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You write such good dialogue. I felt myself sitting at the table with Julian and Oliver.
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Ken, I can only echo the praise and thanks you are getting for an outstanding story. Not only is the subject endearing and sexy as hell, but the lives of the characters are touching and deepen with each chapter. Every character has become important in telling this story and we look forward to each installment. We care about them and want to know they are okay. Enjoy your accolades, but more importantly stay the course as you see fit. We love where you have taken us so far and trust you to the end. Best, @CCinPS
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Juanita exhibited exceptional compassion and understanding during her interview with David. Perhaps her love for Hector will allow her to do the same for him when they discuss his reality. Will they both be brokenhearted?
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I believe that the three guys could survive the throuple + couple, but it all depends on if Juanita can share to that extent. A possible scenario would be for them to all in live in the same house. Another would be for Hector to live in his own place and to flow where the spirit moves him. It's an interesting set of circumstances. Thank you to our author for presenting this very real storyline with engaging characters. You've given us much to think about. Ultimately, the decision will be posted in your final chapter. We wait with bated breath.
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A great cliffhanger...Hector's reaction not entirely unexpected. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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More houses & drawing a line
CCinPS commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in More houses & drawing a line
This house as you describe it sounds like the perfect fit for our family of four. Having purchased my first home eight years ago, I remember the realization that compromise and imagination would be an integral part of moving forward. My husband and I have done two renovations so far. It's 85% where we'd like it. One more renovation should do it. I hope the guys have great fun and a good experience with this place if they decide to purchase. It's possible! -
@KKirk thanks for a wonderfully entertaining chapter. I loved Hollywood on Netflix. There were so many truths exposed about "the Business". Race, class, sexuality, jealousy, greed were all present in the storylines. The casting was amazing and quite a few new talents were introduced. The things people did and still do to get a project made. Thanks for referring it to your readers.
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“Oh! Oh, god.” sums it all up for me. Pure fire🔥
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Your narration of this event, with photos, was better than being a fly on the wall. I agree @dboggs9700. I really love that quote.
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A child seems a great way of expressing Sky and Brant's love. The acknowledgement of their support system and the celebration of their anniversary with this special group of people has me thinking a major event is coming. I love the romance and groundedness of this story. It feels real with consequences that go beyond reading the words on the page. I'm emotionally invested in this story.
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Thanks for your response, and for sharing the creation and arc of Hector's character.
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I am very appreciative of the subplot of Hector's decisions. We've watched Sky and Brant's lives/roles change. Brant made a BIG change when he declared his love for Sky. Both were in positions to weather the storm with support networks and paths insured more or less by birth and success. Now we are able to witness a more difficult life change that is not only about career and love, but also about culture, self acceptance, and a woman who Hector has professed to love. Will old school machismo win out or will Hector lead a life to beat of his own drummer? @KKirk you have written a very complex character in a complex story. That is the beauty of your writing and the secret to our enjoyment.
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Mr Angry & Property Searching
CCinPS commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Mr Angry & Property Searching
Hooray! My favorite family is back. What does our brilliant @Robert Hugill have in store for us? I can hardly wait to dig in! -
I am on 🔥 after reading this chapter. Incredible imagery in your writing. Truly one of this best written sex scenes. Bravo!!
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I agree with @VBlew. This storyline is being handled maturely and with great thought. I'm really enjoying this throuple without directly participating.
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I'll have what's he's having....
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Even their open and honest conversations are sexy🔥🔥🔥
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[Later Timothy told me he paused at the door as he was bringing in water and towels for us. He was stunned by the beauty of our bodies stacked on the bed. When he recovered, he brought our water bottles and towels to the edge of the bed where he laid them before leaving. He said that was all he needed to want desperately to see the movie.] Me too....😅
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Great sensitivity in this chapter. I love that characters listen to each other.
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Thank you @KKirk for giving us this deeply emotional storyline in the midst of lust and other true emotions. Your commentary at the beginning and end of each chapter are thought provoking. I appreciate the opportunities to think and digest that you are providing your readers.
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My fellow readers have accurately written the thoughts I have in my head. I will say that I am enjoying the openness of Hector's experience. There are those of us for whom 'straight men' are a fantasy. While we may creatively think of what those men may say or think, it is gratifying to read those words attributed to such a beautiful, sexy man who is enjoying his sexuality. I am certainly enjoying this side of Hector. He may go home to Juanita, but Bransky is embedded in his mind and his taste buds.
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"Looking deeply into Hector’s eyes, I smiled and said, “I’m a bit intimidated by your huge cock, but I’m going to take it all or choke to death trying.”" - Wow!!
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To quote Hector, "F*ck".
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@KKirk your writing makes me feel like I am right there in the middle of the action. Loving it all!!
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Wow. So hot....The first sex scenes of the new movie are incendiary. The emotions and reality of the movie are in sync with the real life of the characters. I'm enjoying this blur. @KKirk you are off to a superb start. We're loving it and wanting more!!
