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OK thanks for catching that. No clue what happened there. I'll fix it. Have to read through it. Brand anyerism apparently. OH there's nooo excuse. She is a damaged baby fruit bat doing all the bad things. No justification. Just the reason evil was created in this case. Sometimes just pretending you don't know is bad enough there's a big parallel with the kids. In the beginning some of them were drawn. It will make more sense in the next chapter when all kinds of his lls breaks loose.

Alexis isn't Emily. I might have botched that somewhere. I'll have to look. She just wasn't always Alexis Ainsley. Who she was remains to be seen. But her daughter was Emily. Hehe yes...very wealthy family, lots of connections, old money type scandals. She didn't kill her parents. But they are dead! She definitely knows who is leading the Lost Boys now and does she care...mmm remains to be seen. As for her mom, in the back of your mind, keep the idea of the violence against the mothers for the future...and that she's created these killers. And who is friend and who is foe?.... You ask great questions. Stay tuned!

Thanks @CincyKris! I had all of the chapters edited so the spelling and grammar are corrected and the actual writing is tighter so here's hoping it lends to better readability. The new chapter is intense. A lot of A HAH! moments... there will be even more in the upcoming chapters. I may keep them a little shorter simply because so much is happening so quickly and I don't want to overstimulate anyone. Bit it shall be completed by the end of the summer. I can't wait to hear what you think of the recently posted chapter.

Aww I appreciate that Cane. He is the director of the fbi, one of the most powerful men in the country. So she couldn't get to him immediately would have to be a buildup. He could have destroyed her especially because they were other players involved. He wasn't the only man who assaulted her, so there are a lot of high profile men involved who want to protect ft their secrets. He and her father were also very close so James has had the power to "fix" all sorts of things... (Emily) Alexis planned to take him down, but things fell apart before she could, so she's just been biding her time carefully. She knew that things would eventually repeat themselves, and she's been waiting on Griffin to become a crucial part of it. She is manipulative to the EXTREME and she will get what she wants. Wait for the next chapter.. LOL it's going to be wild! Things will move at a very fast pace from here on out.

“It’s not so important who starts the game, but who finishes it.” — John Wooden Hindsight is always twenty-twenty. The adage is an ancient one that people routinely trot out for comfort, willfully skipping over the fact that knowing what is spiraling toward you rarely helps you dodge it. It is the narrative equivalent of sensing an impending breakup weeks before the words leave your lover’s mouth, yet refusing to pack a bag and get the hell out of dodge. Or watching the sa

Thanks so much @Cane23. I don't know if I ever told you but somebody did actually edit the whole thing for me. They went back and just pulled the pieces for me off of the site and edited at their pleasure LOL I guess some of my sentences and things just irritated them but I agree with most of the grammar if not the character edits. I just have to go through them and finalize it. I've been sick for a few months so I would feel better that something posted and then fall back to little bits and snotty pieces again. Still sick but trying to move forward! Thanks for the support as always!

Thanks that one is on hold for a bit because I have so many to finish and I just got behind. Illness and holidays are not a good combination. The end of the year just came up on me too hard. But trying to get through everything that I have up in the air this year

Thanks so much for the feedback! I got the notifications that you were whipping through it. I was curious what you'd think. Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed it! I'm trying to finish Studs and Spurs which is also light.

Chapter 12 is the coffeehouse date and 13 is where the spice starts. You're almost there. It's not a straight a to Z romance.. Most of my repeat readers know how I roll by now

LOL yeah it's a long one. It wasn't better red when I posted it at the time. Someone has since been so for me but I haven't gone through all of the edits yet so I haven't reposted it. It's definitely a heavier story then most of my others. It will pick up I think it's around chapter 12 or 13. I don't know I think 14 is definitely a smutty chapter. There's a couple that are just pierce my but there's a lot of character and detail work because this is the first novel in the series. The finding Home Series which is going to be a lot of interconnected stories involving the characters that appear in Halos and heroes. So there's just a lot of ground work laid out. Tara will have her own story. Max and Roman will have their own story. Even andrew Whelan listed detective will have his own story. So there's a lot of stuff going on in the future. Just keep plugging away at it. Step away when you need to and get to the end. I promise that most people think it's worth it!

I am curious about that as well. I also find that with albums if you delete a photo it doesn't give you that space back. So many times I have had to completely delete an album to then add pictures back or to change a photo . It'll say that there's 20 out of whatever photos but there's only five in the album because I deleted or changed or whatever. So that I would like to be figured out maybe and also maybe have more than the number of albums we currently are allowed simply because I use it as a way to track my characters in the stories but I find that I have to truncate at times.

@Cane23 lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!! I feel the judgement from here!!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Yesssssss! Oh that's good. I wasn't sure about having to go soon earlier but when you suggested it it just ended up writing itself in a way that made more sense. Simpler for me too because it was a lot less breaking my brain with police procedural . So I needed less of those details and just want the twistedness between the two of them lol. And yes she's so angry because he played her game but he leveled up. For the first part of the chapter she was winning and even when he got a little ahead of her , she always attacked harder and was pulling him deeper down into the deep end. Like you said the irony is that she's telling him to embrace who he is and the moment that he does she doesn't like it. He literally is talking to ghosts and exposing who he is and she is still angry . Because it didn't happen the way that she wanted. Because as you said, she wanted him to touch her. At this point she has nothing to lose and she understands that. Manipulating him into revealing everything that he is is the last game that you can play. Annnnnnnnd..... I love my readers lOL I love you all because you either pick up on things that I miss , or you give me even more ideas. Or you guys are just really been picking up those details before I have elaborated on them . So Bravo to you and all of you . This is why I feed back is so important to authors. Yes, she did slap him bare-handed so what is he going to feel especially when she's in this rage? Get prepared for a little bit more crazy right now everything is just kind of swirling around but Sean is watching . So is everyone else and the s*** just hit the fan . Can you imagine if you were watching this unfold? They're all people of logic and Science and psychology. I don't know if those are going to fly! Thank you so much as always for commenting and for making my heart giggle . You and @Cane23 always seem to pick up those details.

@Cane23 @Cane23 Merry Christmas! I'm happy I got it it finished before. Maybe it will be done by new year's eve lol. This was a long brain-hurting chapter. Thank you for taking the time to get through it . I really appreciate it. He definitely should and he will. It's going to be a wild ride up to the last word of the next chapter which will be shorter (thank the Lord!) and then the last chapter and epilogue. Whew! Lots of mysteries solved, relationships betrayed, psychotic broken people and children, ghosts and just a shit show. Strap in and enjoy the rise!

“A question that sometimes drives me hazy: am I or are the others crazy?” -Albert Einstein Under the watchful eye of the government, the Federal Medical Center, Carswell—a U.S. federal prison located in Fort Worth, Texas, on the northeast corner of the Naval Air Station Joint Reserve Base Fort Worth—housed inmates incarcerated at various security levels. Once a co-ed federal prison, the facility had shifted in the mid-2000s to a specialized, female-only medical center. Wit