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    Celethiel
  • Celethiel
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  • 09/11/2014
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2014 - Fall - Scars Entry

The Crow's Fist - 2. I Was Once Strong

I Was Once Strong

Now a cruel shove
Brings me to see
All that I love
Kneel before me

Cutting like a knife
My son screams
My bloody wife
Into my dreams

Why does she bow?
She is no whore
I beg you now
Please do no more

For all I hear
I cannot sleep
Broken in fear
I can only weep

I was once strong
No longer so
Where did I wrong?
To bend so low

Nothing is left
They took it all
I am bereft
Not but to crawl

There is no light
The final blow
The end in sight
Now I shall go

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2014 - Fall - Scars Entry
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Yettie One

So smooth, yet so real. The emotion is alive and dripping off the words and I could almost see a man kneeling weeping as he pondered.

 

That is a stunning poem.

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Celethiel
On 09/12/2014 07:54 AM, Yettie One said:
So smooth, yet so real. The emotion is alive and dripping off the words and I could almost see a man kneeling weeping as he pondered.

 

That is a stunning poem.

^_^ thanx :)
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comicfan

So before the end everything he loves was brought low. You go for the juggler and then don't let go Cele. Painful to imagine such a thing.

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Celethiel
On 09/12/2014 03:15 PM, comicfan said:
So before the end everything he loves was brought low. You go for the juggler and then don't let go Cele. Painful to imagine such a thing.
Well the Theme is scars :evil:
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Bill W

Have you been hanging around Wes Craven? What images. When you lose everything you love, what is left? Very moving.

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Celethiel
On 09/12/2014 07:59 PM, Bill W said:
Have you been hanging around Wes Craven? What images. When you lose everything you love, what is left? Very moving.
thanx, and no, i haven't been hanging with Wes, never even read his books.
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