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Both? In the beginning this story was just supposed to show the ugly truth behind the sacred burials in the stone; Kalten was just supposed to show some bitter defiance. Only later I got the thought of "you could do something with that end note". It still stands like this as a one-shot. Anyone wants to read on? Cool. Anyone who got the hint and says no thanks? Also cool, won't miss important things.
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You are hoping wrong. Every bit of nutrient down there is needed. Absolutely.
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Kalten hated priests, and this one in particular. The exaggerated gestures, the plastered-on smile, the words dripping with grandeur, and the slowness meant to convey dignity but which only betrayed his age. “—and the honor of a commander—” To outsiders, it might have seemed reverent, but anyone like Kalten, who had been hearing the same old phrases for years, knew that Priest Khorvan was merely spouting stock phrases about the profession in question, embellished with the name of the deceas
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In a world where orcs and humans are forced to live in symbiosis, only one thing is certain and for everyone the same: death. And gravedigger Kalten is one of the few who actually knows what comes after...
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Dremakk couldn’t have said how the ceremony was structured or what the priest was saying. He knelt when he was supposed to, stood when given the signal, and repeated the words he was supposed to repeat. The figure beside him, clad in pure white, trembled as he held her hand and whispered the words so softly they were barely audible. When it was time to lift the veil, a chalk-pale girl appeared from beneath it, her lower lip trembling. Everything in Dremakk rebelled against slipping the deli
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I have plans for probably a dozen stories, most of them on the shorter side. I tend to agree... Yeah, Karla and Violet represent two extremes and neither is helping a truly scared bride. Though to be honest, there are not that few woman out there who admire certain anatomical parts...
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Susanna tossed and turned, staring at the ceiling in the dim light cast by the glowing spots on the wall. The nightgown they had given her was incredibly soft, as was the mattress she was lying on. But she couldn’t sleep. She felt as if she were sinking into the softness, suffocating. Ever since she’d set foot inside the mountain, nearly every breath had been torture, as if the air itself were dead down here. Every stone passageway looked the same; the dim twilight robbed her of any sense o
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Just when he thought he'd hit rock bottom, he got thrown even lower... At least Susanna will learn that the orc she's afraid of is not the raping monster she imagines...
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In a world where humans and orcs are forced to live in symbiosis, not everyone can choose for themselves how to live their life. And often enough it's forced to take an unexpected turn, same for Susanna and Dremakk. Some turns are negotiable, though...
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Someone entered the large tent, bringing with them a refreshing breeze. Susanna took a deep breath and turned the cup in her hand. Out of the corner of her eye, she could see the orc shaman, who had been sitting on one of the crates for a while, scrutinizing the group of young women. He made her nervous. A forced giggle from one of the women reached her ears, and she swallowed, but her mouth was dry. When she raised the cup to her lips, she realized it was empty. Not that the mushroom beer
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Letters between the sisters Elisabeth and Catherine; unrightfully copied by a courier. Dearest Sister, There are only a few months left until the tithe, and I’m so excited! Mother bought me a new dress, it’s a very pale yellow, and we’re currently embroidering the hem with little green clay beads; it’s turning into a beautiful vine pattern. I wish you could see it. Aunt Agatha has braided one of those leather strands with colorful beads in it. Actually, there are two: one for my neck
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Legend says, she got severely hurt in a battle against The Void and needed a save place to rest and heal. Shortly thereafter bits and pieces of the Frosty Shield aka moon well into the swamp, which the orcs interpreted as their call to help protect the world. By now recreating a proper timeline is difficult, because the orcs started writing down things for real preservation only after reaching the mountains, as to not lose their past.
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Before the orcs came as protectors, and honestly even now, the humans are somewhat crippeld by their fear of the void beasts. Their seafaring doesn't reach farther than the island off the coast; and otherwise they would never venture further than where the silverdrop bushes grow. The centaurs are not exactly keen on crossing an unknown desert either (and no one else as well). I do think, however, that the old orcs, before the happenings leading to the exodus, knew more of what lies east of the swamps. If the legends are true, they probably deemed it too unhealthy to try to get involved with two unknown forces constantly at war.
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Extract from: Myths and Legends, Section 1: Foundations: The Number 8 by Wilfried Riverside (Note from the publisher: this print is unedited since its first edition. In the nearly 100 years since then, some of the written down information might have changed.) The number 8 is deeply interwoven with orc culture. This begins with the fact that the Old Mother designated eight orc women as her chosen daughters, making them both high priestesses and the matriarchs of the eight cl
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Lots of fairytales and such end with a kiss or a wedding and then fade to "and they lived happily ever after". This is... like the dark heart-broken version? I mean I promised heartbreak already in the title. Thokk is only 21, his grand plan stemmed from youthful hubris and a short-sightedness regarding the plans, motivations and feelings of others. Warriors may not make up the majority of society, but they lead it, and shamans are therefore on the margins. As we saw at the beginning, Thokk also deliberately chose not to integrate, even though he could have, there were enough warriors his age around for him to make friends. He lacks the social skills that Henry, as part of active village life, definitely has, and which have allowed him to listen and draw conclusions, whereas Thokk arrogantly snaps at servants, doesn’t bother to learn names, and follows rigid role models. Now it all depends on how Thokk acts from here on, how he develops. Either he’ll break and plunge the court into ruin, or he’ll become a not-quite-so-gray eminence who shapes the court with a cold, shamanistic hand. (I lean toward the latter, besides, he’s too proud to run after Henry.)
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Those questions remain for your fantasy for we will move forward in the series of little stories.
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As they passed through the heavy gates granting entry beneath the mountain in this region, Thokk felt deep within himself the nervous unease that was evident in Henry. The time for long conversations and gentle touches before falling asleep was over—for now. The group quarters available to travelers inside the mountain offered no privacy whatsoever. But even more than that, Thokk was worried about the court. He had left it, barely organized, for weeks. Korgar had no idea how to lead and did
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Humans beneath the Mountain: A Warning
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Humans beneath the Mountain: A Warning
That for sure. -
Humans beneath the Mountain: A Warning
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in Humans beneath the Mountain: A Warning
Henry has every possibility to thrive! -
by Samuel Johannsohn and Josephine Annegretsdochter Many of us believe that a life beneath the mountain is one of great wealth, free from worries and hardships. This is far from the truth. Although many women dream of such a safe life, it's not up to her, whether she is chosen as a Tithe Bride and becomes an Archmother. And if the choice does not align with her own wishes, she is taken beneath the mountain against her will. Engagements—and even marriages, if the couple remains c
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I'm giving you already one more... And I might point to the title of this story...
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The weather didn’t really improve on the journey back to the mountain; a fine drizzle was a constant companion, the wind swept across the plains, and it froze at night. The campfire was more important than ever now that they had a human in the group, and whoever was on watch at night had to make sure that a piece of dried wood from the silver-drop bush was always smoldering at the edge of the fire. Henry seemed to be very deliberately ignoring the danger, and Thokk was just as aware that he coul
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The Void, Void Beasts and their Rifts
Celian commented on Celian's story chapter in The Void, Void Beasts and their Rifts
This information (those 2 chapters at least, it might change later) is generalized, from humans for humans. The edition we are reading here is maybe 20 years old. That said, the orcs won't share all their knowledge and secrets and studies with the humans of course. PS: somewhere in my notes there are short stories including the topic of the Festival of Life and the mysterious cure... -
excerpts from: The World We Live In. An Introductory Text for Younger Students. by Karl-Friedrich of Bellinghill, Scholar of the Wilderness edited and expanded by Samuel Johannsohn The Void is nothingness, darkness—the counterpart to the Old Mother. It is not-being, but not death. The Void and the Old Mother have been fighting each other since the beginning of their existence, and ever since the Old Mother has been sleeping beneath the mountains, the children (or soldiers) of
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When they spoke in the bath Thokk thought Korgar understood that this would be some sort of ruse. Like, "I'll tell a little lie so you get what you want and can give me what I want". Apparently Korgar didn't get it, believed in the steam/smoke reading and Thokk had to improvise something that sounds great as prophecy. I don't think he's obtuse. But whether he's receptive or whether it's just playful teasing (referring to the little flashback moment in chapter 5) is hard to say at this moment. But the next chapter (should be the last) should give you an answer.
