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HARRYWALTER

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  1. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 6

    Bad Oops I fear!!
  2. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 6

    Oops!!!
  3. Once again the language is impecable!
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    Tahoe

    Interesting start! The audience comments seem to be getting almost as long as the chapter!
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    Chapter 4

    How I love a happy ending, or?
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    Goodbye Is Forever

    Once again, the language is beautifully of its time.
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    This Charming Man

    A slow burn but the wording of the time is impecable!
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    My Hidden Accounts

    The language and tone are excellent for the period. I look forward to reading the following chapters!
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    Chapter 6

    Great story! Trump a half cast alien, explains a lot! Definitely needs continuation!
  10. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 3

    Curiouser and courioser said Alice!
  11. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    Excellent old pulp sci-fi action!
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    Chapter 34

    A great ending to a great series. More, More, More!
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    Chapter 31

    The phrase "he let us know he was pregnant" stopped me in my tracks briefly, until I realised it was just a missing "s"!
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    Chapter 15

    Another, (as expected) great chapter!
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    Chapter 10

    Dammit, you owe me another box of tissues!
  16. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 6

    A joyous chapter; the Old Spot part was a hoot!
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    Chapter 4

    And I think you will find it's "you're"
  18. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 4

    As with the Volvo stories,your time jumps are a bit disconcerting!
  19. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 4

    As with the Volvo stories,your time jumps are a bit disconcerting!
  20. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 3

    I cried my eyes out!
  21. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    Chuckles!
  22. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 4

    A truly great story, how I love a happy ending!
  23. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    Very good start. The nastiest thing that ever happened to humanity was monathiestic religion!
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    Chapter 4

    1. Great story, well told. 2. If the letter, rather than the spirit of the 2nd amendment was followed, then any gun owner would have to be a member of a government recognised militia. 3 I suspect Raven1 meant disenchanted, rather than disfranchised (unless American English/Grammar has diverged radically from the English varient!)
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    Chapter 2

    A sad and disturbing chapter, beautifully written.
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