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New Kid In School - 1. Chapter 1: "That Gloomy Day In March"

I knew in the 5th grade that I was attracted to boys. I don't quite remember what it was that turned me on all of the sudden, but when I was ten years old they became my number one obsession. Well...that and mom's oatmeal cookies. But now, only three years later, I've begun the long and agonizing journey into a full blown frenzy of hormones. I was in the eighth grade and it seemed like every boy in the whole damn school turned me on in some way or another. But it was that gloomy day in March that I met the guy who turned my life upside down.

It was raining outside that morning. I was getting myself ready for school and looking at myself in the mirror. There I stood, Randy Stephens, about 90 pounds of flesh with dark brown hair. My eyes were a piercing blue, but all they saw was a scrawny kid with a button down shirt and no pants on. I finished getting dressed and went on to what I thought was going be a normal day. I was wrong. My first period class was History (how I got stuck with that for a first period class, I'll never know!), and it seemed to be even more boring than usual. It was one of those days that I was glad to sit next to the window so that I could stare out at the falling rain in the school's courtyard. That's when HE walked in.

His name was Ryan. He was about my size, but more defined (or so I assumed). He had short hair that was that strange color between strawberry blond and light brown. His eyes were a sexy hazel brown and were stretched out at the sides. Kind of like Asian eyes but not quite. Anyway, he had just moved into town the day before and was going to transfer into my first period History class! (Another unfortunate schedule planned) He walked up to the front desk and the teacher told him to take a seat right next to me! I almost freaked! Whatever control I had over myself at that moment was gone. I felt an uncontrollable hard on growing in my pants and quickly put my bag in my lap to hide it.

"What's up?" Came a voice from next to me. Colud he be talking to me? No way. I kept fumbling through my bag like I was looking for something while trying to make my boner go away.

"Helloooo....?" Came the voice again. Geez, even his voice was sexy. It was that lustful pitch that only a young kid of thirteen could make, with just a touch of rasp to it. I looked over and locked eyes with the most beautiful guy I'd ever seen in my life!

"um...Hey..." I studdered. He held out his hand and I shook it. "My name's Ryan. What's your's?"

God, did this kid know what he was doing to me? Every word that he spoke made my hard on jump with more ferocity.

"I'm Randy...nice to meet you."

Nice to meet you? I couldn't have come up with anything better than that? I saw a look on his face like he wanted to say something else, but he couldn't quite think of anything. I was speechless at this point, but I seemed to get up some nerve when I saw one of the girls in the back of the class staring at him. Call it jelousy, but after that I had plenty to say. We cliqued instantly. We talked through the entire class, even with the teacher telling us to shut up every so often. At one point, Ryan drew a picture of our History teacher in some kind of spaceman get-up. Behind him was a ship shaped like a penis and a speech bubble that said "Take me to your peter!" We cracked up and were thankfully saved by the bell before getting kicked out of class.

As the day went on, Ryan showed up in three more of my classes. It got so bad that we couldn't even look at each other without laughing. As gorgeous as he was, there was more than sex to be had from this boy...he was a friend. However, there were a couple of times that I phased out and just began staring at his beauty. He had such a firm, yet delicate, appearance. And he had one of those mouths where you were content just with watching it form words without paying attention to them. I tell you, there was one moment in study hall that I had to fight hard to keep from just reaching out and kissing him! But after that, things went even further.

It was as if fate hate given me my first miracle. Ryan rode on the same bus as me after school. He even lived in the same neighborhood. He asked on the bus if he could come over and maybe play a few video games or talk without the interruptions. This made me nervous as all hell, but there was no way that I was going to turn this opportunity down! I still figured him for straight at that time, but I was hoping to get into a wrestling match and maybe get a cheap feel here and there. Hey, I was a kid...everything's erotic when you're a virgin. We talked, had a few sandwhiches that my mom left for me to eat (she works late), and battled out a few hundred bouts of Tekken 3. As hard as I tried though, I couldn't concentrate for more than a minute without staring at him. And a couple of times...I could have sworn that I'd caught him staring back. He was so cute!

Soon, the conversation switched to girls and I figured that I had lost him. I felt my heart sink when he mentioned the 'G' word. Ah well, better luck next time. Besides, there was always hours and hours of endless masturbation. I tried to play along, so I talked about the girls in school that I heard other boys talk about. I thought I was pulling it off rather nicely, but suddenly he got quiet. I looked up and he was giving me this look that melted my soul. It was like he was making love to me without even moving.

"You don't really like girls, do you?" He said.

"What do you mean? I love girls...heh heh...love 'em all." I stumbled. I was having trouble breathing and my hands were shaking. He was still giving me that look. Dammit! That look was just filling me with an overflowing sense of....of.....love!

I figured that I had better do something to break the mood. So I dropped the video game controller and shouted, "Are you calling me a liar punk?" like Clint Eastwood. And I tackled him onto the bed. I was expecting to get a few hands on one of those awesome ass cheeks of his and maybe a grab at his crotch so I could get an idea of what he was 'packing'. But he overpowered me and soon he was on top of me on the floor. I tried to get up, but he had me pinned. I looked up into his eyes, and there he was...giving me the look. Oh no! Don't get hard, don't get hard, don't get hard...! I tried to look away, but he kept following my eyes and staring deep into them. He wouldn't even say anything, he just kept looking at me. I felt a stirring in my loins and couldn't stop it now. I struggled to get up before he noticed, but he held me down by pressing his crotch into mine. A smile broke out on his face and I knew he'd felt it.

What happened next just blew me away! He looked down at me and whispered, "mmmm....there we go." And he began grinding into me slowly. I could NOT believe this was happening! Here I was, with the most gorgeous 13 year old in the world on top of me...and he was loving it! I suddenly let my paranoia get the best of me and figured that I should speak up. Just in case he was 'testing me' to see if I was gay. But as soon as I opened my mouth to speak, he put his hand up to my lips and whispered "Shhhhh..." Then he kissed me.

Thank God I was on the floor, because my knees felt so weak I would have fallen over had I been standing up. His breath was so sweet, his lips so soft...then he snaked his tongue in my mouth and I was lost in his embrace. I let go of all my sanity and simply let my body take over. And take over it did! Seconds later, our sweet kiss had become a rough and tumble tongue lock! He was grinding into me as hard as his muscles would allow and I was pressing into him by lifting my hips up off of the floor. We couldn't take anymore, and I felt an orgasm sent from heaven above on its way to my cock! Just then, the phone rang!!!

I hated to break the little wrestling match that we had going, but we ignored it as long as we could and it was ruining the moment. I picked up the phone frustrated and shouted, "WHAT?!?!" It was my mother. Oops. She told me she'd be late coming home...blah blah blah...dinner's in the fridge...blah blah blah...you know, mother's stuff. I tried to get her to hang up but she just kept talking for like ten minutes! Then I felt Ryan's warm breath over my shoulder. He wrapped two arms around me from behind and began grinding into me again while he kissed and licked the back of my neck. I looked around and noticed that he was completely NAKED!!! The hottest kid on Earth was in my bedroom, butt naked, kissing my neck, and all while I was on the phone with my mother! Could this be happening? Oh if this is a dream, PLEASE don't let me wake up until I get a piece of this kid!

I tried to talk to my mother calmly, but with Ryan basically giving me a hickey and undoing my pants, it was near impossible! That's when he grabbed my 5 inch cock and began stroking it. That's it! I might have been rude, but I just told my mom that I had to go and that was that! I hung up and attacked Ryan from the front. I stood next to his warm naked body and nibbled his collar bone as he proceeded to pull my pants off of me. I kicked them off and wrrapped my arms around him, placing my hands on the soft round globes of his ass. I squeezed and pulled him closer to me (if that were even possible!). We kissed again and he laid me back on the bed. I hated to let go of his ass. It felt so good in my hands. But what he did next felt even better!

He kissed his way down my chest, very slowly. While he was doing that, I felt his cock and balls rub my leg just above the knee. I moaned involuntarily, and I guess he got the message because he started a slow and rythmic grind on my leg while he sucked tenderly at my nipples. Then he kissed down to my belly button, and then...he went for the gold. He swallowed my cock all the way down to the base on the first try! His moist, red lips motioned rythmically on my pole as I watched it disappear into the warmth of his mouth. I was astonished when he looked up at me without missing a stroke. He gave me that look again, but this time it was more intense! I looked into his eyes and was full of so much passion that

I couldn't hold it anymore! I exploded in his mouth with what seemed like 100 spurts of hot teen juice! He tried to swallow it, but there was no way in hell he was going to be able to take all of THIS load! I arched my back and screamed a bit louder than I wanted to! I heard my bones crack and pop as my entire body became as stiff as a board! I almost got a cramp in my leg I was cumming so hard.

He finally pulled off after nursing my spent cock for a few minutes. He climbed up on my chest and waved that delicious piece of circumsized meat in front of me. I devoured it with my tongue going crazy on his cock. He began pumping in and out of my mouth and he started moaning loud enough for the whole neighborhood to hear. His sexy voice, his tool in my mouth, and then me grabbing a handful of those lovely butt cheeks was enough to get me hard again. He began to speed up the pace and he started to lose his rythm...I knew it could be any moment now! I had that quick second of fear go through my mind. What will it taste like? What if it makes me sick? And a billion other questions. But once I felt that beautiful cock expand in my mouth, all I was concerned with was not spilling a drop! He shouted out loud and shoved himself as far as he could possibly go into my mouth while I grabbed those ass cheeks hard enough to leave scars!!! I swallowed the first few jets of jism, but the rest overflowed onto the bed. The force of his orgasm set me off again and I lost another load which spurted up onto Ryan's back!

Both of us were exhausted to say the least. We were out of breath, and our muscles ached. Ryan scooted down next to me and we embraced in a kiss that must have beat anything I've ever seen in any movie ever. We just couldn't stop touching each other, or kissing each other, or holding each other. But it was almost time for my mom to come back and I didn't think that I'd have a fun time explaining me and a strange boy lying naked in each other's arms in my bedroom. So he got dressed, and I did the same. As I walked him to the door, I kept getting one last kiss, one last touch. We just couldn't stop! But he finally made it to the door.

I said goodbye and asked how he knew.

"I didn't..." he said, "...I took a chance. Thank goodness I was right!" Then he flashed me that exceptional grin of his and took off. I couldn't wait for the next day. We had so many more games to play!

All Stories and Original Content Copyright © 1998-2008 by Comicality
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Hot Hot HOt! I love it. Get right to it why don't ya? It will be interesting to see where you go with this. Loveing it. thanks!

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Re-reading the stories again,
I now notice how much the "story telling style" differs from one another. Especially when it comes to the first part of these stories, the whole path until they get together.
Some, like "Jesse 101", are really long, teasing the reader; while entertaining him very well.
And others, like the TWD fanfic, or the excellent "A class by himself", are really nicely told. Every so gently, but not as slowly as the one mentionned above; and I don't know why, but something in this way makes it the perfect balance.
This one though, is a bit too straight-forward for my tastes. Don't take me wrong, I still like the way it's written, the way the story is told; but the "rush" just makes it less entertaining.
You don't have this slow anticipation that builds up in the reader, and personaly I don't really get as much "thrilled" by R&R eventualy sharing their feelings for the first time as I was when it came to Derrick & Tanner, or Jesse and Tristan. I'm just like "yea okay, why not", while other stories made me "OMG ! Eventualy ! That rox !" and eventualy, popping a few champain bottles with my homies to celebrate it.
Well anyway, I'm not even sure anybody hangs in this chapter reviews anymore, but I just felt like giving my reader opinion. Which is still a good one - and it doesn't involve any trunk.

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I read this story once again from the front .this story has conquered my heart I love it can't get enough .

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On 12/17/2015 at 9:56 PM, FieldMan said:

Re-reading the stories again,
I now notice how much the "story telling style" differs from one another. Especially when it comes to the first part of these stories, the whole path until they get together.
Some, like "Jesse 101", are really long, teasing the reader; while entertaining him very well.
And others, like the TWD fanfic, or the excellent "A class by himself", are really nicely told. Every so gently, but not as slowly as the one mentionned above; and I don't know why, but something in this way makes it the perfect balance.
This one though, is a bit too straight-forward for my tastes. Don't take me wrong, I still like the way it's written, the way the story is told; but the "rush" just makes it less entertaining.
You don't have this slow anticipation that builds up in the reader, and personaly I don't really get as much "thrilled" by R&R eventualy sharing their feelings for the first time as I was when it came to Derrick & Tanner, or Jesse and Tristan. I'm just like "yea okay, why not", while other stories made me "OMG ! Eventualy ! That rox !" and eventualy, popping a few champain bottles with my homies to celebrate it.
Well anyway, I'm not even sure anybody hangs in this chapter reviews anymore, but I just felt like giving my reader opinion. Which is still a good one - and it doesn't involve any trunk.

this story cannot be compared to ("Jesse 101").
the coming together of Jesse101 Tristan is more difficult because they had only been able to play youtube, but tristan was also immediately in love with Jesse. With Randy and Ryan it went faster by the immediate personal contact and as one says love also the first look.also a difference are the fights the Randy and Ryan have strong heights and depths.
that makes the story for me so interesting .i love but also the andren stories of cumsy from vampier or zombi is geschakt things.

 

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Oooh @Comicality gurl I hope your notification settings are merciful because you will be getting a LOT of reacts from me! ;) I started reading on Nifty, but GA is much easier on my poor eyes! You captured the first love/teenage hormones thing incredibly well! It's an intoxicating story ❤️ thank you!

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I like Ryan no matter what he looks

like. Comicality  create wonderful peapel. For me Ryan is the best.

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So I read the first stanza and I had this anger boiling up in me to charge @Comicality for copyright; that's my childhood you written about!!! 5th grade to 8th grade, it's so accurate (and I must be shameless to admit that 😅). Well except for the Ryan, of course, the one who turns world upside down. Still this day, I'm waiting for my Ryan, lol.

I'm late to the party but boy, I'm hooked. Can't wait to catch up to the regular readers here. 

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6 hours ago, Joie J. said:

Can't wait to catch up to the regular readers here. 

The stories Arcade Junkies  and Kiss of an Angel track some characters that turn up later.    For Arcade Junkies around New Kid 14 and Angel 1 overlaps  New Kid 38.  I found it really  fun  to binge through the different perspectives, but you do you,  of course.      

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19 hours ago, Mattyboy said:

The stories Arcade Junkies  and Kiss of an Angel track some characters that turn up later.    For Arcade Junkies around New Kid 14 and Angel 1 overlaps  New Kid 38.  I found it really  fun  to binge through the different perspectives, but you do you,  of course.      

Thank you so much @Mattyboy

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On 1/27/2019 at 7:12 AM, Comicality said:

 

This is answer number 4. And it's a real pity that you haven't said thank you for any of the chapters that came before this one. You only show up when it's time to complain. Again...I'm wasting my story writing time answering your entitled comments to chapters that you haven't earned or have ever paid a penny for. So congrats. You just pushed the release of the next chapter back a few days with your comments.

 

I'm sure that everyone here appreciates it. Feel free to leave your email behind so they can tell you how much they enjoy having you point out how much of a pity it is to not receive free entertainment from me. I am a SLAVE to you, after all, right?

Please keep in mind.. the entitled snobs do NOT speak for all of us.. also.. who cares what they think?!?! You are a true artist with your writing!! I will admit.. I don't really have interest in ALL of your stories.. not because they aren't worthy or excellent.. I'm just obsessed with your romantic and funny stuff. I adore you and your beautiful stories.. please don't let the "haters" get to you.. jealousy is ugly.. you are amazing!! I appreciate everything you do for me with your work! Thank you sweetie 😘💕

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On 6/13/2022 at 4:09 PM, Blue Dhalia said:

Please keep in mind.. the entitled snobs do NOT speak for all of us.. also.. who cares what they think?!?! You are a true artist with your writing!! I will admit.. I don't really have interest in ALL of your stories.. not because they aren't worthy or excellent.. I'm just obsessed with your romantic and funny stuff. I adore you and your beautiful stories.. please don't let the "haters" get to you.. jealousy is ugly.. you are amazing!! I appreciate everything you do for me with your work! Thank you sweetie 😘💕

S'ok. That was a younger 'me'. It really doesn't phase me anymore. It makes me feel BETTER, if that makes sense! :P 

If you get someone to ignore you...that's one thing. If you can get them to love you...that's HUGE! But if you can get them to HATE you to the point of being jealous and insecure enough to spend time trying to humiliate you in public to cut you down? LOL! Now that is a feat that only the very BEST can truly pull off! Which means that I'm on my way towards greatness! I'll enjoy the ego stroke. Thanks 'random hater'! Hehehe! 

The harder they work...the better I feel. It's crazy, right?

Don't like me? Bet against me! 

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2 hours ago, Comicality said:

S'ok. That was a younger 'me'. It really doesn't phase me anymore. It makes me feel BETTER, if that makes sense! :P 

If you get someone to ignore you...that's one thing. If you can get them to love you...that's HUGE! But if you can get them to HATE you to the point of being jealous and insecure enough to spend time trying to humiliate you in public to cut you down? LOL! Now that is a feat that only the very BEST can truly pull off! Which means that I'm on my way towards greatness! I'll enjoy the ego stroke. Thanks 'random hater'! Hehehe! 

The harder they work...the better I feel. It's crazy, right?

Don't like me? Bet against me! 

I swear.. you impress me every time. What an honor it is to know you.. at least on here😜 

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On 6/18/2022 at 4:25 AM, Comicality said:

S'ok. That was a younger 'me'. It really doesn't phase me anymore. It makes me feel BETTER, if that makes sense! :P 

If you get someone to ignore you...that's one thing. If you can get them to love you...that's HUGE! But if you can get them to HATE you to the point of being jealous and insecure enough to spend time trying to humiliate you in public to cut you down? LOL! Now that is a feat that only the very BEST can truly pull off! Which means that I'm on my way towards greatness! I'll enjoy the ego stroke. Thanks 'random hater'! Hehehe! 

The harder they work...the better I feel. It's crazy, right?

Don't like me? Bet against me! 

Like many others, I stared reading your stories on NIfty way back in 1995-2005, and I'm glad to be back. Have you ever heard the country song "Lord, it's hard to be humble?" I thought of that one the minute I read "Which means that I'm on my way towards greatness!" hehehe  I agree with @Blue Dhalia, envy is one thing but jealousy is ugly.

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