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Dolores Esteban

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  1. I didn't know either. I'm going to have a look, too.
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    # 405 Jump

    Thanks for reading and the feedback
  3. I would like to know what happens next. Nice start to a good story.
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    # 405 Jump

    I remember I was fed up with my job when I wrote the first draft of the piece...Thanks for reading!
  5. Jump   ‘You honestly think I would wear something like that?’ Brian said to himself, shaking his head. He looked at the boy with the smart phone in his hand. How old was he? Thirteen, fourteen? Two other boys joined the first. They all looked alike, dressed in sweaters and baggy jeans that revealed their underpants. The sight was a pain to his eyes. Brian was in his forties and not for a million would he have wanted to change place with one of these boys. Brian had a moment of clarity. He ha
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    Daydreams

    Thank you, Gary Glad you liked the poem.
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    Daydreams

    Thank you, jian_sierra
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    Daydreams

    Thank you, Lisa
  9. Thank you for the feedback, Irri I'm happy you liked the poem.
  10. I wrote a few poems over the years and I liked experimenting with words, but I never considered myself a poet. I consider the prompts poetry school and my poems are homework. I actually find myself waiting for the next prompt I found that writing formal poems is even more fun than writing free-verse. Putting the words in the right place is like an intriguing puzzle. Having fun is my primary goal with the prompts. I'm happy you liked the poem. Thank you for the feedback.
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    Chapter 1

    I'm glad Tim didn't give in. Sometimes drastic measures are necessary. I liked your story. It drew me in right from the the start.
  12. A beautiful story. I love the message. So true.
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    Daydreams

    Thank you, Graeme The narrator might be someone who knows him well, a sister perhaps or a good friend.
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    Daydreams

    Thank you, Cole
  15. Speech to the Battered King The time has come to speak out loud to you And make the worries hear of troubled minds My king and friend, we’ve come a long way here We fought and wrought on many battlefields The battle’s lost, however not the war Let’s rise as one man, stand against our foe Together we will turn the wheel of fate And make this day a glorious feat of war My king and friend, let’s carry on our way Like phoenix rise and win the war and praise
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    Daydreams

    Thank you, comicfan
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    Dandelion

    Thank you Glad you liked the story.
  18. Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the piece.
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    Daydreams

    Daydreams He's the kind of guy Who knows a lot about women He likes to talk about girls But when he starts to daydream He likes to dream of boys Sometimes I look at him and I look into his eyes I notice the way he dreams of boys with a smile Daydreams he just can't hide She's a dazzling girl, he says He likes to hang out with Laura He likes to talk about girls But when he stops his talking His mind turns back to boys She’s a real hottie, he says He likes to kick back with Liz
  20. He likes to talk about girls, but when he starts to daydream, he likes to dream of boys. A poem.
  21. Belated Happy Birthday!
  22. Thank you. I'm glad you liked the poems.
  23. I think I worked eight hours on the poem, but it was fun. Now that it's published, I can't submit it to the anthology, I think. Thanks for the feedback.
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