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Thank you for your encouraging words, Butcher56. Yes, it's great that Rhys is back - that mind conditioning was extraordinarily effective. Anticipate the dance - the spirit and rhythm of First Australian dance can be marvelously evocative and Woorawa is especially gifted in its presentation.
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Great to hear you thoughts and know you're enjoying the story. Lol - ' a day earlier' - time travel is alive and well! That's a really interesting thought about their experiences - their world view would be ... well, it would be out of this world, I guess.
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'So much going on,' - that is so true! I'm kind of bewildered myself trying to keep it all together with new characters, like Lady Narello, turning up, and new and puzzling happenings modifying everything.
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Lol - that long white cloud will hopefully be lined with the silver glimmer of patience.
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Thank you, Dave. Maybe a bit like the film melting to pause the movie? - The cut-off was simply because the chapter reached nearly twice the size I like to present.
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Hmm! some answers, yes, but will next week bring more questions? - sorry, you'll have to wait till next week for the answer. Lol - this is Aussie land so we're already in your tomorrow - more than that we can't manage.
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Our literary alliterator makes his mark again in a most memorable manner. ?? Will it be a loose noose or a rope trope?? Thank you, sir, for your kind words.
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Chapter 43. Uirebon's quiet consideration before offering Kieran his support surprised Aglaron and pleased Ranevargar. "My Lord, I sense that within this deep privacy there is a strong expectation to speak openly. Keryth is clearly more than qualified for the title of High Lord and does have my support. I have serious reservations though. I perceive him as your son, the elf we sent to the human world, but the Dragon was larger than the Castle itself, the same Dragon now watchin
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Lol - a swift kick is something that Rhys might enjoy administering. Lady Narello sent the Chaos Incursion - but Kieran states that it was through Maynor's influence.
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'shilly shallying' - what wonderful words and phrases you come up with. Lol - I think the shilly shallying is in the writing rather than storytime. It's taken me seven chapters and just over a month to present about half the current day of the story. And you've presented another word with a special meaning for me. One of my big loves was bush-walking and my dad, who was a bit of a wordsmith, coined a family phrase of 'the peripatetic perambulator' to describe it.
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Thank you, @centexhairysub This was a very encouraging comment.
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Hmm! He's got the protection but I don't think it's through any deliberation of his own. He may not even have a clue about why it's been given. 'Sanitised'! - lol.
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Absolutely correct. Kieran has given his complete trust to Ranevargar for the handling of the High politics - and even for the very personal communications with Aglaron.
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Well, thank you Philippe. I hope it serviced your need.
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Chapter 42. The High King surveyed the rush of preparation as the great Courtyard was readied for an outdoor Council. "Warn everyone that the central area must be clear well before the Dragon makes its landing and make clear that close sighting could well cause paralysing fear. What do you make of Ranevargar's call for this unconventional meeting, Uirebon? Anything more than inclusion of the construct?" "An interesting thought, my Lord. It does make the proceedings open to every
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Wow indeed! So many big questions to ponder. I love the 'healing' questions. I think you might be seeing the answer really, as you used the term 'physically renewed' for the effect of Rhys's hands. I suspect that the 'Rhys touch' only detects and heals physical damage (like the migraines) and not mental changes. But then again??? Aglaron? - watch this space?
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An apt little bit of Aussie heritage joins the fray!
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Very sad indeed and I'm very aware that, except for Ranevargar's Realm, I've put very little effort into portraying those wonders. Lol - Rane is a sneaky old codger.
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These are some very big thoughts to ponder and we have a range of powerful personalities to consider as well. Lol - this is Mr Happy Ender speaking. BUT! ?????
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Yes, Maynor was completely overmatched by the merge. Ranevargar seems to be coming through as the steadying hand in the confrontations - hmm! The entwining of Woorawa's heritage and affairs of the Realms is a mystery we know little of. Maynor? - next chapter Woorawa? - 😲
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Yep! We learnt (my version of learned) much in this transition kind of chapter but there's still more. (Next chapter is more the happening kind). Watch events unfold with regard to Pethron who was sent to the Human world as an educator (Yes, he's Mr B).
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Whew! - Terra Mentalis!! - Digitus Scarius!! - Oralis Horribilis!! - with afflictions like these we offer - Er! - we offer - Hopus Understandicus Infinitatum.
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And it sure does fit - lol especially the scribble description as my handwriting is so bad I sometimes can't figure what I've said.
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Chapter 41. Ranevargar's foot shifted slightly and Rhys adjusted his shoulder to keep him steady while he made the physical contact with Maurice that was essential to complete the return of his lost memories. A quick glance at Woorawa showed him staring upwards through the green glow to where Ranevargar's hands were resting just below Maurice’s golden eyes. They’d used this same tactic for Kieran but the appearance of the glow and the sense of joy spilling from Maurice was making this ye
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