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mmike1969

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  1. No pressure right Mark? Lol
  2. I have a better theory! Maybe she is just an evil person and meds are just an excuse for her erratic behavior Do you really think Tonto would hire someone that she knew was on meds to take care of her grand kids?
  3. Show me one instance where Brad/Robbie has "raised" their kids... Hell show me Any of these adults raising their own kids.
  4. Damn time warp bubbles! I love it!
  5. Here's what should happen to Brad: he dies in a horrible car accident, Will becomes despondent and changes, Robbie marries a girl (drugs) and everyone becomes miserable in Palo Alto.
  6. No. Will teeth us totally messed up and needed both braces and implants while removing several impacted teeth. My reasoning? Because faux news told me. Because that is all the FACTS this fictional story needs I am just going to stop caring about details of this story because some people are taking this to a new level of stupidity and reading these people's arguments are affecting my ability to enjoy this story.
  7. Case in point: Has anyone been to Denny's recently and tried their Macho Nacho Burger? It is awesome! That is going off on a tangent...
  8. Okay, I have an idea. Let's toss all logic out and have the judge grant Will's guardianship over to Father Tim. That way Will can still have his surfing, Will can be still close by to Brad/Robbie, and maybe Will be the biggest disappointment to everyone by finding religion AND abstain from random sex.
  9. Some people here really have no concept of what fiction is... This is why I stopped commenting on individual chapters since some people forget this is a fictional story with fictional characters. Real life has nothing to do with fiction. That is the whole purpose. If Mark gave Will emancipation, even at his young age, then Will has it. Real world has Nothing to do with it. Do I believe this whole story is even remotely possible? Not even. There is NO WAY in Hell am I ever going to believe Brad and Robbie has either a miter saw or a sledge hammer in their garage or even if I think they know the true purpose of either tool besides tossing a sledge hammer into car windshields or cutting shoes in half with a saw. I do not read Mark's stories because they are supposed to reflect real case studies of law and order. I read Mark's stories because I enjoy good fiction. Maybe some of you should remember that.
  10. I vote yes because it ticks off some people
  11. You may be right. Have Stef faint.
  12. I want a Crampton or Hobart or Schulster to actually give up their wealth (or at least their easy access to it) and join the military. Nah this is Fiction so we can't have that!
  13. So the political dirt diggers found out Riley's mother and saw a connection to her father and the Senate Bombing that occurred in 1983 but did not connect it to the rest of the Crampton/Hayes/Schluter Families? Yes, this was supposed to be after Senator Danfield and family but If they knew about Tiffany then they should of connected it to JJ and Jeanine. Connect JJ to Brad and Robbie of course. Let's ignore the Hayes white trash side of the family and connect that with all the mysterious incidents that occurred with this family: Jeff Hayes (drug OD) Deke (managed to crack his skull in the ocean) Brad's biological mom (tripped and fell off a bridge) Brad's sister (drug OD) Neil connection via Robbie (slipped in the bathroom with a belt around his neck and drowned in the bath tub) Edit: How could I forget about Mark Clark and his suicide! Connected to Omega. Brad's uncle Brian (kinky sex thing that went horribly wrong somehow). Fake ID or not, fingerprints would of revealed his real identity. Carson (hunting accident of course) Didn't Deke work for Stef? Brian used to work for Stef. Brandon used to work for Stef. Carson used to work for Robbie. Edit: then there is Brandon shacking up with the CFO of Omega before Turning States Evidence and right before two more people wound up dead. Yeah nothing suspicious here. Someone took a shot at Brad in Texas but was saved by Gathan Hayes. Brad and Will got kidnapped in France. Someone didn't try too hard and just stopped when they saw the Van Den Boss name.
  14. re Michael: If he got fired and then wound up bloody in a ditch somewhere with bullet holes in his body, the first finger I'd point to is Brad. If he got severance with a good luck in your future endeavors and THEN wound up with bullet holes, Brad would look like the good guy... Just saying...
  15. I doubt ponzi scheme since she already had a s-ton at her disposal. I am thinking real estate. Back in the hey-day of day trading, you were able to Borrow up to twice the amount of the value of your account depending on your credit worthiness. Which brings to the question (if she borrowed against the value of Wade's plus her money): WTF did she buy on credit for a Billion+ US dollars? One thing pops into mind: A 40-yr lease at The World Trade Center for 3.2B. Or perhaps it's about her controlling it and nothing more. Maybe we can get lucky and she invested her entire fortune with Bernie Madoff.
  16. Re JJ: I knew several str8 guys who later admitted to having a same sex relations earlier in life. No biggie here. Re Will's mom... How many times does she have to prove her craziness before people needs to stop listening to her! Re Michael: A horrible, painfull and stretched out death could not come fast enough.
  17. You know, this line kind of threw me off since I do not think Wade is the kind of person who would be making this kind of a joke. Matt yes. But Wade?
  18. You know, I know 9/11 is just around the corner but we have not had a family member die a horrible and painful death since Millenium. Not suggesting people need to die... Just saying. And for a guard, Michael is not all that bright... Really? And who hired him in the first place? Brad or Robbie? Either way, I'd question their good judgment over this too!
  19. I think Mary E has No Idea how much her trust is worth if she is selling herself off for a measly $2 Million.
  20. The level of being str8 invertly correlates to how horny someone is multiplied the amount of beer is utilized minus the amount of rightwing religious views someone has.
  21. It should be obvious that Jeff is a relative to Robbie: name a non-Hayes that snaughed?
  22. mmike1969

    Chapter 39

    Because some jerk ( we can guess who ) keeps rating you 1-star, gonna rate this 5-star. Now on to the story: way to go JJ! And still the family is ignoring Maddy. Does she even exist anymore or did you just write her off and expect the readers to forget? Thanks Mark. Unlike some so-called "writers" here at GA, I am enjoying your stories and I am amazed how you are able to write two separate stories going at the same time.
  23. What happened to Jeanine's kid? Cody was the father right? I've lost track..,
  24. I Vote #1,2, 5. 1 & 2: They ARE bad parents! 3: I've seen some pretty mean and BIG squirrels ! 5: Obviously, they are stil drinking coffee that comes from a can. They need to switch to whole bean that they grind at home.
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