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Pretty good chapter. They finally had sex and it was hot. but IMO, could've been hotter. The sex scene felt rushed with very little or limited description; not enough to get into it 🤷🏼‍♂️ Hoping sex scenes get more intense and descriptive in upcoming chapters 🤞🏽🙏🏼

DUH. Missed the last note on the chapter. Got it. Kinda bittersweet to see this fantastic story end. But alas, all great things...well you know. Thanks @Cane23 | @redw18 | @CasualWanderer82 for confirming 😁

Maybe I missed the note from @CasualWanderer82 . Did he confirm the next chapter would be the last in a comment?

Oh so cruel. Malik makes a brief appearance only to find its a form of closure it seems. Giveth and taketh away 😩😭

Well done once again @CasualWanderer82. What a turning point chapter for both Nora and Daniel. Can’t say I’m surprised really. Love the way Nora handled the realization of the end of their marriage with grace, love and understanding. Beautiful actually 💞 I can see the love between Nora and Alec growing quickly into something strong and deep. I can also see one of @CasualWanderer82 ‘s time-jumps (ex. “5 years later…”) to show how their love story morphs into something special over time – marriage, kids? 🤷🏼‍♂️ Also, while I like the heat between Max and Daniel, I don’t think they’re end game for each. They’re enjoying each other and having fun for sure. And although Max has professed his love for Daniel multiple times, I don’t think Daniel feels the same. Truthfully, I think Daniel’s heart is elsewhere (Malik ?). For me, Daniel and Max together is too obvious; too “on the nose” if you will. As we’ve seen, @CasualWanderer82 doesn’t do obvious 😊 I feel a twist coming up. Btw, judging from the other commenters, I may be alone in this, but I’m still team Daniel + Malik. While I agree with @Cane23 's comment in the previous chapter – “Malik was the catalyst” – I respectfully disagree with the assertion that Malik is not the “destination” for Daniel. I think for Daniel, Malik represents many life-altering emotions, not least of which is breaking open closed doors, the transformative experience of exposing his true self and being fully seen. When all is said and done, I think Daniel will ultimately find Malik and come full circle with the man / catalyst who changed his life. Here’s to wishful thinking/hoping 🙏🏼🤞🏽

Really. Uummm...was this the end of the story? If so, felt kind of rushed and incomplete 🤷🏼‍♂️ Bit of a let down actually

YEEESSS DANIEL! Go find your man - MALIK. Can hardly wait for their amazing, marathon-type reunion 🤤. I'll prepare the box of tissues 😋🤭 Seriously though, @CasualWanderer82 once again did not disappoint. Masterfully navigating the delicate balance of raw, intense, hungry sex between Daniel and Max 🥵 with the emotionally-charged, painfully raw revelation between Daniel and Nora💔 Well done 👏🏼

Well first, good to have you back @Casual Wanderer! You were missed. Hope you had a restful hiatus and fully recharged your creative juices💦😉 I was super thrilled to see this HOT, honest and scorching chapter update - what a pleasant surprise! I see and get the references to Daniel's off-the-walls experience with Malik throughout this chapter. Hoping these are small breadcrumbs / foreshadowing of things to come in upcoming chapters between those two🤞🏽🙏🏼 Their chemistry burned hot like molten lava and one which (I hope) Daniel will crave over and over again with deep hunger 🤤 I love the following last line of this chapter. It captures the honesty of Daniel's journey and the struggle of finally opening the door to his true self. "And somewhere inside Daniel Beaumont, in a room where the furniture had been covered for years, the sheets came off, and the light came in, and the dust rose like small, bright things set free." As always, well done. But not surprised. The master wordsmith provided yet another masterpiece! 👏🏼 Your biggest fan anxiously awaits the next scorching chapter update. 🫶🏼

Hiya fellas. Anyone know if @CasualWanderer82 is on hiatus? There have been no updates for months 🤷🏼‍♂️ If so, hope all is well on his end 🤞🏽

Checking in on this terrific story. Any updates coming soon?🙏🏼

BEAUTIFUL. JUST. BEAUTIFUL 💕❤️🫶🏼💕❤️🫶🏼

WHAT. this can’t be the ending! 😭😩 This beautiful story can’t end like this. There MUST be an epilogue. Hopefully one where we see Nate recover fully and he and Evan move to the next level as husbands 🤞🏽 🙏🏼💕

GOOD LORD! I'm SLOWLY making my way through this story Gotta say, this is probably one of the LONGEST slow-burn stories I've read to-date. Cool story which I'm getting into more and more with each chapter. But holy crap, the amount of details (most of it relevant) included in each chapter could rival "War and Peace"!

About time 😋💕

Good story so far with some clear substance abuse issues to resolve. but what a shame. This chapter was leading to a steamy intimate scene, only to find the author preferred to skip describing that scene altogether. Disappointing actually. hoping things change in upcoming chapters 🤷🏽‍♂️