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volvenord

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    Chapter 5

    I love it, have put the story in my favourites....
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    Chapter 1

    This was a beautiful story, well rendered, I got a strong sense of the atmosphere, the tension, the fear of being hurt/rejected. Thank you and all the best to you.
  3. It makes sense: that's the reason why it is so good and touching: you know what you write about! Actually, I will never forget what author Isaac Bashevis Singer said in the interview he gave right after he received the Nobel Price in Litterature in 1978. He was asked what made a good author: "write what you know, based on the experiences from your own life", was his reply. I do believe he was right. That touches the heart. Let me add that the love which comes through in your story, both from the parents/ most notebly from the father, as well as Rick and David, lingers in my memory. Thank you.
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    Chapter 1

    This was a truly beautiful story, heartfelt, plausible and mature. Thank you so much, and I would love to read more.
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    Uclaimed Hearts

    You write wonderful, deep and give me a real sense of the characters. Please continue to write.
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