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A more fitting end I would have difficulty imagining, I was so very pleased with Mallex's demise. Very well done and thank you for sharing your story.

Mongrels that prey on children and the mentally challenged have no place among the living. I do hope dear Author that these ones are going to arrive at a sticky end. In all other respects an awesome tale that is very well written.

A little often is better than the barren looking alternative, counting pebbles on the driveway or blades of grass in the fields. Lots of both here.

I was almost ready to book an optometrist and a psychiatrist, much relief to realise that it is just "Murphy" having a lend.

Goths are cool and do not change your style for anyone except yourself. Awesome main characters so far well done and thank you for sharing your tale.

Excellent chapter I am enjoying this tale very much. Thank you for sharing and very well done. Please continue to write as you have an interesting style that is very refreshing. Well done.

I knew there would not be too long of a delay, low and behold, awsesomeness and bliss! A very interesting premise and I am excited to see how this tale unfolds. Thank you for sharing this tale and well done.

An awesome tale thank you. It is far too short for my liking but I understand that a piece of art has a limit. Well done and I have enjoyed reading this tale.

As a PERN fan I have enjoyed your short stories and this is looking like being a longer tale I am eager to see where you take it. My only concern is that the estate of Anne Mccaffrey may be unhappy with your writting about PERN. Me, I am all for it very well done so far and I am hoping to see much more. Thank you very much for sharing.

Aye give him the old black spot, sort the mongrel out perminantly.

What a shame, I was hoping to see a Yard Arm decoration appear beyond the twelve mile mark. Thank you for sharing thsi heart-warming saga.

Oops! Back tp the tower to find more information, this is shaping up to be fun. Thank you for sharing this saga and very well done.

Poor Gus LOL that was mean

Fastingabulous! A most excellent chapter, thank you. A well crafted battle scene and a clever way to prevent the other demons from gaining more energy. Well done.

We, (well mostly I) am wondering who is beddding down in the garage space? Curious I sense an addition to the number of inhabitants in this here tale. Well potentially anyway! Thank you for sharing this enchanting tale.