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  1. Dolores Esteban
    I'm happy you like the song. Thanks again for another intriguing prompt.
  2. Dolores Esteban
    Thanks for reading my poem so carefully. I'm happy you liked it.
  3. Dolores Esteban
    Lumière du monde Silence vivant Une étoile dans la nuit Sainte et profonde Vérité et la vie Lumière du monde Le divin astre brille Le mystère s’accomplit Eternellement Lampe éternelle Dans le calme de la nuit Sons du silence Dans l'espace de la vie Le chœur des anges La divine mélodie Le mystère s’accomplit Nous célébrons La beauté d'aujourd'hui Le mystère s’accomplit Chant angélique Madrigal infini Nuit de Noël La messe à minuit Nous célébrons La beauté d'auj
  4. Dolores Esteban
    Congratulations!
  5. Dolores Esteban
    Many thanks for reading the poem and your feedback.
  6. Dolores Esteban
    This is very good. I particularly like the sentence "Planets are colliding, giving birth to ideas".
  7. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you.
  8. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you for the kind feedback! And thank you for the prompts. I always look forward to them.
  9. Dolores Esteban
    Under the Blossomed TreesWe kissed under the blossomed treesAnd we strolled through the fields of loveI saw the sun shine on your hairAnd sensed your soft hand on my faceMy heart, where are you now?Why did you turn your back on me?My heart, why did we fall from grace?Tell me, why did you leave?
  10. Dolores Esteban
    It's beautiful.
  11. Dolores Esteban
    Your poem is well crafted, thought-provoking and has a clear message. I can definitely relate to it.
  12. Dolores Esteban
    The ship dropped out of real space. Lest contacted Perez. “Lest here. The trip was uneventful. One hour until arrival on the asteroid,” Lest said. “Cancel the approach at once, Lest,” Perez said in an urgent voice. “The miners went on strike. Demonstrations grew increasingly aggressive. Riots started today. Alliance is on the way to the asteroid belt. A few ships are already there. Our mining ship can’t land on the asteroid and take off from there unimpeded. The Goyans are working on a plan.
  13. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you. I'm glad you like the poem. It was a difficult prompt and I had never heard of the form, but it was an interesting challenge.
  14. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you. I'm happy you like the poem. Yes, I'm not a fan of baroque paintings.
  15. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you, aditus. I guess he wouldn't be happy.
  16. Dolores Esteban
    Thank you, Gary. I'm glad you like the poem.
  17. Dolores Esteban
    The Second Commandment Don’t make for yourself an image of God, Of heaven, earth and what is beneath it This image is illusion, not the Lord Phantom of the mind, painted bit by bit By imagination and corrupt wit And the painter’s artful execution Don’t bow to an idol, don’t worship it Do not fall for a self-made illusion The colorful image is just a plot Drawn to draw you in and tempt your spirit Ignite and stir desires, keen and hot, Fuel the daydream that you have painted Until
  18. Dolores Esteban
    This is great!
  19. Dolores Esteban
    Thanks for your interest.
  20. Dolores Esteban
    Space Pioneer 4 - Akar Kazbek Nanuq Kitlali, the ruler of a pirate empire, kidnapped the Goyan ambassador Jokin Trescothik, but finally agrees to release the man. The Cyrus dealer Perez hires the Horus crew to pick up Jokin and take him to an asteroid at the edge of the system Epsilon Eridani. The plan doesn't work out and the Horus must land on the main planet Akar Kazbek. The mission poses a challenge to the Horus crew. The system is under Alliance control. 　 Two chapters. Enjoy.
  21. Dolores Esteban
    Space Pioneer 4 Akar Kazbek The Horus returned from a trip to the Mohic Empire and landed on Cyrus, the space hub for many illegal or half-legal transactions in space. The ship was directed to a hangar and the men got off, except of Galven and Forrit who performed an engine check and supervised the refueling of the tanks. A hovercraft tanker was directed to a hatch with inbuilt fueling tubes. The fueling crew plugged the tubes to their vehicle and Helium-3, necessary for travel in real sp
  22. Dolores Esteban
    Nanuq Kitlali, the ruler of a pirate empire, kidnapped the Goyan ambassador Jokin Trescothik, but finally agrees to release the man. The Cyrus dealer Perez hires the Horus crew to pick up Jokin and take him to an asteroid at the edge of the system Epsilon Eridani. The plan doesn't work out and the Horus must land on the main planet Akar Kazbek. The mission poses a challenge to the Horus crew. The system is under Alliance control.
  23. Dolores Esteban

    Chapter 1

    Dolores Esteban commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I like this piece a lot. Very true.
  24. Dolores Esteban
    A very good story. Thank you.
  25. Dolores Esteban

    Ember Days

    Dolores Esteban posted new chapter in Ember Days

    Ember Days “This old mansion looks like a palace in a fantasy movie,” Sally said to her husband as they ascended the stairs to the wide entrance of the hotel. “Uh,” Sally cried out when she stumbled. Her husband, Tom, jumped forward to stop her from falling down the stairs. Sally took a deep breath and smoothed down her jacket. “A broken step,” Tom said, pointing at the step, then took another bite of the turkey sandwich that he had bought in a diner on their way to the hotel. “Eat th
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