Thanks for the review, Com!
The first story has ended, and now I'm working on the second one. Although the story so far has taken a year to tell, only 12 days in Alex's life have transpired. In the second story, I’ll work a little more on the background of Alex and the other characters, and the story will stretch out a bit more.
I think the reason I don’t go into detail on the characters is because I tend to take them at face value. I guess I’m the only one who does that. Hehe. When you guys read the second story, keep me honest and get me to go a bit deeper into the backgrounds if I start to slack off. And don’t forget to drop me a line and let me know what you think of the stories. You can reach me at Pete@Imagine-Magazine.info.
Again, thanks for the review, Comsie. (o: