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Trouble Plus Trouble.

   (2 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction, Romance,
Sub-genres: Coming of Age, Contemporary Romance

Peter, a sixteen year old Year Eleven student, finds his new High School very different to the one he left.
The people are different and some of the happenings are very different.

Copyright © 2011 Palantir; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (2 members)

  • Action-Packed 0
  • Great Pacing 2
  • Great Characters 2
  • Character Growth 0
  • Dialog / Banter 0
  • Plot Twists 0
  • Beautiful Writing 0
  • Immersive World 1
  • Satisfying Ending 0
  • Fresh / Original 2
  • Counldn't Put It Down 2
  • Suspenseful 2
  • Gave Me Chills 1
  • Funny 2
  • Feel-Good 2
  • Heartwarming 0
  • Emotional Impact 1
  • Thought-Provoking 0
  • Romantic Chemistry 0
  • Smoldering Chemistry 1
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  • Love 3

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Timothy M.

Timothy M. 51,469

· Edited by Timothy M.

   5 of 5 members found this review helpful 5 / 5 members

If you’ve never read any of Palantir’s stories Trouble is a good place to start. Palantir has a style all of his own, easily recognizable by the bantering dialogue, the casual approach to nudity and friendly sex, the disdain for bullies, and the way he makes you laugh at the absurd images forming in your mind as you read.

Peter is a serious, introvert bookworm with no siblings or close friends. Being teased (or ‘stirred’ as Palantir calls it) isn’t something he’s used to or understands. But then Andy and his friends enter Peter’s life and change it completely. They spend a lot of time ‘stirring’ each other, and while it made me cringe at first, just as Peter does, I gradually got used to it and even appreciated the fun and the good intentions.

Almost every single character in the story is portrayed in a realistic manner, so we forget the author is creating an ideal world, where good triumphs over evil, jocks can do ‘gay stuff’ playfully, and friendship and love are driving forces in our lives.

This review is a shorter version of a Featured Story blog review.

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Ticklishboy30

Ticklishboy30 13,415

· Edited by Ajbt2001

   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

This is one of my all time favorite stories. I love how descriptive @Palantir made his characters and places.

Peter and Matthew are an amazing power couple the way they fit in with the other guys while never losing the magic and playfulness that make them lovable and sensitive boys.

Andy and Marty make great best friends and honorary big brothers. It's awesome to see them in protective mode. 

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