Nephylim
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At first it was easy. The path opened up before them and it was wide and smooth. Every now and then they were pulled up short by the gentle chiming of a bell. Whenever this happened Gwyon stared deeply into the water. He saw nothing. As they drew closer to the mountain the going got harder. The slope grew steeper and the shoreline became cliffs. They were forced to walk a path that was little more than a strip of earth suspended above the water. It was overgrown and dangerous. They were
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy my style which is not really something I could do anything about even if I wanted to change it I'm really glad you liked this one because I'm so fond of Isaac. He's had a shit life so far but I know for sure that Connor will change that... if he stays out of trouble long enough.
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Bugger need to change that. No, it's not complete by a long way. By which I mean I've finished the story but I haven't finished posting it. I'm glad you're enjoying so far.
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I'm so sorry that I missed your last review. I'm so glad for your impressions all the way through and I'm glad you like the way it ended. I've been told before that the end was a bit messy but all the characters needed a voice so I had to give them one
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It was an unreal situation, I guess like the Hunger Games in a way. The game has such enormous rewards that, in the past, civilisations and governments have fallen playing it so what's one life. The end player is the key to it all, and now we see why. it's dreadful but there it goes. Poor Daniel. But he sure has the last laugh and, at the end of the day, he always had to die. Thanks for the comments. I'm glad your enjoying my stories and gods do you read fast
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Thank you so much for the review. Gabriel is strong, he's had to be, but he doesn't need to be anymore. He's had a shit life so far but I'm sure all that changes. Mikey has been protected but he's strong too and I think he's going to be a real source of strength for his brother
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Zane is shut out but unexpectedly gets let in.
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Zane is shut out but unexpectedly gets let in.
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Thank you. The ghost is a darling isn't it. I couldn't really see where the story could be put in given the rest of the drama.
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Photographers? I enjoyed writing songs now and again. Who knows one day when I'm rich and famous I'll get someone sexy to sing them
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Haha. You're definitely not soulless. That you so much for the comments. You were spot on with Kelly and I know I'm horrible but what can I say. My stories tell me where to go and unfortunately this time Luc was in the way and the story mowed him down
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You have. You are obviously a great judge of character, even written characters. Kelly's 100% evil
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I think you're safe on that one. She's a sneaky one that girl.
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I told you she'd get hers Thanks for the continuing support.
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Helen's a darling. A real life saver in many ways.
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Don't worry. She gets hers They do another interview later on which doesn't go as she would have liked Thanks again for the reviews
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Hmmm well, Kelly's Jayden's sister and they say blood is thicker than water. Maybe now she realises what Jayden went through and has re evaluated her relationship with him... or maybe not. Thanks for the continuing support and the comments.
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Thanks for the review. This story kind of wrote itself and took me in some unusual directions
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Chapter 29 - It ends... It begins.
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 29 - It ends... It begins.
Thank you for your comment. I have to agree with you about Lestat but I also wouldn't say no to Luma... not that I'd have a choice Unfortunately his heart is taken. Ah well I'm glad you enjoyed Fallen and hope you enjoy my other stories too. Thanks again. And being mentioned in the same paragraph as Ann Rice is awesome -
Thank you for your review. I think in a way Cyan almost wanted to be hurt. He was certainly expecting it and in the end he just surrendered to his fate. I like to end stories where readers can pick them up and run on with them. I like to think that Gabriel and Cyan will stay together.
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When they reached the marsh Celyn did not so much as pause but strode the all but invisible paths with absolute certainty. It was an effort to follow him and it was a miracle that no one fell into the water. This time, when the trees swallowed them, it was Marc who knew fear, bowing under the weight of darkness that was an almost physical presence; a pressure in his mind and a dull ache in his heart which intensified rather than dissipated when they stepped out into the sunshine on the banks o
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I beg to differ that you aren't good at writing reviews. At least in my opinion you write great ones. It's clear you've got deeply into the story and that is just about the best thing anyone can say about any of my stories. (Ssh don't tell but Enigma II is one hell of a roller coaster but stick with it because it ends even better than this one )
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Thank you for your comments. I love River and Silver SO much it always makes me warm inside when someone actually 'sees' them.
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Not so soulless then Thank you for your comments they are all greatly appreciated. This is one of my favourites.
