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“Oh! Oh, god.” sums it all up for me. Pure fire🔥

Your narration of this event, with photos, was better than being a fly on the wall. I agree @dboggs9700. I really love that quote.

A child seems a great way of expressing Sky and Brant's love. The acknowledgement of their support system and the celebration of their anniversary with this special group of people has me thinking a major event is coming. I love the romance and groundedness of this story. It feels real with consequences that go beyond reading the words on the page. I'm emotionally invested in this story.

Thanks for your response, and for sharing the creation and arc of Hector's character.

I am very appreciative of the subplot of Hector's decisions. We've watched Sky and Brant's lives/roles change. Brant made a BIG change when he declared his love for Sky. Both were in positions to weather the storm with support networks and paths insured more or less by birth and success. Now we are able to witness a more difficult life change that is not only about career and love, but also about culture, self acceptance, and a woman who Hector has professed to love. Will old school machismo win out or will Hector lead a life to beat of his own drummer? @KKirk you have written a very complex character in a complex story. That is the beauty of your writing and the secret to our enjoyment.

Hooray! My favorite family is back. What does our brilliant @Robert Hugill have in store for us? I can hardly wait to dig in!

I am on 🔥 after reading this chapter. Incredible imagery in your writing. Truly one of this best written sex scenes. Bravo!!

I agree with @VBlew. This storyline is being handled maturely and with great thought. I'm really enjoying this throuple without directly participating.

I'll have what's he's having....

Even their open and honest conversations are sexy🔥🔥🔥

[Later Timothy told me he paused at the door as he was bringing in water and towels for us. He was stunned by the beauty of our bodies stacked on the bed. When he recovered, he brought our water bottles and towels to the edge of the bed where he laid them before leaving. He said that was all he needed to want desperately to see the movie.] Me too....😅

Great sensitivity in this chapter. I love that characters listen to each other.

Thank you @KKirk for giving us this deeply emotional storyline in the midst of lust and other true emotions. Your commentary at the beginning and end of each chapter are thought provoking. I appreciate the opportunities to think and digest that you are providing your readers.

My fellow readers have accurately written the thoughts I have in my head. I will say that I am enjoying the openness of Hector's experience. There are those of us for whom 'straight men' are a fantasy. While we may creatively think of what those men may say or think, it is gratifying to read those words attributed to such a beautiful, sexy man who is enjoying his sexuality. I am certainly enjoying this side of Hector. He may go home to Juanita, but Bransky is embedded in his mind and his taste buds.

"Looking deeply into Hector’s eyes, I smiled and said, “I’m a bit intimidated by your huge cock, but I’m going to take it all or choke to death trying.”" - Wow!!

To quote Hector, "F*ck".

@KKirk your writing makes me feel like I am right there in the middle of the action. Loving it all!!

Wow. So hot....The first sex scenes of the new movie are incendiary. The emotions and reality of the movie are in sync with the real life of the characters. I'm enjoying this blur. @KKirk you are off to a superb start. We're loving it and wanting more!!

Looking forward to lights, camera, and action from Sky, Brant and Hector😈

Welcome to the major leagues! Brant and Sky have joined the elite level of "A" listers with their award nominations. They have worked hard, the work keeps coming and so does the adoration of the fans. I'm happy for them!!

Alex & Neil: Moving On is a wonderful story about opposites, support, dreams, chances, and love. When our heroes meet, we can't imagine them getting much further than one or two dates. @Robert Hugill weaves us a tale of relationships and warmth that draws us in until the very end. The characters are funny genuine, endearing and special with sensitivities, quirks and personalities that certainly remind us of people that we know or have encountered. Well written and thought out, this tale is easy to read and will have you anticipating the next chapter. I am so glad that I have found what is called the Hugillverse and plan to read all the works in his collection.

This chapter provided another glimpse into the lives of Sky and Brant. @KKirk your writing shines as you unveil each and every chapter. I hang on every word of each chapter until the next chapter is posted. Thank you. I really enjoy your work!!

Well it seems that Alex and Neil are truly about to Move On. It has been an enjoyable journey being a part of the their lives. You've introduced us to an endearing cast of characters as you told their story. Each man has grown individually and collectively in a most satisfying way. It was a mature and realistic tale for men of their age and growing stature. I will miss them, but I never say never. Perhaps they will pop up in another story as minor characters. I hope not as I would want to know how they got there from here. Thank you @Robert Hugill for sharing your creativity, sensitivity and storytelling abilities!

Great chapter @KKirk as we bring Hector (and Juanita) into the Living Large family. I think Hector will be an asset to the film. I'm not sure that he will be with Juanita after filming as I am sure he will grow emotionally and experientially though his relationship with Bransky. I'm not wishing ill will upon Juanita as she is a key player and dear friend, but her man has feelings that he needs to explore. Juanita is sacrificing too. Her offer to be tested is generous, understanding and supportive of the trio. Congrats to Rachel on her Golden Globe win. It must be tough being in a family so talented, but they seem to support each other's career without jealousy. I hope that director David will support our guys with a crew and set that ensures their comfort and success. We want those sex scenes to be honest, open and hot like those in Laying Low.