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Such a joy to read and each chapter takes us deeper into the lives of Alex and Neil. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

What a great story. There was so much heart in this story. Not all of us have positive coming out stories. In my own personal one, I decided to leave rather than go through the uncertainties that stifled Owen. I did have to make choices, contrary to family, that put me out there on my own. The character of Owen reflects the lives of so many. I saw elements of my own family in those around Owen. It was hard reading about his doubts and watching him make mistakes. It wasn't a certain that it was a happy ending we were moving towards. Should it be or should it be realistic? I'm happy to have gotten both. @mastershakeme your wrote this story brilliantly. It captured us from the beginning. I don't think that those of us who have followed these twists and turns would be adverse to reading a sequel. There is much to explore in the story of Owen and Ryder. We're there for you no matter your choice. Thanks!!

Well Done @mastershakeme!!!!!!

This is the story of one young man who pledges a fraternity and at the same time lives his wildest dreams. Loved every minute of it. Go ahead...indulge!

Always happy to catch with these two....I really enjoy the honesty and discovery between them.

I enjoyed this adventure. It truly matched my wildest expectations of life in a frat house. It can't just be beer, pizza and sports on tv. Thanks for your writing and I look forward to reading more.

At first I thought that VBS and the children would be a torture for Owen. @mastershakeme you masterfully use them to be the sages of this story. Out of the mouth of babes...truth in all of its forms. Brilliant. I experienced 40 years of their wisdom and love. I was blessed and many of them are still in my life in many different ways and memories.

I've been thinking Six Feet Under since I started reading this story, because of the funeral home and the brother, David, who was living in the closet as the perfect son to take over the family business. Loved this show, the actors and the writing. I certainly recommend it to those not adverse to watching series programming.

As a former teacher, I recognize the healing powers children can have for adults...children see all and, as stated, are very honest...

I so agree. The direction of this story feels so familiar to me. I grew up in a family where my grandfather was a minister not a mortician. I was smart and everyone decided I would be the one to pin the hopes of having a doctor in the family. Fast forward to college. After starting PreMed, I switched to my love of the theatre as a major. The family got over it eventually. Then there is my sexuality. We never dealt with it. I simply never moved back home after college. We still haven't talked about it. Love this story and the way you are telling it. Eager to see how it develops.

I'm enjoying the read. The subject matter and pace remind me of living in NYC, windows that expose you and offer you great views of people you might never meet on the street. You learn things without ever having a conversation. I miss that as I now live in the California desert.

Enjoying the banter as these two explore Munich. They make a cute couple and are getting more and more comfortable with each other which tells us more about them. Like the style of revealing rather than straight narration. Looking forward to more of Alex and Neil.

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Thanks for great characters and a great story....sexy and most enjoyable...you write good Bro sex, man....

Liking the clueless nature of them both.....makes it hotter and more real as they learn from each other for each other...

Feels like I'm right there with them. Hot session and it's not over yet...

This story is off to a great start with a proper amount of mystery and tension....Jesse and Bailey have some serious chemistry to work with....

Thank you Mark for this perfect distraction from this year's abysmal celebration of the 4th of July. It is good to be in the presence of a good and faithful servant Granger. He is so polished and you want him to do well at every turn. What's in store may be troubling, but I've no doubt that he will overcome. Happy Fourth of July!!

Enjoyed this fun and steamy story!!

Whatta Man, Whatta Man, Whatta Man...🔥🔥🔥

Liking the premise of this story...interesting characters so far...starting to feel some vibrations and heat...it's often the children who are the 'problem'...it's refreshing that it's a 'Dad' that is causing the ruckus...looking forward to more....😈

The sexiness and the heat are palpable from my desk....Wow, these two are in heat for one another...Great speech, by the way....

I've missed Granger and he is back in full swing. Thanks @Mark Arbour!!

Yay for Neil...it can be such a long and winding road. I hope that Alex can be there in a measured sense to provide him with some guidance.

This chapter caused me to think about the mentors in my life...the counsel, the benefits, the lifestyle, and the affairs....I get it. Thanks!