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  • Celethiel
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  • 09/11/2014
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2014 - Fall - Scars Entry

The Crow's Fist - 3. And We Are Alone

And We Are Alone

It is over now
I ask you why
You broke your vow
For you did lie

She holds their seed
She wants it dead
Who can I plead?
For where you lead

My son so small
He is now lame
Heard not his call
You are to blame

And these my hands
Let them both rot
And fall in sands
For I could not

But you never did
And we are alone
For what you bid
Wish I had known

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2014 - Fall - Scars Entry
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Celethiel
On 09/12/2014 07:57 AM, Yettie One said:
Ok, I am not sure I got the sense of this one as vividly as the other two, but still it is an emotional poem.

Awesome submission, I have to say Celethiel.

:)

Thanx.

Well I developped this on the idea of three different types of pain... the first one is physical...

The second is Emotional...

and the Third is spiritual... he's blaming his god for not saving his family.

Celethiel
On 09/12/2014 03:18 PM, comicfan said:
This one was not as easy to see or understand. Then again poetry isn't always my strong suit. he seems to be blaming his wife for everything and his son is now lame. You have to wonder what was done and why. Still left feeling for the voice of this poem.
he's blaming his god for not saving his family from what happened in the last chapter.
Celethiel
On 09/12/2014 08:07 PM, Bill W said:
I'm not sure I understood this one. Obviously his wife had broken their vows, but did she cripple or kill their child? Or did he blame his child's condition on her dishonoring him? I feel his pain, I just can't quite define it.

I also apologize for the multi posts to the last poem. Not sure if it was my computer of the site that caused the problem.

last 2 poems actually :P

he is blaming his god for not saving his wife and kid from the last poem. thereby loosing his faith....

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