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HARRYWALTER

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  1. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    Very good start. The nastiest thing that ever happened to humanity was monathiestic religion!
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    Chapter 4

    1. Great story, well told. 2. If the letter, rather than the spirit of the 2nd amendment was followed, then any gun owner would have to be a member of a government recognised militia. 3 I suspect Raven1 meant disenchanted, rather than disfranchised (unless American English/Grammar has diverged radically from the English varient!)
  3. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 2

    A sad and disturbing chapter, beautifully written.
  4. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 13

    An excellent series of stories. With a soft pedal on the boy sex (but you probably wouldnt want that) I could easily see this being in Analog or Fantasy and Science Fiction.
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    Chapter 5

    Made me cry (and thats the highest praise I could give it!)
  6. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    An excellent start to an interesting story! One tiny quibble, unless American English is rather different to English English, I think the line should read "the anticipation was palpable as the gathered crowd........"
  7. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    I have in the past enjoyed this author's stories, however I was only able to read the first few paragraphs of this without wanting to throw up. Death of a homosexual by a bunch of religious sadistic, sodamistic zealots is not something I find in the least entertaining!
  8. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 7

    Great story, well finished!
  9. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    Good start!
  10. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 3

    Good, but wish fullfilment fanasy perhaps?
  11. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 5

    I do love a happy ending!
  12. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 5

    A sweet, sweet story!
  13. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 3

    This is starting to resemble an Agatha Christie Poirot case!
  14. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 8

    I read this series way after a later series when I commented Joe? Godfather? Chuffed to see I was right!
  15. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 6

    Hm, Joe and Godfather spring to mind. Great story.
  16. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 4

    A bit???
  17. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 2

    Her only family is her mother? Does not a aunt count?
  18. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    I'm crying!
  19. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    A sweet, sweet little story.
  20. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    Sweet story!
  21. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    A heartwarming story!
  22. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    Great story! The line "Quiet as a church mouse in a home for wayward tomcats" is something I will have to drop into conversation in my local pub one night!
  23. HARRYWALTER

    The Umbereth

    Woo! a very hard read!
  24. HARRYWALTER

    Chapter 1

    More, more, more!
  25. Made me cry!
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