Rating: 9/10 (why not 10? because I don't want you resting on your laurels.)
Favorite Character(s): Owen, Aiden, Chris, Tony
Why?
Owen - a stud, and a really nice, humble, subtle narrator of his own growth
Aiden - patient, sweet, wise, and balanced
Chris and Tony - the brothers I wish I had
Least favorite character - Adam. In real life, I think he would've seen his sister as a total bitch, and that would have given him pause to examine (if not completely reject) his belief system as it pertains to sexuality. Not to mention the fact that almost everyone else around him was behaving appropriately... I just think he would have clued in.
Loose ends? Yep. Dennis and Reilly.
Comments: Dom, you've graduated from the ranks of good Nifty writers, into the pantheon of great Nifty writers who can FINISH a story, and finish it at the right time, in the right way. Please don't let anyone tell you that leaving some ambiguity behind is a bad thing. Not all of us like being spoon-fed. :-)
And keep workin' those sex scenes. If you're ever in Toronto, I *know* a certain 3some you'd fit into. Rrrrowrrr!