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A Story to Touch the Heart
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in A Story to Touch the Heart
Oh my. God forbid I would force you to do anything... not in public at least Thank you so much for the review. I told you I don't always have sad endings -
Thank you. See... not ALL my stories have sad endings Actually, most of my stories these days have happy endings. Gonna have to kill someone sometimes soon
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Thank you Lacey. That was a very thought provoking video. He is a very mature 16 year old and clearly knows who he is. It's like has been said above. For the trasgendered person it isn't a matter or knowing who they are. They know who they are fine it's everyone else that has a problem.
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Well, for sure I knew it was going to be a LOT more than seven months. Yeah, 200 years seems about right I, too LOVE the looks inside Mira's mind. He's very primal and very simple... well as opposed to needlessly complex. I totally adore him.
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Personally I would prefer to see the emotional side of things. Sure sex has its place and most of my stories have some...some a lot. But I really don't think this is that kind of story. I won't stop reading if there's graphic sex but it will almost be a disappointment I think. I love these two characters together, very sweet. Mira is my favourite character I've read for a long time. I hope he gets tortured mercilessly but is okay in the end. What? Isn't that what everyone does to their favourite characters?
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Loved this chapter. Mira is wonderful. There is some concern there I have to admit. To have a killing machine infatuated with you is a damn scary thing, at least it would be for me... well no, actually it wouldn't be for me. It would be exciting, exhilarating and fascinating to me, but most people I wish I had seen him attack Leon, seriously And he was so sweet when he brought Shay the component.
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Poor Shay. I have to admit that I was tutting at him from the moment he spoke to Sofia the first time. I have to admit I thought she was baiting a trap for Leon but I knew it wasn't going to end well. It never was going to in these circumstances. Your story has plenty of twists and turns to keep us interested and interested I am. Moving on
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Glad you mentioned the like button. I keep forgetting it's there I liked this chapter a lot. Shay seems to have landed on his feet at least for know. I like the way the information is being imparted, not information dump but naturally as it arises. Mira is an engima and I like enigmas. Hasn't Shay wondered if he can 'heal' any of the other monsters.
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Poor Shay. It just gets worse and worse, although I have to admit I never expect it to be as easy as that. I think Shay needs to get used to the fact he and Mira are pretty much alone, and pdq too. I like the way you've written the built up/non built up areas. It's almost as if they were in the jungle then in the slums then god knows where. I can 'see' where they are and who they are. Beautiful writing and an exciting story
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I love the matter of fact way this was told. It slipped seamlessly from the hi tech of the procedure into the total post apocalyptic nothingness and poor Shay's total confusion was fab
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Not all stories have happy endings. Such is life. Thank you for your comment. I kinda wish Daniel had lived too, he was a really sweet guy but that's the way the story led me You seem to be choosing all the sad stories. Not all of them are sad you know
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Yep. Totally totally evil I am the Queen of Evil Thank you so much for your review. Sorry i made you cry so much, although I think sometimes we need to cry at fiction, helps us not to cry at reality... so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story... kind of
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Marc woke to darkness and the sound of his own heart pounding loud in his ears. With blind eyes he stared into the blackness, searching for a hint of motion; there was none. As the frantic beating of his heart quieted he became aware of the sound of Mererid breathing deeply nearby, fast asleep. So, whatever had woken him had not been loud enough to wake her. The air was hot and still; stifling. He found it hard to breathe and, slipping out of bed as silently as he could, he went over to th
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So sorry I missed this. Hope you had a great day.
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Sorry to hear of your dad's problems hun. Positive energy speeding its way to both of you.
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A very interesting story so far. I only intended to dip in and get a flavour but ended up reading it all. Can't be bad eh? My favourite part is the bit in the wood. The whole creepy atmosphere was right up my street. I hope that's developed later in the story. I'm not usually into the 'school' story but this has more weight and I'm enjoying it a lot. I'll keep an eye on it.
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Actually that one made me laugh. That's the thing though, isn't it. They're failing to connect with a gay audience so they're losing business and that's their punishment. Hilarious
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I love the ritual, how it's all so simple yet so powerful. Gods would I love to see that dragon
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I really like the way you convey information, very naturally. I have noticed your dialogue gets a little bit stilted when you're giving information like this but that's not a problem. I'm glad they're all going to make an offering to the archaeologists. Thomas could have had a major issue about that and i think it will be better with Alex and his mum with them
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Loved it. I had a handfasting and it was very different but the binding was really cool, brought back nice memories. I echo what Dolores said. They are very young, but then love is at its deepest and its hottest when we are young.
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This was such a sweet chapter. I wasn't entirely sure if it would work out like this but it's great that it did. I have a feeling they're going to need each other.
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Twins Marc and Mererid go looking for adventure in a lonely Welsh moor and find a haunted lake. To Meri, the lake was full of enchantment, to Marc it was full of danger.
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The early morning sun danced on calm pools and dew still glistened on the slender stems of grass and reed. The distant forest was little more than a smudge on the horizon and the air was perfumed with the pure scents of nature and a purer sense of freedom. Standing in the middle of all this, taking in as much as his senses could cope with, Marc was feeling as happy as he could ever remember. The freedom alone was intoxicating enough but the thought of what might lie ahead… His sister, on t
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I'm not difficult at all. You can say what you like to me as long as you don't mind me whipping and/or biting you afterwards.
