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  1. Dolores Esteban
    Congratulations!
  2. Dolores Esteban
    # 23 is just beautiful. Thanks for sharing your poems.
  3. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you for your comment. Yes, I plan to participate next year.
  4. Dolores Esteban
    I enjoyed all your poems, Valkyrie. # 26 is very beautiful.
  5. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you. I'm glad you liked the poems.
  6. Dolores Esteban
    Something seems to be going on It will be fascinating to see Strange-looking quicksands We are never quite sure Helter-skelter Rapidly disintegrating It has been increasingly obvious Is the Journal really the Journal at all? * The situation or circumstances Things in general Showed a permanent quality To a great degree That is never found together In reality * It was really different I was aware A half-formed-idea evolving over time A complex with hundreds or a thou
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    Day 26 - Day 30

    Dolores Esteban commented on Aditus's story chapter in Day 26 - Day 30

    The poems are very good. I read them several times. I think Blue is my favorite, but I like them all.
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    Pillars of smoke rose from behind the walls They came here around 8:15 p.m. With defeat looming on the horizon Something's amiss in Iridas In the abyss of space The planet dead and the civilization Wiped out, brutally murdered By someone * One of these days With the strength of ten One hundred days in desert sand Hear one thousand screams Ten thousand drums One hundred thousand people perished One million miles away from home One billion children wished you we
  9. Dolores Esteban

    Day 21 - Day 25

    Dolores Esteban commented on Aditus's story chapter in Day 21 - Day 25

    Doubt withers everything to dust. I love this line.
  10. Dolores Esteban
    I love # 18!
  11. Dolores Esteban

    Day 11 - Day 15

    Dolores Esteban commented on Aditus's story chapter in Day 11 - Day 15

    I like all the poems. Azure Perimeter is my favorite, though, weird but striking a chord.
  12. Dolores Esteban
    I lile all your poems. 11 is my favorite. I could see everything very clearly. The man with the Buddha belly has haunted me at work several times. I actually saw him this morning on my way to the office.
  13. Dolores Esteban
    Your poems are definitely very good.
  14. Dolores Esteban
    Glad you liked the poems. I'm slowly getting back to writing. Couldn't fully move my right arm for months. Thanks for your comments.
  15. Dolores Esteban
    Outside the Gates of Cerdes In the abyss of space There was something strange One million A.D. * A lucent star in the abyss of space A voyage through vortex scapes And ancient plays unfold The serpent tower up in the hills At the gates of wisdom The serpent’s crown shall be bestowed * Dawn breaks forth in the far east The twin stars give a sense of direction The forest trees are saying: Morning star, son of dawn, Ophion, sovereign of Meru and Charioteer of the sun
  16. Dolores Esteban
    Tales of the Old World Canopy of leaves Sunlight bleeding through the trees Trees ancient and tall Yellow small flowers Green vines wind over the wall Untouched and pure world Lush bushes and ferns Droplets of water on leaves Air humid and cool A rushing river Pond hedged by trees with gnarled roots Blue and dark the water Sacred place of the world A temple amidst the green The secret of old Patanjali sees The greyish bark of a tree The passage of time
  17. Dolores Esteban
    I liked everybody's thoughts. Thanks for featuring the questions and answers. AC Benus 20 Poetry Prompts are actually a good start for exploring poetry. I tried them all and learned about new poetry forms.
  18. Dolores Esteban

    Yule Tide

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Yule Tide

    Thank you. 🎄
  19. Dolores Esteban

    Doll

    Dolores Esteban commented on Puppilull's story chapter in Doll

    I can tell it was a difficult challenge. You actually managed to write several long sentences and a whole story. Well done!
  20. Dolores Esteban

    Yule Tide

    Dolores Esteban commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Yule Tide

    Thank you. I wish you Happy Holidays and a Happy New Year. 🎁
  21. Dolores Esteban
    Yule Tide Look up at the sky The night dressed in black and Put on a wreath of stars The stars shine so bright Nym, the Elf Prince, wears A crown of gold on his hair Round a grand white star A wreath of green leaves Donned with a red bow And a neat sprig of green White pearls and bells Glint and gleam through the haze Draped in veils and fine clouds It’s Yule Tide in space Blessed is the time The night dressed in black and Put on a wreath of stars Look
  22. Dolores Esteban
    I want to rewrite my NaNoWriMo 2018 novel, participate in NaPoWriMo 2019, perhaps rewrite a story for the Anthology theme "In the Stars,", and complete a couple of short stories.
  23. Dolores Esteban
    I submitted a poem. I hope this qualifies.
  24. Dolores Esteban
    I don't have a science background. I simply love reading science articles and books. I read them all the time, so it's not actually research for a story.
  25. Dolores Esteban
    1 5 3 - Elf, bark, wreath I guess I'll try a poem.
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