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  • 07/02/2011
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Pineapple Juice - 1. Will it ever end?

Will it ever end,

The pain, as he rips the heart from my chest.

These feelings never returned,

My troubles laid to rest?

 

You act as if knowing, with knowledge of nothing.

Let none be known the truth, for judgement shall be thrown.

Let he who is without sin cast the first stone.

 

Judgement is to only be brought by He,

Through Him my thoughts brought peace.

Him, the one which puts my mind at ease.

 

Through Him, the one who judges,

The judgement ends!

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Marzipan

Why does he judge you? Unrequited love always sucks. You should write more poems now that you got started!

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1Coley
On 07/03/2011 01:12 AM, Mark92 said:
Hmmm i get it. and good start I agree with Mars hope you get the bug, :D:boy:
haha we'll see.
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1Coley
On 07/03/2011 01:04 AM, Marzipan said:
Why does he judge you? Unrequited love always sucks. You should write more poems now that you got started!
doesn't it though? and I'll consider it :)
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1Coley
On 07/03/2011 03:18 PM, evergreen said:
Really liked this poem.

You should write some more. I'd definitely be reading them.

thanks Adam...gotta think of something to write about first haha
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Tara00

Whatever it is that I deciphered from this, be it right be it wrong, the poem was still beautiful to read. You have the talent Coley! :) So write more. No one's gonna judge you here.. :hug:

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jamiiewhiite

I really feel the first stanza and especially the second line.

I am not a believer but if God is the final judgment then I think you have nothing to worry about. He will forever give you salvation which is what I am guessing you are seeking. But just remember that he is not the only one to who can judge or give forgiveness. No one but him and yourself can do those things. I believe you must judge and forgive your own self before you can find peace.

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