Dathi

Another awesome chapter, I find the description of some of the First Australian culture and practices very interesting. Thank you for these insights along with the very exciting story, very well done. Dathi

Another excellent chapter, although I am feeling a vindictive streak appearing because I really want to see Geston get his comeuppance well and truly. Thank you for sharing you story well done mate.

I discovered you story on another site and read the first two chapters there, I was pleased to see you publishing here (I monitor this site very much more frequently). I am thoroughly enjoying this story and am hoping that there is much more to come. Being a Skyrim player I found that the references were easier to understand as I had a point of reference already in my head. These characters are nicely developed and the story line is sound, very well done and thank you for sharing this story. Dathi

Another good and sound chapter, I mean they cannot all be outstanding and amazing. Laying ground work and stabilizing are important too. Thank you for sharing this story.

Lime Toothpaste?? Eww! Thanks I will continue with good old porridge with a little milk and berry jam. Another intriguing chapter, thank you.

Awesome the Far Seer is shining forth again. A thoroughly enjoyable chapter and I am eagerly awaiting future developments. Thank you for sharing your tale, I know that I will enjoy the journey.

Just one point and it is on the order of preference. The Honourable Deputy Administrator should come first in the address ahead of the Shire President, being as it is a technical regal appointment. Well that is my understanding of that process, however I am prepared to be corrected if wrong. Otherwise I am enjoying this tale immensely. Thank you for sharing. D.

Okay I'm hooked! This was an excellent start and I am eagerly awaiting future chapters to see how your story develops. Thank you very much for sharing you tale.

A very interesting start I am keen to see where this develops. Very well done and thank you for sharing your story with us.

This has me intrigued, sound start and I am looking forward to seeing how you develop this tale. Thank you for sharing and well done so far.

Fun tale and lots of laughs, just not sure I like being reminded that I remember the song when it first came out. LOL

A very intriguing start, I am certainly looking forward to seeing where you take this. Thank you for sharing this story.

A very good start captivating while focused. Slightly thin on some detail, ship name, class, dimensions and crew compliment as examples. I am looking forward to reading more of this tale as it evolves. Thank you very much for sharing this with us. D.

Exciting start and I have to say that I am eagerly awaiting future chapters to see how your tale unfolds. Thank you for sharing this tale.