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Thank you Don't reach for the insulin yet. The angel really isn't that sweet
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Oh yeah, I'm definitely depraved And I love it. I presume the motherfucker you're talking about is Faith. Gotta love him!!!! And, no, I don't think its bad Thank you for your comment
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If I'm keeping you on the edge imagine those two having to wait for a whole week
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The angel was always going to get there in the end. I mean, who can resist an angel?
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I don't think I've ever seen Barbarella, although I've heard of it of course. Poor Pasha really didn't know what to do with the angel for the longest time.
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Hehe, yeah. It's not often your love interest literally falls out of the sky in front of your car
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That was my favourite chapter so far. A deep look inside beautiful Mira (btw how is that pronounced? Meera or Mirra?) You are such a tease. I'm enjoying this story so very much. I'm almost tempted to stop reading until it's finished but I can't help myself
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Thank you. I think you're right. No matter what they might be or do, these two are cute and clueless
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It certainly is. I'm sure Mr Sexy Wings will approve. Thanks for the comments, I love them. They make me smile every time.
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“Don’t you remember anything about where you came from?” The Angel frowned and shook his head. They’d been lying quietly, drugged by the energies they’d raised and the experiences they’d had. He smiled and tentatively touched Pasha’s face. “I want to remember. I want to know who I am and where I came from but…. There’s part of me that doesn’t want to know.” “You don’t? Why?” “Because I don’t want to be anywhere else than here. I don’t want anything to come between you and me and I’m afraid w
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Thank you I'm SO glad you're enjoying my stories. I'd LOVE to find the kind of love I write about. Maybe one day. I truly believe there is a forever man/or woman out there for everyone. It's just a matterof circumstanes as to whether or not we find them
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It was almost as interesting to read the comments as the chapter. It's a natural reaction to react badly to the death of a character you've invested in and readers seem to naturally assume you'll bring them back at some point. Personally, I think that in a story of this kind with the kind of brutality inherent in the circumstances, it's pretty inevitable that someone was going to die at some point. Yes, I'm sorry it was Mira. I adored Mira but still... All I ask is that his death is not in vain and Shay becomes stronger for it. Oh yeah... and revenge would be sweet.
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Thank you for your comment. I get so excited whenever I see someone has commented.I'm glad the story moved you. There are loads of my stories i would like to see continue but I have so many new ideas all the time I just never have a chance to go back and do it
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Thank you Mr sexy wings is SO going to have to go into the story somewhere I don't know if you believe me but I have NO idea where the angel came from or where the story's going. I make it up as I go along So we'll see what happens Thank you again for taking time to comment
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Mr Sexy Wings. I LOVE it. Did he fall from heaven...? Ummm.... Maybeeee Thanks for the comment
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Oh, for sure those men haven't just gone away and there are things the angel needs to remember, and fast, but for now the sweetness goes on as Pasha and the angel explore each other in more ways than one.
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Lukas and Anna’s spare room was huge, at least compared to Pasha’s flat in the city. The bed it contained was king sized and brand new. Pasha carefully laid the angel on it, after Anna had stripped back the covers and spread a towel over the pillows. Twitching the covers back in place over the supine angel Anna took her leave. Pasha barely noticed her go. He sat on the edge of the bed and stared at the angel. Their fingers found each other’s as did their eyes and they remained still and silent,
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“What do you mean ‘I’m yours’?” Pasha snapped. “Don’t be ridiculous. We’ve got some freaky bond and we need to work out some way to break it. I….” “I don’t think we can,” the Angel said miserably. “I think if we try we will hurt each other.” “But we have to try,” Pasha said in desperation. I can’t… react every time you think…. Shit, I feel you.” “And I you. Why do you fight so hard to deny it? I know you desire me. You thrust the feelings on me then deny you have them. Why do you keep denying
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Both her grandmother and grandfather were appalled when, on opening their door to the respectful knock they found a huge bearlike stranger carrying their grandson unconscious and soaked through in his arms. As soon as the lake was mentioned the lectures began. “Haven’t I always told you how dangerous it is there? Why did you think you were forbidden from going there? Now see what you have done…” and these were the milder reprisals. Respectfully Gwyon bore the tirade. First he carried
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Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you like the beginning of the story. I hope the rest won't disappoint
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Minging - unattractive/unpleasant Lush - very attractive/very nice (Fuck he's lush inne? Aww luv, that meal was lush) Mint - very attractive (She's mint (minty, minted) she is) But - mate (applied to just about anyone, usually male as in a'rite but? being a casual greeting) Me ducks - my friend (Ow ye doing me ducks?) Chicken/Chick - term of endearment (C'mere and give us a kiss, chick) fucktard - a really stupid person Hammered - pissed as a rat - very drunk Off his face - very drunk Rat arsed - ratted - very drunk Pissed - very drunk Gob off - speak cheekily./ rant (Oi don't you gob off on me you fucktard) Gob - mouth (she's got a gob on 'er, she 'ave. She'd better shut er gob or she'll be avin a mouthful off me) Mouthful - telling off Turned around and said - said (Ai, she turned around and said she wasn't with 'im but I saw 'er neckin round back) Necking - heavy petting Shum ai (spelled Sut wyt ti (don't ask) ) How are you? Are you alright? Yeah like fuck you are) Cariad (term of affection (literally loved one) Aw cariad, come ere for a cwtch then) Cwtch - cuddle, cupboard under the stairs Bach - little, or term of endearment especially for a youngster Dedoreth - simple minded (She was right dedoreth she was, di'nt know what she was going on about) LOADS MORE
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Chapter 8 - Why Are You Doing This To Me
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Why Are You Doing This To Me
OMG you put me in the same category as Jenna Marbles... Ponche land shark!!! Sorry. Had a Marbles moment I have NO idea how to delete a review. Ask Cia, she'll know. Thank you SO much for your comments. It makes me so excited when someone takes time to do that. I'm so crap at doing it myself -
This is part of my Wednesday Briefs flash fiction group. I will post a 1000 word chunk ever Wednesday until the story is finished When it's done I'll start with Book 2 which may or may not be about angels
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You didn't find it because I just posted it I've been writing flash fiction on my blog and Cia gave me the idea to post here. I post a new chapter of 1000 words every wednesday If you want to read the other flash fiction story, which I've finished you can see it on my blog
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“What do you mean he’s not breathing? He…he’s an angel.” “And you’re an expert on angels now? I don’t know what angels are supposed to do. This is a whole new world to me. Was he breathing before. Do angels breathe? I don’t know what to do.” Pasha was shocked to the core. Lukas and Anna huddled together staring at the angel, who was lying perfectly still. “For the love of God….” Pasha scrambled across the carpet to the angel. A desperate search found a pulse and strong heartbeat and, when Pas
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