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Dolores Esteban

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  1. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    A beautiful and entertaining tale. I really enjoyed it.
  2. Dolores Esteban

    The Lake

    Many thanks for reading and leaving a review, Bill. I'm happy you liked the story.
  3. Dolores Esteban

    The Lake

    Thank you for your kind words and encouraging review, comicfan. Glad you liked the story.
  4. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    Your fantasy world intrigued me and it was easy to visualize the details. I liked the story.
  5. Dolores Esteban

    Winter Storm

    The beginning was good, but the story slowed down soon and sentences became repetitive. The spray painters confused me a lot and I couldn't get back into the story. I also think that a rewrite would improve the story. The romance part was written nicely.
  6. An unexpected and imaginative take on the theme! I enjoyed this story very much.
  7. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    Great story! I totally liked it. A wonderful and unexpected take on the theme!
  8. Dolores Esteban

    The Lake

    Thanks for reading and commenting, Lisa. I'm glad you liked the story.
  9. Dolores Esteban

    The Lake

    Thanks für reading and leaving a review, Cole. I'm happy you enjoyed my short story.
  10. Dolores Esteban

    The Lake

    Thank you, Joann! I'm glad you liked the story, although it wasn't nice and sweet.
  11. Dolores Esteban

    The Lake

    Thank you, Percy! I'm very happy you liked the short story.
  12. Dolores Esteban

    Substance P

    The ending was unexpected but well down. A compelling story. I liked it.
  13. I look forward to reading the stories. So bad I won't be around much today.
  14. Dolores Esteban

    The Lake

    The Lake   After losing his job, Rick had fallen into a deep depression. His mental state only changed when he read an ad in a magazine. Rick saw his chance. He made a trip to Las Vegas and won 18,000 dollars, more than he had earned in the previous two years. Fortune had favored him. Rick was on a winning streak. He was looking out on the lake, his arm placed around Frank's shoulder. The midsummer night was quiet and warm. A few crickets were chirping. Rick looked at the full moon. "The moo
  15. Rick and Frank enjoy an evening by the lake. The water, however, is not as calm and peaceful as it seems.
  16. Congratulations!
  17. Many thanks for reading and commenting. Maureen is an ambiguous character, I think.
  18. The Return of Blagden Asmodee Blagden Asmodee has awoken from a long sleep. He gathers his clan to fight Azrael, his archenemy. The dark angels battle in a land beyond. The white angels watch their fight. Enjoy!
  19. Blagden Asmodee has awoken from a long sleep. He gathers his clan to fight Azrael, his archenemy. The dark angels battle in a land beyond. The white angels watch their fight.
  20. The Return of Blagden Asmodee by Dolores Esteban “The time has come,” Heathcliff Seymour said. Maureen Dwayne, Colden Amaury, and Raven Moore nodded solemnly. They were sitting in their Victorian style parlour. The four of them matched the style perfectly, the men dressed in beige pants, black tailcoats and puff ties, Maureen in a long red dress. “He’ll awake soon,” Heathcliff said, looking at his golden pocket watch. “The ban ends in three hours and nineteen minutes.” “Fi
  21. Captain Re   "Are you sure there is nothing that can be done?," the man asked in a bored tone of voice. "There was a time when Eden was strong and wisdom ruled over the country. Those days are gone and I watch the developments with concern," Re said. Re was the former commander of the spaceship that had taken the Asari from their planet Seth to Eden 43,000 years ago at the time of the ice age. The Asari had erected a city on an island in the Mediterranean Sea. The sea was almost run dry a
  22. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 22

    Thank you for your encouraging review. I'm very happy you enjoyed the story.
  23. Thank you, Valkyrie. I'm happy you like the story. I'm actually planning on expanding it.
  24. Nice to hear it got your attention. Thank you!
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