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  1. HHP67

    "17 Seconds"

    BEAUTIFUL. HEARTBREAKING. HEARTWARMING. ALL OF IT!!!! I was hooked from the very beginning to the fantastic end. And the FINALE certainly didn't disappoint. The end masterfully wove the beautiful, complicated and strong LOVE between Jax, Cash and Blake magnificently. Of course, the absolute PERFECT finale, would've seen Jax and Cash as husbands ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’ But wishful thinking aside, nothing was left unsaid or undone. My heart is full ๐Ÿ’• Excellent work as always @CasualWanderer82 ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿซถ๐Ÿผ
  2. WOWZA. Holy mother of God! This chapter did me in completely (in a good way of course) ๐Ÿฅต I had to take 24hrs to catch my breath, fully process the intensity of all the scenes and "release some muscle aches" ๐Ÿ’ฆ๐Ÿคค I bend the knee (among other things ๐Ÿ˜‹) to @CasualWanderer82. True master of erotic/romantic storytelling. Seriously though, this was probably the best balance of romance, sexual tension and drama I've ever read - a little dramatic, I know. But true. Only thing missing was a little more reciprocity; no one has even swallowed Jax so far ๐Ÿคทโ€โ™‚๏ธ Now hear me out. I've read the comments and discourse re: roles and labels. I fully agree. Neither should have a place in gay sexuality or just lovemaking in general. Also agree with @CasualWanderer82 "...I find this obsession with "roles" regarding gay sexuality to be particularly boring and dated." However, the reality is roles still persist in our community today (ex. TOPS are strong, masculine and don't suck or touch cocks; BOTTOMS are weak) which in my opinion, perpetuates unrealistic and unhealthy stereotypes. Especially as young gay kids read gay erotica while starting to explore who they are and what they enjoy. Personally, I find total versatility in relationships where partners relinquish power completely to each other, give of themselves fully/EQUALLY, to be the hottest and truest form of LOVEMAKING. Only my opinion fellas. Please hold any negative replies ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ I strongly believe we are all naturally fluid human beings, in the way we think, act, love, etc. Ok. I'll get off the pulpit now and stop the sermon - I'm no Miss Daisy Mae after all ๐Ÿ˜† Now back to your regularly scheduled programming... While I'm not a fan of Jax, Blake & Cash as a throuple, at the end of the day, LOVE IS LOVE ๐Ÿ’• If that is what @CasualWanderer82 sees as a natural progression of their relationship, then let it be as it is written ๐Ÿ˜ Breathlessly waiting for the next chapter ๐Ÿซถ๐Ÿผ PS - apologies for the long diatribe. I usually don't write novels as comments. I'll blame @CasualWanderer82 for his high-quality storytelling๐Ÿ˜‰
  3. By the way, interesting and complex love triangle evolving now!๐Ÿ˜ฎ
  4. It's so hard to pick a team (Cash + Jax vs. Blake + Jax). Honestly, why pick a side. The heart wants what the heart wants ๐Ÿ’• Blake's pain is so real and heartbreaking. It's hard NOT to root for him๐Ÿ˜ข Anxiously awaiting how this complex love angle progresses in upcoming chapters ๐Ÿค” Side note: Cash & Jax lovemaking is hot AF. But hoping in upcoming chapters, they switch it up and reciprocate - maybe Jax as the top. Keeps things versatile and increase the heat index by 100% ๐Ÿคค
  5. MY GOD! Another great chapter. No surprise of course ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ I just hate you @CasualWanderer82. With each chapter, you have a grown ass man in tears ๐Ÿ˜ญ (kidding of course, about the hate part ๐Ÿ˜). I had to re read this chapter multiple times to fully appreciate and grasp the emotional depth and tension. Seriously though, the heart-to-heart talk between Miss Daisy and Colton was OFF THE CHARTS EMOTIONALLY HEARTBREAKING!!! ๐Ÿ’” Her word choice to get her message across is just simply amazing; like no other. -------- For example, "I don't want to be this no more," he said, the sentence breaking in the middle and finding its own feet again. "I want...I just want somebody to look at me like I'm not a bad idea." "You're not a bad idea," Daisy said, and the words hit bone. "You're a boy who made a string of terrible choices tryin' to feel like he existed. That don't erase the harm. It does mean you ain't beyond the reach of daylight." -------- I remain completely hooked, is all I'll say ๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Š
  6. Hate to see Blake's heartbreak. But Cash and Jackson's lovemaking was off the charts HOT!!! DAMN ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ Hoping in upcoming chapters they top each other and really push their love to the next level ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ๐Ÿฅต๐Ÿ‘… Also, excellent twist in exposing who hurt West. Didn't see that coming. Can't wait to see how that plays out.
  7. HHP67

    "Homecoming"

    OMG. YEEESSSSSSS!!! Unbelievably romantic. Cash and Jackson finally coming together as intended. They were always meant for each other. ๐Ÿ’ž Can't wait for their HOT love making ๐Ÿฅต and really hope they continue to grow closer together in upcoming chapters ๐Ÿ™
  8. HHP67

    "Yes, Sir!"

    Excellent and steamy as always. Your chapters DEFINITELY don't disappoint. The Blake and Evan scene was SOOO damn hot.๐Ÿฅต As mentioned by another commenter, there is REAL love between Cash and Jackson. Really hoping the story moves in that direction. If so, they will make for a fantastically HOT set of chapters and maybe even happy ending together ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿคž Also, friendly tip. IMHO, detailed character descriptions (ex. 6'2, 200 lbs, muscular, thick 8 inches cut and "veiny") always help increase the HEAT level 10x๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿคค
  9. HHP67

    "Deal"

    Beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ˜ญ
  10. OMG. I'm not crying, you're crying ๐Ÿ˜ญ Excellent, beautiful chapter. The talk between Miss Daisy and Blake was perfection and hit straight at the heart. So deep and emotional ๐Ÿ’• Love it @CasualWanderer82. Cant wait for the next chapters hopefully soonish ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ๐Ÿคž๐Ÿผ.
  11. HHP67

    Game Over

    It was a bit of a roller coaster emotionally. But well worth it in the end. Absolutely beautiful! Loved this story from the very beginning and to the end. Thank you for the happy ending, @CasualWanderer82. Well done! I was nervous this story would take a completely different, dark/morbid turn . So happy it didn't. ๐Ÿซถ๐Ÿ’•
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