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  1. Dolores Esteban

    Daydreams

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Daydreams

    Thank you, Gary Glad you liked the poem.
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    Congrats!
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    Daydreams

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Daydreams

    Thank you, jian_sierra
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    Daydreams

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Daydreams

    Thank you, Lisa
  5. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you for the feedback, Irri I'm happy you liked the poem.
  6. Dolores Esteban
    I wrote a few poems over the years and I liked experimenting with words, but I never considered myself a poet. I consider the prompts poetry school and my poems are homework. I actually find myself waiting for the next prompt I found that writing formal poems is even more fun than writing free-verse. Putting the words in the right place is like an intriguing puzzle. Having fun is my primary goal with the prompts. I'm happy you liked the poem. Thank you for the feedback.
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    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I'm glad Tim didn't give in. Sometimes drastic measures are necessary. I liked your story. It drew me in right from the the start.
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    A beautiful story. I love the message. So true.
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    Daydreams

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Daydreams

    Thank you, Graeme The narrator might be someone who knows him well, a sister perhaps or a good friend.
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    Daydreams

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Daydreams

    Thank you, Cole
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    Speech to the Battered King The time has come to speak out loud to you And make the worries hear of troubled minds My king and friend, we’ve come a long way here We fought and wrought on many battlefields The battle’s lost, however not the war Let’s rise as one man, stand against our foe Together we will turn the wheel of fate And make this day a glorious feat of war My king and friend, let’s carry on our way Like phoenix rise and win the war and praise
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    Daydreams

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Daydreams

    Thank you, comicfan
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    Dandelion

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Dandelion

    Thank you Glad you liked the story.
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    Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the piece.
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    Daydreams

    Dolores Esteban posted new chapter in Daydreams

    Daydreams He's the kind of guy Who knows a lot about women He likes to talk about girls But when he starts to daydream He likes to dream of boys Sometimes I look at him and I look into his eyes I notice the way he dreams of boys with a smile Daydreams he just can't hide She's a dazzling girl, he says He likes to hang out with Laura He likes to talk about girls But when he stops his talking His mind turns back to boys She’s a real hottie, he says He likes to kick back with Liz
  16. Dolores Esteban
    He likes to talk about girls, but when he starts to daydream, he likes to dream of boys. A poem.
  17. Dolores Esteban
    Belated Happy Birthday!
  18. Dolores Esteban
    Congratulations!
  19. Dolores Esteban

    Divine Love

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Divine Love

    Thank you. I'm glad you liked the poems.
  20. Dolores Esteban
    I think I worked eight hours on the poem, but it was fun. Now that it's published, I can't submit it to the anthology, I think. Thanks for the feedback.
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    Thank you, Percy.
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    Thank you, Lisa.
  23. Dolores Esteban
    Winter Has Come Those were the days of joy and fun Bright days of endless love and bliss Of happiness, nothing amiss But clouds have now obscured the sun The wind is cutting, a near gale And all the leaves fall, whirl and fly Those happy days have long gone by The wind is bringing rain and hail His face is but a memory Where is he now? Where has he gone? What happened and what did go wrong? Why did he then walk out on me? A storm is blowing, bringing snow And winter’s come to
  24. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you, Irritable. I'm happy you like the poem.
  25. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you. The couplets were fun.
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