Pottery

I look forward to new chapters of your stories—this story was my favorite so far.

So, men who thought they were dangerous and in control find out they are indeed small players in a much grander scenario. The sheriff is a smarter part of the protection plan than we suspected. No killing of minor players here, but we do want Vane to suffer more than a warning. Excellent chapter—well worth the wait.

I’m sorry, but I am still wondering about how Taggert’s ownership of key parts of the Yoder ranch is going to play out. What is the status of that ownership? Rebecca at the auction with folders and the statement to Zane to listen to the file implied something about it but I am not sure what. Taggert has fifty thousand dollars plus a share in Nasser and still a share in Yoder? Wonderful story with characters you made us care about—which is why I am still worried for Taggert.

You don’t need to apologize for ending your story where it felt finished. As a reader, I love a good conclusion. We all feel sad when a story we’ve enjoyed gets too long and then goes unfinished. Readers appreciate more books if the characters have more stories to tell, and story arcs are most satisfying when they come to a conclusion.

I always appreciate when authors finish all the little stories that exist around the main story. It’s nice to know how the supporting characters end up in these wonderful little universes authors create. Thank you for telling about Daniel, Mateo, and Gabe in this final chapter.