Oh, wow. I read it on Nifty, and just made sure that I sent my feedback to you more than a year ago So I'm surprised and happy to see this story going back to Nifty. Well, I've forgot what it was telling, so I went back to re-read chapter 5 again to let the memory come back.
Reading the above comments I just realize that there are other stories going on. I'll read them some time soon. And - please keep writing. I'm looking forward to seeing how Nate, Corey, and/or even Max will be going.