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Silently speaking; Poetry collection - 4. Scribblings (Part 1)

This are the scribbling of a 14 year me...not really written as poem. I tried to shape it into a poem when I was 16 (when I actually started writing)...there are quite a few of them, so I divided it into parts

CRIME

 

Tired of looking at their retreating backs

For work, or study, or parties;

They never have time

Wanting to spend

A moment together, is it a crime?

 

JUST US AGAIN

 

Woke up to greet the usual view

An empty house and a note, so that I knew

They'll be late again; that was nothing new!

 

Made some toast and juice

and walked back to my room

surrounded in it's usual gloom.

 

I opened the window, and felt the dazzling ray

Letting it kiss away the pain

I raised my glass to it, smiling, its just us again!

(here 'their' is referred to my parents)
It's a bit amateurish, but I hope you all enjoy it!!
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Just now, Headstall said:

You wrote Just Us Again at the age of fourteen? Wow. Heartbreaking and powerful. I sensed... no... I felt the resigned loneliness. Wow again. It is so clear you were always meant to be a poet :hug: ... cheers... Gary....

Oh Thank you so much Gary...Yeah, you see my dad was more than half the year outta house, n my sister left when I was 11 and my mum was well always busy with herself unless my grades are falling that is...(she use to get quite brutal at those times :/ )...so I guess staying in home alone, doing homework and no one to talk to maybe did the trick :P 

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2 minutes ago, Aviana said:

Oh Thank you so much Gary...Yeah, you see my dad was more than half the year outta house, n my sister left when I was 11 and my mum was well always busy with herself unless my grades are falling that is...(she use to get quite brutal at those times :/ )...so I guess staying in home alone, doing homework and no one to talk to maybe did the trick :P 

Our experiences help mold us... I'm sorry yours were not ideal... I understand that only too well... but if it helped you give voice the way you do with your words, then some good came from it :) 

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1 hour ago, Headstall said:

Our experiences help mold us... I'm sorry yours were not ideal... I understand that only too well... but if it helped you give voice the way you do with your words, then some good came from it :) 

Wow...I never thought it like that...true I wouldn't have started writing if I didn't experience it...N you are right our experience does mold us, n make us who we are!

N I knew that you will understand... thankz for your words:):)

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