmc Always so happy to read your feedbacks! Hope the story keeps its promises for you!