Jump to content
  • Join Gay Authors

    Join us for free and follow your favorite authors and stories.

    Palantir
  • Author
  • 4,307 Words
  • 3,559 Views
  • 10 Comments
Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 

Mparntwe. - 18. Chapter 18

Red Fungus.

MPARNTWE Chapter 18.

***

"They can speak to him whenever they like? Oh no! We'll never get Akama away from the InterWeb."

Jarra had just told Jarli about the boys interaction with Yirgella.

"I can get Yirgella to limit their time if you like."

"No, I don't really mean that. It will we wonderful, especially for Akama. He seems to be particularly interested in AIs and he was quite upset when our project was destroyed."

"It seems to me that he's interested in everything. He was very concerned because one of his teachers has a negative attitude to AIs but talking to Yirgella and Mirri has changed that."

"Which teacher?"

"They said his name was Jadilpa."

"He's a very good teacher so we need to do more work in spreading the understanding and benefits of an AI. Do you have any idea how long it will be before the help from Alkere reaches us?"

"Hasn't Baradin told you?"

"He says he doesn't know."

"I think it will either be in three or four weeks or six or seven. Yirgella has priorities for everything at Alkere and Mparntwe first but I know he's got new plans for all three AI projects."

"Tell me.... If you can."

"Well, I'm fairly certain he'll help Darwin first because it's our transport hub and the first Vac-trains are going there, but Birringurra will definitely be next. He's going to provide an excavating machine so your AI project can be located one or two kilometers underground, and a defence system which he'll run till your own AI can take over. Professor Allerton will arrive with equipment and most of the Project staff to help things happen quickly."

"Staff as well as equipment? That's going to make a huge difference to us because there's now a great deal of understandable fear about involvement in any AI project and we're having real trouble replacing the people we lost.."

Jarra suddenly understood how big a set back to the development of AIs the attack really was. With people worried that any involvement would be a threat to their lives no wonder Yirgella was taking almost extreme defensive measures.

"They won't worry when they find out how well they'll be protected. Yirgella's new defence system is the best in the world. They won't be able to even fire any missiles."

"He's providing the same assistance to Darwin and Normanton?"

"Yes, and to the Australian Overgovernment in Canberra and Freedom in New Zealand as well. He wants to have other AIs functioning as soon as."

"He must have huge resources to be so generous with his help."

"Most of that comes from exporting construction materials and you'll be able to do the same when you get your NanoFactory working."

"Is it difficult to negotiate with Yirgella? That will be my responsibility with our new AI when he starts functioning."

Jarra smiled.

"You shouldn't really ask me because I'm completely spoilt and whenever I want something he just organises it for me. Baradin is best to tell you because he represents Mparntwe Council but I don't think they've ever had any difficulties. They get lots of surprises with the project he takes on but they're all good surprises."

"Barega told me that Yirgella built a swimming pool just for Mirrigan. Is that right?"

Jarra laughed.

"We call it Mirri's pool because no one else uses it much yet and Yirgella did prioritise it to make Mirri happy, but it's really part of the facilities he's building so staff and other people can live at Alkere. Eventually it will be a functioning Community."

"Amazing. And things like that will happen here I'm sure."

"They will, and when your AI becomes aware make sure you see him as often as you can and get to know him really well.

***

Mirri was wonderful in the Corroboree and the three days with Karmai was packed with interesting activities but, despite following all his relaxation and rest routines carefully, the five weeks of extended effort finally caught up with Jarra and when he returned to Mparntwe his doctor decreed a quiet time for at least a week, longer if necessary, with a regime of very carefully measured activity, extended rest, sleep, and no stress. He hated it. So much was happening at Alkere and here but it was like the time when his body was making its adolescent adjustments and there was no other sensible option. At least it was only a week and not months.

***

"What's been happening?"

"My major research partner has been on retreat and I have some interesting research papers gathered for him.

Welcome back to Alkere, Jarra. I've missed the stimulus of your ideas. Many things have happened but mostly by degree rather than by innovation."

"Sorry, Yirgella. I've been frustrated by not knowing much about what's going on."

"Your doctor insisted and I agreed.

Thanks to the cooperation of Burnu and his work team the rapid construction of the new Solar Array has sped up the development of all our projects. Have a look at what's happened with the Array and you'll understand why."

Jarra's week off had extended to ten days and though he'd spoken to Yirgella many times the doctor's embargo had put all Alkere project matters off limit and his anticipation and curiosity really was frustrating him. The screen image changed to a representation of the array progress and Jarra stared in surprise.

"They've done all that in two weeks?"

"Burnu increased the number of construction teams from nineteen to thirty and they worked so well we've been able to supply four of our big vacuum tunnel excavators for the Eastern Seaboard network. In two more weeks we'll do the same for the Melbourne to Perth link and Baradin informs me the Overgovernment is impressed and quite excited."

"Has much happened with the Darwin AI project? Jarli was asking me when the Birringurra project would start."

"The excavation work at all five sites will be finished within four days and Professor Allerton and our staff will start helping Darwin with their installation. The professor should arrive at Birringurra in five weeks time. Then move to Normanton six weeks after that. He then plans to return here for at least two months before assisting with the Canberra project."

"Five sites? You mean the Freedom one in New Zealand? Baradin said they weren't going ahead."

"Not for a while. They don't feel safe. No, there's a secret site which only our Mparntwe Council knows."

Jarra laughed.

"It's here isn't it? You like having a backup and I expected you to start something ages ago."

"Clever clogs! Yes, the tunnelling and structural work was completed a week ago and we've been installing equipment ever since."

Jarra had no idea what clogs were, let alone how clever they might be.

"Where is it?"

Jarra manipulated the schematic diagram which appeared. Five kilometers to the north, and 1200 meters underground an extensive facility was taking shape. Branching upward were four more tunnels, one vertical and the others ascending diagonally to diverse surface locations.

"Why are there so many tunnels to the surface?"

"A security measure which I don't expect we'll need. I've built an alternate access from here as well with the surface exit four and a half kilometres from the one above."

"And you'll be able to transfer yourself if you need to?"

"Of course. Professore Allerton's processor team will help me have that ready before they leave for Darwin."

"The professor must be exhausted?"

"Weary, but not exhausted. He's very good at delegating responsibility."

Jarra asked general questions about the backup site but left a closer study for later. He wanted a better understanding of the overall picture.

"What else is happening? What did you mean by degree?"

"We have no major new projects but our mainstays have ramped up production with the availability of extra energy. The vacuum train will be repaired and functioning next week and your 3-D printer production has increased by nearly thirty percent. The demand for Professor Allerton's improved processors is so high he's instituted a quota system to ensure a fairer distribution around the world until more NanoFactories can help increase production."

That meant a new AI is because Yirgella's capabilities were already stretched to operate the current two NanoFactories.

"The biggest degree change though is with our construction materials. Engineers around the world have realised that the extra strength and quality is changing their industry, basically with lower costs for standard work but also with new design possibilities, and the demand has tripled in the last few months."

"How can that be? I thought our factories were already struggling to keep up... And what about the transport problem?"

"Our output depends on the energy supply so the new array has allowed a related increase. The full current demand will only be met when the geothermal energy is available. The transport system will cope when the Darwin vacuum tunnel is operational but by then I expect the orders will have more than tripled again."

"Why is it so much?"

"In fact it isn't much at all. Our current production represents only two percent of the world total. By using thirty percent of the geothermal energy we could lift that to approximately twelve percent but that will be up to the Council.

Jarra, the world population of over thirty five billion is increasing by almost one billion people each year and the demand for construction material is quite voracious."

Jarra understood that. He'd built a good overview when the materials factory was first started.

"I meant why are they suddenly wanting our materials instead of from other sources?"

"It's the extra strength and quality I mentioned. I've been constantly refining our production techniques and engineers round the world have spread the word about the superior properties for us."

"What's happened with those observers in Alice Springs? They must know you're alive by now."

"We lifted our secrecy as soon as the defence system was in place, so they knew almost immediately. Their activities have provided a great deal of useful information about their employers."

"What activities?"

"Observations mostly. We let them visit the Alkere Surface Works and after a few days they initiated a spy fly invasion with a new type which they probably expected would penetrate our security."

"Have they done anything dangerous?"

"Not these people. Their task is to gather information and until the attack in eleven days time we're giving them a fairly free hand."

From Yirgella's unconcerned manner Jarra presumed it must be some kind of sabotage attempt.

"An attack against the Project power supply?"

"No, a direct attack again with even greater destructive capability. Ten aircraft are being prepared at different locations with upgraded stealth ability and a range of missile types."

Jarra was shocked.

"Ten aircraft?"

"Yes they believe they'll be making sure of success this time with the extra power and numbers."

"But you don't even sound worried?"

"Because there IS nothing to worry about. I've gained access to the specifications of every aircraft and developed methods to take control as soon as they enter Australian airspace. They won't come within a thousand kilometers of Alkere."

"And the pilots won't be able to use some kind of manual override?"

"They can try, but all their instrumentation will be malfunctioning or registering imminent failure. They'll be only too happy to land at Darwin."

"What will happen to them then?"

"That's up to the Australian Overgovernment."

"What about the people organising it?"

"Again, that will be up to the Overgovernment, but at an appropriate time I will be publishing the details of the people involved and all their commands and actions with every government and international justice body."

Jarra thought about that.

"You're not going to do anything yourself? Not even to the ones who killed Durrebar?"

"I won't harm anyone, Jarra. If I take an action which directly kills even one person it will change the way people view Intelligences like myself for ever. I want humanity to understand that I refuse to harm or control anyone."

Whoo! That was the most powerful statement Jarra had ever heard Yirgella make.

"No one at all? What if they make a direct attack on you and the only way for you to survive is to kill them?"

"Not even then.

Anyone trying to penetrate my defences though will be aware of their deadly nature and will doing so by their own volition. If they knowingly jump into the fire it won't be my responsibility for the result."

"So that's why you're making all the planes land at Darwin instead of blowing them up when they attack?"

"Primarily, yes, but other advantages will be the evidence they contain and the warning message their capture will send. I would also prefer not to have missiles exploding in the skies above Alkere and Mparntwe. My assessments indicate this approach will delay any further direct attack by at least six months."

"You think they'll keep attacking?"

Jarra thought they'd have to be crazy to attack someone who could control any aircraft or equipment that was sent.

"I'm certain of it."

"Will you just keep taking over their planes?"

"No, because I probably won't be able to. They'll certainly modify their equipment to be independent of external electronic control. Instead I plan to retaliate pre-emptively."

"That sounds impressive. How would you do that without hurting anyone?"

"Everyone involved will be bombarded with messages about the futility of trying. Every pilot and crew member will be warned almost every time they see a screen that they are choosing to fly to certain death, and the organisational structure with details of all personnel, locations and equipment will be made known all round the world."

Jarra spent the rest of the morning catching up with the details of progress with the major projects, then after a long midday rest took the personal carrier on a tour of the new facilities which were now under way or completed. In a few more months at this rate, there would be a fully functional community with the services for sustaining over 20,000 people.

He visited the new Alkere terminal, it would be great when the Vac-train started up again, and was then whisked along the five kilometers to check out the new backup site. Then after another rest, looked over the scientific papers Yirgella had found for him.

***

Jarra settled into his routine of four days a week at Alkere and three at Mparntwe and became so focused and intent on his magnetic field and energy studies that the drama of the retaliation against Yirgella was mostly buffered from his attention.

Collusion by Yirgella and those around him also gave the impression that the actions were remote and quite insignificant when in fact there was international turmoil and great pressure brought on the Australian Overgovernment to rule against the existence of any uncontrolled AI.

Those demands fell on deaf ears though because of Baradin's work in introducing the relevant decision-makers to Yirgella and helping build their understanding of his nature and the benefits he was bringing to the whole continent.

The start-up of the Vac-train also added to the feeling that everything was running as it should, especially as Mirri, who loved using it, turned up at Alkere more often and dragged Jarra everywhere with him to explore all the new things which kept appearing in the underground domain. It wasn't really dragging because Jarra was interested anyway, and it was more interesting to see things for real rather than as images on a screen. He certainly wouldn't have explored the way Mirri did with his eagerness to delve into every nook and cranny, but it was always fun because Mirri'is explorer mode was contagious.

There was always something new to see too, since Yirgella was developing all sorts of specialised areas.

Two days ago they'd found a huge cavern with a complete NanoFactory sitting idle and stores of material piled into the distance for nearly half a kilometre. The personal carrier got a real workout when Mirri turned their movement between the various drums and stacks of materials into a mixture of hide and seek, catch me if you can, and I'll jump out in surprise you when you think I'm somewhere else.

If Mirri really wanted to hide Jarra would have had no hope of finding him because his speed and awareness of his surrounds was almost uncanny. He wanted to be caught or chased though, and his head would pop into view, something would bump against something else for a sound clue, or, most often, there would be a peal of Mirri laughter and the chase would start.

Today they were at the end of a long corridor and looking at a sign which said they were about to enter an environmental diversification reserve.

"What is here, JJ? Can we explore?"

"It's something about plants, Mirri, so I think it could be very interesting."

Jarra was rather surprised in fact. This wasn't a project Yirgella had said anything about and he looked to the nearby display screen, there was always a display screen somewhere close, for Yirgella's comment.

"There are only two reserves as yet, Jarra, a rainforest and a swampland, and you can explore as much as you like from the designated path or the little observation boats."

"There are boats for us, Yirgy?"

"Yes, Mirri, they're little electric boats which will glide you gently wherever you like without disturbing the water very much. If you are a good explorer you might even find the swan's nest."

"We will find it."

Jarra laughed. They would certainly find it. They wouldn't be leaving till they did now that Mirri's explorer skills had been challenged.

Mirri opened the door and they went into a buffer room with panels showing temperature, humidity and other general information about the status of the area ahead.

"Look, Mirri. It says there will be rain in fifteen minutes from now. If we're still inside we'll get wet."

"Not rain. Rain is outside."

"There must be sprinklers in the roof to make it seem like rain."

Mirri opened the next door and Jarra gave his personal carrier a squirt of speed to keep up with the eager explorer.

Wow! This was amazing and they both stared at the lush green growth of the scene before them. Mirri looked up, looking for sprinklers of course and watching to see them start the inside rain. There was no screen just here in this special environment so Jarra used the little Infopad on the personal carrier.

"Why is the ceiling so high, Yirgella? The ferns won't reach up anywhere near that far."

"I've made it forty meters to allow for eventual growth of medium-size trees and give a semblance of uneven terrain. The area extends two hundred meters ahead with a width of a hundred and fifty meters and the path you will follow wind's hither and thither to give access to all the gullies, mounds and other features the team has designed in. All in all the path length totals 3.4 kilometers and you'll definitely need your personal carrier."

"What team?"

"Each area has a team involved in planning and research. This rainforest currently has seventeen people working with it but when our Environmental Research Center is ready the numbers will greatly increase.

"Is this part of the University you're building?"

"No, the main University is closer to the community living area. There will be links of course but the focus will be on research rather than teaching."

Mirri darted off because something had caught his interest.

"You said as yet? How many areas will there be altogether?"

"We have plans for thirteen at the moment but there will be more when the opportunities for specialised research become known."

"Why are you building them down here? Wouldn't it be better to have them where they naturally occur?"

"Partly for convenience but mainly to manage all the micro controls. Every square meter of this rainforest can be differentiated with regard to conditions of light, moisture, temperature, sustenance or whatever ever else we'd like to impose. Your immediate vicinity, for example, is designed as an area for studying a wide range of fungi and a hundred meters further in is a section for stimulating the growth of soil microorganisms by different methods."

"JJ, look what I found."

Explanations as to how and why this had all happened so quickly would come later. Mirri had called.

Another small squirt of power took the personal carrier along the narrow track to where Mirri was on his knees and examining something closely. Jarra's intention had been to remain relaxed and seated because of the distance and time Yirgella had warned about but, oh my, he was definitely joining Mirri for a closer look this time. Scattered here and there with striking flashes of red color were groups of fungus. Mirri's eyes were wide with wonder and so were Jarra's as soon as he knelt to take in the intricate lattice crowns on these strange growths.

"JJ, they are beautiful. What plants are they?"

"They are not really plants, Mirri. They're fungus. Like mushrooms, but I don't know their name. Yirgy will tell us if he's watching."

Yirgella was watching and the Infopad on the personal carrier showed a picture and information.

"It's called a craypot fungus."

"Craypot?"

"I don't know either, Mirri."

Yirgella was listening as well because more information flashed on the Infopad screen.

"A craypot was a cage to catch crayfish and it was hollow with holes all around to let freshwater in."

"We let the crayfish go."

Attention moved a few meters to another cluster of red fungus and again they dropped to their knees for a close look.

"These are called red starfish fungus. Remember the starfish we saw at the ocean?"

Silly question. Mirri didn't forget explorer things and he didn't answer anyway because he was gently tracing the radiating red arms on one of the fungi. Jarra watched the same little ritual repeated with two more fungi and was so taken with the intensity of it he did the same himself.

Mirri's laughter peeled out. What now? Mirri's attention had moved to another group of red fungus and Jarra's smile followed straight away.

"Funny shape. Has it got a funny name?"

Jarra checked and smiled again.

"You're right, Mirri. It has got a funny name. Two funny names. Its proper name is phallus Rubicondus and it's ordinary name is red stinkhorn."

The scientific name needed some explanation.

There were several more reddish coloured fungi and then, moving along the track, they stopped every few meters to examine new varieties with new colors and shapes.

The light started to dim and Jarra checked the little screen for a reason.

"Watch for the glow of the ghost fungus when it's fully dark, Jarra, but tell Mirri not to touch as they are quite toxic."

"Yirgy is making it dark so we can see something special but you mustn't touch because it could make you sick."

Mirri nodded in the gloom and pointed to a cluster of fungi. Jarra wondered why they were special but then the gloom changed to complete dark.

"Green lights. Are they magic, JJ?"

Jarra knew about bioluminescence from the InterWeb but this was his first encounter with the real thing. Just as well Yirgella had given the warning about touching because the soft green glow was fascinating and very tempting.

"Some animals can make their own light, Mirri, but I didn't know a fungus could. It's not magic but it feels like it."

Mirri leaned against Jarra, he wasn't keen about full darkness, but a soft happy hum sounded till Yirgella brought the light back.

A tree fern glade was their next favorite place but they didn't stay very long because the swan's nest was in Mirri's mind and he was eager to find it.

Near the end of the rainforest area the track went through a muddy section and Jarra pretended he was stuck and needed a push. Mirri rushed to help of course and then, when Jarra spun the wheels and sprayed mud all over him, delighted in calling him a tricker.

The swamp land area was a whole new adventure and Mirri's exploring skills were really put to the test with the profusion of reed-beds, water channels, shallow expanses and small islands making it feel like they were negotiating their way through a maze. He wouldn't give up though and eventually he found the mound of reeds and grassy material tucked away behind one of the little islands. They both wondered why an empty nest was special but then quick eyes saw movement in the nearby reeds.

"JJ, look. There are babies."

And there were, lots of them, and even more surprisingly the big black parent, with the eight little ones following, was swimming towards the boat. Jarra grabbed the controls, ready to move in case the parent was aggressive, but Mirri just held out an inviting hand and to Jarra's surprise the convoy swam closer and closer.

Aha, this was why Yirgella had emphasised the swan's nest, and this was the reason for the container of unusual food they'd found when they checked the various pieces of equipment in the boat.

"Here, Mirri, feed them with this."

The little cygnets converged and one of them even scrambled right onto Mirri's hand in its eagerness to get at the food he was holding. Jarra tossed morsels to the parent who was closely supervising the squabble and confusion as the fluffy chicks scrambled for the treats on offer.

Mirri's song joined the squeaks of the soft grey cygnets.

***

End of chapter 18.

I was quite awed at the images of the different fungi that Jarra and Mirri encountered and in case you'd like to do a web-search I've listed the names of the four particular ones mentioned.
Craypot fungus - colus pusillus.
Red starfish fungus - Aseroe rubra.
Red stinkhorn - phallus rubicundus.
Ghost fungus - omphalotus nidiformus.

If your interest has been caught then the three websites below display, rather magnificently, a broader range of Australia fungi.
http://www.thisiscolossal.com/2015/05/radically-diverse-australian-fungi-photographed-by-steve-axford/
https://www.flickr.com/photos/blackdiamondimages/sets/72157601716027470/
http://www.photographsofaustralia.com/Australian_fungi_photos_pg1.html
Copyright © 2015 Palantir; All Rights Reserved.
  • Like 16
  • Love 3
  • Wow 1
Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
You are not currently following this author. Be sure to follow to keep up to date with new stories they post.

Recommended Comments

Chapter Comments

Very well done, the mix of "tech" and personal interaction is appropriate and I can conceive how easy it would be to forget and solely concentrate on one to the detriment the other. Mirri's enthusiasm is always infectious and the perfect foil to Jarra, the calm studious one. I am always eagerly awaiting the arrival of the next instalment of this tale (dare I say Epic). Thank you very much for sharing.

  • Like 1
  • Love 1

This chapter has a split personality: Yirgi gets Jarra caught up on all the new stuff,
then the boys go exploring Yirgella's secret gardens. I searched each of the Aussie
fungi as I saw them mentioned. Then you list some of the same sites I found. Fungi
have always interested me, but ours in North America are different. I've never seen
one here glow. Some do smell bad though. I enjoyed the chapter as always.

  • Like 1
  • Love 1
On 06/12/2015 08:21 PM, Dathi said:

Very well done, the mix of "tech" and personal interaction is appropriate and I can conceive how easy it would be to forget and solely concentrate on one to the detriment the other. Mirri's enthusiasm is always infectious and the perfect foil to Jarra, the calm studious one. I am always eagerly awaiting the arrival of the next instalment of this tale (dare I say Epic). Thank you very much for sharing.

Thanks Dathi, lol - after your review of chapter 17 I was much more conscious of that mix and I think it was almost too obvious.

  • Like 1
On 06/13/2015 06:37 AM, Stephen said:

This chapter has a split personality: Yirgi gets Jarra caught up on all the new stuff,

then the boys go exploring Yirgella's secret gardens. I searched each of the Aussie

fungi as I saw them mentioned. Then you list some of the same sites I found. Fungi

have always interested me, but ours in North America are different. I've never seen

one here glow. Some do smell bad though. I enjoyed the chapter as always.

Split personality? I guess you mean the contrast between the technical developments and Jarra and Mirri's adventures.

The area where I live has pockets of rainforest and lots of unusual fungi and that's what prompted that adventure.

The black swans are everywhere there is water in Australia.

Yirgella's environmental areas are meant to be one of the precursors to the dolphin reaches of Attunga.

  • Like 1

Yet another awesomely good chapter, Palantir! I appreciate the way you set this one up, giving Jarra both the logical and emotional support he needs in his life. We need to remdmeber that however smart he may be, he is still a teenager, with those needs and drives everyone has during those years. Yirgella and Mirri are the outward manifestations of his inner self, and it is clear that a person can only thrive if both mind and spirit are balanced and encouraged. Further, Yirgella is doing the same for his community. By doing and develiping as he is, Yirgella will allow a fuller existence for future generations, giving them the tools to expand to new horizons.

 

And yet, these two are also characters in their own right, and every chapter which appears makes me view the world around me more intently, and with greater enjoyment. Within a few words, whatever mood I was in is altered to one of peace and happiness...I can't help but feel the happiness of Mirri at the simple pleasures around him, and the satisfaction that Yirgella can make it possible.

 

Thank you so much for writing this story and making my day that little bit more special.

  • Like 1
  • Love 1
On 06/13/2015 10:38 AM, ColumbusGuy said:

Yet another awesomely good chapter, Palantir! I appreciate the way you set this one up, giving Jarra both the logical and emotional support he needs in his life. We need to remdmeber that however smart he may be, he is still a teenager, with those needs and drives everyone has during those years. Yirgella and Mirri are the outward manifestations of his inner self, and it is clear that a person can only thrive if both mind and spirit are balanced and encouraged. Further, Yirgella is doing the same for his community. By doing and develiping as he is, Yirgella will allow a fuller existence for future generations, giving them the tools to expand to new horizons.

 

And yet, these two are also characters in their own right, and every chapter which appears makes me view the world around me more intently, and with greater enjoyment. Within a few words, whatever mood I was in is altered to one of peace and happiness...I can't help but feel the happiness of Mirri at the simple pleasures around him, and the satisfaction that Yirgella can make it possible.

 

Thank you so much for writing this story and making my day that little bit more special.

Whoo! Well, this review certainly put a smile on my face. Thank you CG.

It's absolutely heartening to hear that Jarra and Mirri (Mirri especially) are touching the hearts and minds of a number of readers.

I hadn't really thought of Yirgella and Mirri as outward manifestations of Jarra - but I guess, to a degree, we're all partial reflections of the important people in our lives.

lol - Yirgella is just getting started.

  • Like 1
Guest mssri

Posted

I love seeing Yirgella taking care of the multiple sides of Jarra's needs and desires as well as apparently those of the human family.
Crowded around by computers, reports, and other things mundane, I am reminded through your writing to take note of the magic of life (and of living) round about me if I would just look. And I am reminded of something that I think we human beings have been forgetting: we have need of each other ... even the fungus.
Thank you for the richness of this chapter.

On 06/14/2015 03:27 AM, mssri said:

I love seeing Yirgella taking care of the multiple sides of Jarra's needs and desires as well as apparently those of the human family.

Crowded around by computers, reports, and other things mundane, I am reminded through your writing to take note of the magic of life (and of living) round about me if I would just look. And I am reminded of something that I think we human beings have been forgetting: we have need of each other ... even the fungus.

Thank you for the richness of this chapter.

Yes, Mssri, I take it as a kind of article of faith that the Artificial Intelligences in the story have a beneficial approach to humankind.

I am unashamedly gratified by your comments about what you see in my writing. I will claim they are a gift from Mirri to all of us.

  • Like 1
View Guidelines

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now


  • Newsletter

    Sign Up and get an occasional Newsletter.  Fill out your profile with favorite genres and say yes to genre news to get the monthly update for your favorite genres.

    Sign Up
×
×
  • Create New...