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Thank you @KKirk for giving us this deeply emotional storyline in the midst of lust and other true emotions. Your commentary at the beginning and end of each chapter are thought provoking. I appreciate the opportunities to think and digest that you are providing your readers.

My fellow readers have accurately written the thoughts I have in my head. I will say that I am enjoying the openness of Hector's experience. There are those of us for whom 'straight men' are a fantasy. While we may creatively think of what those men may say or think, it is gratifying to read those words attributed to such a beautiful, sexy man who is enjoying his sexuality. I am certainly enjoying this side of Hector. He may go home to Juanita, but Bransky is embedded in his mind and his taste buds.

"Looking deeply into Hector’s eyes, I smiled and said, “I’m a bit intimidated by your huge cock, but I’m going to take it all or choke to death trying.”" - Wow!!

To quote Hector, "F*ck".

@KKirk your writing makes me feel like I am right there in the middle of the action. Loving it all!!

Wow. So hot....The first sex scenes of the new movie are incendiary. The emotions and reality of the movie are in sync with the real life of the characters. I'm enjoying this blur. @KKirk you are off to a superb start. We're loving it and wanting more!!

Looking forward to lights, camera, and action from Sky, Brant and Hector😈

Welcome to the major leagues! Brant and Sky have joined the elite level of "A" listers with their award nominations. They have worked hard, the work keeps coming and so does the adoration of the fans. I'm happy for them!!

Alex & Neil: Moving On is a wonderful story about opposites, support, dreams, chances, and love. When our heroes meet, we can't imagine them getting much further than one or two dates. @Robert Hugill weaves us a tale of relationships and warmth that draws us in until the very end. The characters are funny genuine, endearing and special with sensitivities, quirks and personalities that certainly remind us of people that we know or have encountered. Well written and thought out, this tale is easy to read and will have you anticipating the next chapter. I am so glad that I have found what is called the Hugillverse and plan to read all the works in his collection.

This chapter provided another glimpse into the lives of Sky and Brant. @KKirk your writing shines as you unveil each and every chapter. I hang on every word of each chapter until the next chapter is posted. Thank you. I really enjoy your work!!

Well it seems that Alex and Neil are truly about to Move On. It has been an enjoyable journey being a part of the their lives. You've introduced us to an endearing cast of characters as you told their story. Each man has grown individually and collectively in a most satisfying way. It was a mature and realistic tale for men of their age and growing stature. I will miss them, but I never say never. Perhaps they will pop up in another story as minor characters. I hope not as I would want to know how they got there from here. Thank you @Robert Hugill for sharing your creativity, sensitivity and storytelling abilities!

Great chapter @KKirk as we bring Hector (and Juanita) into the Living Large family. I think Hector will be an asset to the film. I'm not sure that he will be with Juanita after filming as I am sure he will grow emotionally and experientially though his relationship with Bransky. I'm not wishing ill will upon Juanita as she is a key player and dear friend, but her man has feelings that he needs to explore. Juanita is sacrificing too. Her offer to be tested is generous, understanding and supportive of the trio. Congrats to Rachel on her Golden Globe win. It must be tough being in a family so talented, but they seem to support each other's career without jealousy. I hope that director David will support our guys with a crew and set that ensures their comfort and success. We want those sex scenes to be honest, open and hot like those in Laying Low.

The threesome will be successful because of the attraction between the three men. Hector is the perfect speedbump for the Bransky relationship. He brings it all to the table including the relationships they all have with Juanita. The real Hector will emerge from this role and Branksy will be stronger than ever.

Great chapter filled with good looking men and life changing decisions. The behind the scenes POV continues...

And so the living quarters expand just like the rest of the relationship. So domestic and heartwarming. Love how the relatives are getting in to the spirit of this couple. Yay for Alex and Neil!!

Yes they are...and they know it. I bet Juanita knows and they have an arrangement. Lots of arrangements in Hollywood.

This 'gathering' reminds me of some of the friends I've collected along the way. They represent the different stages of my life and what my needs were at the time. Some I realized were friends of friends with little relationship to me. I've no doubt that I was sincere in liking them, but in my later life it is hard to imagine what i saw as the value of their friendship. Not only does @Robert Hugill offer us these well defined characters, but he provides (knowingly or unknowingly) an opportunity for personal reflection. Thank you @Robert Hugill!

Throuple....a test on the screen and a test to their real life relationship....I have faith that our couple and our author @KKirk can handle it.

Reading this chapter was like putting on a pair of well worn gloves....smooth and tight...dialogue filled with sexual promise, good looking characters, and hints of what's to come...

I have hoped and anticipated there would be a second story featuring Sky and Brant. I'm excited to get started...

A delightful chapter. Evan comes through with a tutor for Neil. The tutor, Emmer, seems quirky, but Alex supports Neil in their way and off we go into a new adventure, each learning and growing together. Truly an interesting pair. Cannot wait to see what comes of this.

Well crafted, well told, brilliantly written.

The comments of my fellow readers is so spot on. I have genuinely appreciated this story and the heat it contains. Each kiss, and the pacing of the action...you really know how to get our pulses going. Bravo @Boy Mercury X!!